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syed bilal armaan
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by syed bilal armaan » Wed Oct 12, 2005 7:54 am
Dostoun app ney unwan"KHUSHBOO" par bahut acche ashar likhe. Ab pesh hai ek nay unwan "SABA "app is unwan par bhi apne pasandida ashar likhiye.lijye main yahan se agaz kar hoon.
Intezaar-e-SABA raha barsoun
Ek dareecha khulla raha barsoun
Shummu
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by Shummu » Wed Oct 12, 2005 4:27 pm
khushbu bataa rahi hai ke wo raaste meiN hai
mauj-e-sabaa ke haath meiN us ka suraaG hai
Koi pooche humse hamaari haalat ka sabab
to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai
Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
Na Gham jaata hai na khushi aati hai
Shummu
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by Shummu » Wed Oct 12, 2005 4:29 pm
khushbu bataa rahi hai ke wo raaste meiN hai
mauj-e-sabaa ke haath meiN us ka suraaG hai
Koi pooche humse hamaari haalat ka sabab
to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai
Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
Na Gham jaata hai na khushi aati hai
Abdullah Nazir
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by Abdullah Nazir » Thu Oct 13, 2005 9:15 pm
baad-e-Sabaa ke haathouN yeh pahoncha payaam-e-gul
khushboo hei aaj tak bhii mire intizaar meiN.
Nazir.
Abdullah Nazir
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by Abdullah Nazir » Fri Oct 14, 2005 3:51 am
khulii jou aankh tou dene lagi Saba dastak
wagarnah housh kise thaa ke hougaiee hei seHar.
Nazir.
Shummu
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by Shummu » Fri Oct 14, 2005 10:53 am
pehli si wo kalaam meiN narmi nahin rahi ..............
guftaar se mizaaj-e-sabaa kaun le gayaa?
Koi pooche humse hamaari haalat ka sabab
to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai
Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
Na Gham jaata hai na khushi aati hai
Abdullah Nazir
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by Abdullah Nazir » Fri Oct 14, 2005 4:27 pm
Raftaar meiN Sabaa kii sii narmi nahiN rahi
tujh se wo shoukhiyaN wo adaa kaun le gayaa.
Nazir.
Shummu
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by Shummu » Wed Oct 19, 2005 12:23 pm
Saba Hum Sey Poochti Phir Rahi Hai
Chaman Ko Sajaaney Kay Dinn Aa Rahey Hein
Koi pooche humse hamaari haalat ka sabab
to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai
Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
Na Gham jaata hai na khushi aati hai
Abdullah Nazir
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by Abdullah Nazir » Sat Oct 22, 2005 4:12 pm
nah chaiR baad-e-Sabaa mujhko dasht-e-ghurbat meiN
kahaaN wo phool chaman ke kahaaN yeh veeraani.
Nazir.
Abdullah Nazir
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by Abdullah Nazir » Thu Oct 27, 2005 1:52 am
chaman se aayi hei baad-e-Sabaa khabar dene
keh phool kab se miraa intizaar karte heiN.
Nazir.
syed bilal armaan
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by syed bilal armaan » Fri Oct 28, 2005 8:28 am
Dostoun app ney unwan"SABA" par bahut acche ashar likhe. Ab pesh hai ek nay unwan "EID "app is unwan par bhi apne pasandida ashar likhiye. ye unwan app naye fourm mein mulaheza kareinge.
SYED BILAL ARMAAN