Guzarish 11 per TaraHi ghazal: Abdulqayyum SaHil, jeddah

[abdulqayyum sahil]

MuHtaramaat o MuHtarameen
aHbaab-e-meHfil,

aadaab o tasleemaat,

Apni TaraHi ghazal pesh karte houe khushi meHsoos karrahaa hooN. Ummeed ke aap apni qeemati aaraa se navaazkar mamnoon farmayenge.

GHAZAL roman meiN

ghaRyhaaN heiN imtiHaan kii is dil ke saamne
dast-e-qaZaa hei Taayir-e-bismil ke saamne

chubhtaa hei micl-e-khaar her ik lamHa-e-qafas
taSveer-e-gulsitaaN hei Anaadil ke saamne

kehtaa hei waqt thaam le tegh-e-anaa magar
"maiN sar jhukaaye baiThaa hooN qaatil ke saamne"

taazah khayaal-o-fikr kii khushboo bhii leejiye
guldasta-e-kalaam hei qaabil ke saamne

yeh Aahd aaj mujh se karo mere HauSlou
sar kham nah hugaa saaAat-e-mushkil ke saamne

behtar nahiN hei cheRnaa saaz-e-Hayaat ko
zakhmi hei taar taar anaamil ke saamne

nazreN mileN tou raunaq-e-meHfil se jaa milooN
baiThaa hooN aarzoo liye meHfil ke saamne

kaanTe bichaade raah meiN gar dushman-e-wafaa
gulzaar hounge Taalib-e-manzil ke saamne

mumkin nahiN hei touRnaa zanjeer-e-bekasii
majbooriyaaN heiN qaid-e-salaasil ke saamne

kartaa hei sar jhukaake samundar bhii guftagoo
qaTre kii kyaa bisaaT hei :SaaHil: ke saamne
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Khair Andesh
SaHil

[Ibn-e-siddique]

saHil saHib

salaam arz hai

janaab aap ki ye ghazal hameN bahot pasand aayee, mashallah bahot khoobsoorat mazaameen baaNdhe haiN.

aik umda ghazal sunaane per aap hamaari jaanib se nazraana-e-daad-o-sitaaish qubool farmaaiN

amjad

[Shummu]

chubhtaa hei micl-e-khaar her ik lamHa-e-qafas
taSveer-e-gulsitaaN hei Anaadil ke saamne

taazah khayaal-o-fikr kii khushboo bhii leejiye
guldasta-e-kalaam hei qaabil ke saamne

yeh Aahd aaj mujh se karo mere HauSlou
sar kham nah hugaa saaAat-e-mushkil ke saamne

behtar nahiN hei cheRnaa saaz-e-Hayaat ko
zakhmi hei taar taar anaamil ke saamne

nazreN mileN tou raunaq-e-meHfil se jaa milooN
baiThaa hooN aarzoo liye meHfil ke saamne

mumkin nahiN hei touRnaa zanjeer-e-bekasii
majbooriyaaN heiN qaid-e-salaasil ke saamne

kartaa hei sar jhukaake samundar bhii guftagoo
qaTre kii kyaa bisaaT hei :SaaHil: ke saamne

bahut khoob..kya baat hai Sahil jee..zabardast..aap ki ghazal tarahi misre #11 pe behad pasand aayi..kya khoob ash'aar nikaale hain ..khaaskar quoted ash'aar pe khusoosi daad pesh hai aur maqte mein jis khoobi se aap ne apne naam ka istimaal kiya hai woh waqaii qaabil-e-taareef hai

Shumaila

[haamidbaaqri]

MuHtaramaat o MuHtarameen
aHbaab-e-meHfil,

aadaab o tasleemaat,

Apni TaraHi ghazal pesh karte houe khushi meHsoos karrahaa hooN. Ummeed ke aap apni qeemati aaraa se navaazkar mamnoon farmayenge.

GHAZAL roman meiN

ghaRyhaaN heiN imtiHaan kii is dil ke saamne
dast-e-qaZaa hei Taayir-e-bismil ke saamne

chubhtaa hei micl-e-khaar her ik lamHa-e-qafas
taSveer-e-gulsitaaN hei Anaadil ke saamne

kehtaa hei waqt thaam le tegh-e-anaa magar
"maiN sar jhukaaye baiThaa hooN qaatil ke saamne"

taazah khayaal-o-fikr kii khushboo bhii leejiye
guldasta-e-kalaam hei qaabil ke saamne

yeh Aahd aaj mujh se karo mere HauSlou
sar kham nah hugaa saaAat-e-mushkil ke saamne

behtar nahiN hei cheRnaa saaz-e-Hayaat ko
zakhmi hei taar taar anaamil ke saamne

nazreN mileN tou raunaq-e-meHfil se jaa milooN
baiThaa hooN aarzoo liye meHfil ke saamne

kaanTe bichaade raah meiN gar dushman-e-wafaa
gulzaar hounge Taalib-e-manzil ke saamne

mumkin nahiN hei touRnaa zanjeer-e-bekasii
majbooriyaaN heiN qaid-e-salaasil ke saamne

kartaa hei sar jhukaake samundar bhii guftagoo
qaTre kii kyaa bisaaT hei :SaaHil: ke saamne
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Khair Andesh
SaHil

salaamun alaikum
mohtaram sahil saahib

nihaayat hee umda kalaam hai aapka har sher qaabile t^aareef hai

is behtareen ghazal per hamaari mukhlisaana daad qubool farmaaye.n.

taalibe dua
haamidbaaqri

[farhan]

Bahut khoob Abdul Qayyum Saheb

aap ki ghazal bahut pasand aayiii

ghaRyhaaN heiN imtiHaan kii is dil ke saamne
dast-e-qaZaa hei Taayir-e-bismil ke saamne

yeh shair bahut pasand aayaa

thankx for sharing

Farhan