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Guzarish 11 per TaraHi ghazal: Irfan Barabankwi - Jeddah
MuHtaramaat o MuHtarameen
aHbaab-e-meHfil,
aadaab,
Guzarish 11 ke TaraHi miSreA per apni ghazal pesh karne kii saAaadat Haasil karrahaa hooN. Ummeed ke apni giraaNqadr aaraa se navaazkar mujhe shukriyah adaa karne kaa mauqaA denge.
GHAZAL
raqSaaN ajal hei Taair-e-bismil ke saamne
"maiN sar jhukaaye baiThaa hooN qaatil ke saamne"
kaar-e-sitam-zareefiy-e-amvaaj dekhiye
kashti miri Diboyi hei saaHil ke saamne
Houtaa hei intikhaab bahut sakht us ghaRi
tarjeeH kaa sawaal hou jab dil ke saamne
hounaa thaa sarfaraaz use aur hougayaa
jhuktaa nahiN hei Haq kabhi baaTil ke saamne
MeHsoos mujhko rauZa-e-aThar pah yeh houaa
naaqiS khaRaa hei banda-e-kaamil ke saamne
raHmat bahut baRi hei hamaare zanoob se
jaise koii pahaaR hou ik til ke saamne
phoolaoN meiN unko Azm ne tabdeel kardiyaa
jou khaar aaye jaada-e-manzil ke saamne
detaa hei bus vohi unheN jeene kaa HauSlah
gulshan hei jou qafas meiN Anaadil ke saamne
auraoN kii mushkilaat ka jab tajziyhah kiyhaa
kaafi baRi lageeN miri mushkil ke saamne
daur-e-munaafiqat meiN use Haq navaa kahou
izhaar-e-Haq jou karsake meHfil ke saamne
ieemaan bik hii jaayegaa :Irfan: dekhnaa
rishwat rakhi hei munSif o Aadil ke saamne
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Khair Andesh,
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Irfan saHib
salaam arz hai
bahot khoob janaab, bahot lutf aaya aap ki ghazal paRh ker.
kia khoobsurat ash'aar kahe haiN :
Amjad
salaam arz hai
bahot khoob janaab, bahot lutf aaya aap ki ghazal paRh ker.
kia khoobsurat ash'aar kahe haiN :
misra-e-taraH per girah bhi khoob lagaai hai, aik umda ghazal sunaane per daad qubool farmaaiNraqSaaN ajal hei Taair-e-bismil ke saamne
"maiN sar jhukaaye baiThaa hooN qaatil ke saamne"
Houtaa hei intikhaab bahut sakht us ghaRi
tarjeeH kaa sawaal hou jab dil ke saamne
hounaa thaa sarfaraaz use aur hougayaa
jhuktaa nahiN hei Haq kabhi baaTil ke saamne
phoolaoN meiN unko Azm ne tabdeel kardiyaa
jou khaar aaye jaada-e-manzil ke saamne
auraoN kii mushkilaat ka jab tajziyhah kiyhaa
kaafi baRi lageeN miri mushkil ke saamne
Amjad
Mire ash'aar ae Iqbal kyuN pyaare na hoN mujhko
mire TooTe hue dil ke ye dard.angez naale haiN
mire TooTe hue dil ke ye dard.angez naale haiN
Re: Guzarish 11 per TaraHi ghazal: Irfan Barabankwi - Jedda
Mohtram Irfan sahab kaise hain aap?bade din baad aap ko dekha....aap ki taaza ghazal bhi dekhi..bahut achchi hai..kuch lafz samajh nahi paayi ..agar samjhaa dein to inaayat hogi aur hum bhi ghazal ka poori tarah mazaa le sakenge... alfaaz hain...
Taair-e-bismil
kaar-e-sitam-zareefiy-e-amvaaj
rauZa-e-aThar
zanoob
Shukriya!
in ashaar pe khusoosi daad pesh hai..
Shumaila
Taair-e-bismil
kaar-e-sitam-zareefiy-e-amvaaj
rauZa-e-aThar
zanoob
Shukriya!
in ashaar pe khusoosi daad pesh hai..
wah wah wah bahut umda!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Houtaa hei intikhaab bahut sakht us ghaRi
tarjeeH kaa sawaal hou jab dil ke saamne
phoolaoN meiN unko Azm ne tabdeel kardiyaa
jou khaar aaye jaada-e-manzil ke saamne
auraoN kii mushkilaat ka jab tajziyhah kiyhaa
kaafi baRi lageeN miri mushkil ke saamne
daur-e-munaafiqat meiN use Haq navaa kahou
izhaar-e-Haq jou karsake meHfil ke saamne
ieemaan bik hii jaayegaa :Irfan: dekhnaa
rishwat rakhi hei munSif o Aadil ke saamne
Shumaila
Koi pooche humse hamaari haalat ka sabab
to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai
Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
Na Gham jaata hai na khushi aati hai
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Bahut bahut shukriya
mohtaram amjad bhai
salam-e-masnoon
ek muddat-e-madeed ke bAd aapka nawazish namah nazar nawaz hua.aap to mujhko bhool hi gaye they . dar asl maiN bhi bahut masrrof rahta hooN is liye idhar kam hi aana hota hai. khair ghazal ki pazirai ka bahut bahut shukriyah. ummeed hai ayendah bhi yad farmate raheiNge.
khair andaish
irfan barabaankwi
salam-e-masnoon
ek muddat-e-madeed ke bAd aapka nawazish namah nazar nawaz hua.aap to mujhko bhool hi gaye they . dar asl maiN bhi bahut masrrof rahta hooN is liye idhar kam hi aana hota hai. khair ghazal ki pazirai ka bahut bahut shukriyah. ummeed hai ayendah bhi yad farmate raheiNge.
khair andaish
irfan barabaankwi
iHtisab apne naqaayis ka mujhe aataa hei
Saare Aalam ki maiN taqseer kahaN tak dekhuN
Irfan Barabankwi.
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Bahut bahut shukriya
mohtaramah
SHUMAILAH SAAHIBAH
tasleemat
aik muddat ke bAd aapki inayat namah dekha . bahut khushi hoi ke aapne
meri ghazal ko pasand kiya. meri masroofiat ne mujhko aap sabse door kar diya hai. koshish karooNga ke ayendah bhi urdu bandhan per aata rahooN.
aapne kuchh alfaz ke mAni dryaft kiye hai jo has zail haiN :
tair-e-bismil = woh parindah jo marne ke qareeb ho yani jisko zabah kar diya gaya ho.
kar-e-sitam-zareef-e-amwaj = maujooN ke sitam ka kam
zanoob = gunah
ghazal ki psandeedgi ka shukriyah. ummed hai ke ayenda bhi yad rakheiNgi.
khair andaish
irfan barabankwi
SHUMAILAH SAAHIBAH
tasleemat
aik muddat ke bAd aapki inayat namah dekha . bahut khushi hoi ke aapne
meri ghazal ko pasand kiya. meri masroofiat ne mujhko aap sabse door kar diya hai. koshish karooNga ke ayendah bhi urdu bandhan per aata rahooN.
aapne kuchh alfaz ke mAni dryaft kiye hai jo has zail haiN :
tair-e-bismil = woh parindah jo marne ke qareeb ho yani jisko zabah kar diya gaya ho.
kar-e-sitam-zareef-e-amwaj = maujooN ke sitam ka kam
zanoob = gunah
ghazal ki psandeedgi ka shukriyah. ummed hai ke ayenda bhi yad rakheiNgi.
khair andaish
irfan barabankwi
iHtisab apne naqaayis ka mujhe aataa hei
Saare Aalam ki maiN taqseer kahaN tak dekhuN
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Bahut bahut shukriyah
mohtaramah
SARA SAHIBAH
tasleemat
aapka nawazish namah nazar nawaz hua. bahut bahut shukriyah.
bahut dino ke baAd mohtaram nazir sahib ke hukm per yeh ghazal likhne ki koshish ki thi. aalh ka shukr hai ke aap sabko pasand aayi. koshid karooNga ke ayendah bhi likhta rahooN. aapki sit masha allah bahut achhi chal rahi hai. mubarakbad qubool kareiN.
khair andaish
irfan barabankwi
SARA SAHIBAH
tasleemat
aapka nawazish namah nazar nawaz hua. bahut bahut shukriyah.
bahut dino ke baAd mohtaram nazir sahib ke hukm per yeh ghazal likhne ki koshish ki thi. aalh ka shukr hai ke aap sabko pasand aayi. koshid karooNga ke ayendah bhi likhta rahooN. aapki sit masha allah bahut achhi chal rahi hai. mubarakbad qubool kareiN.
khair andaish
irfan barabankwi
iHtisab apne naqaayis ka mujhe aataa hei
Saare Aalam ki maiN taqseer kahaN tak dekhuN
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Re: Guzarish 11 per TaraHi ghazal: Irfan Barabankwi - Jedda
salaam 'Irfaan saaHib,
aapkii Ghazal nazar_nawaaz huii aur hamesha kii taraH ham bahot maHzooz huye. bahot 'umda Ghazal paRhne ko mili mujhe. sabhii ash'aar zabardast haiN magar zel meN darj ash'aar kuchh ziyaada hii pasand aaye.
raqSaaN ajal hei Taair-e-bismil ke saamne
"maiN sar jhukaaye baiThaa hooN qaatil ke saamne"
kaar-e-sitam-zareefiy-e-amvaaj dekhiye
kashti miri Diboyi hei saaHil ke saamne
Houtaa hei intikhaab bahut sakht us ghaRi
tarjeeH kaa sawaal hou jab dil ke saamne
hounaa thaa sarfaraaz use aur hougayaa
jhuktaa nahiN hei Haq kabhi baaTil ke saamne
MeHsoos mujhko rauZa-e-aThar pah yeh houaa
naaqiS khaRaa hei banda-e-kaamil ke saamne
raHmat bahut baRi hei hamaare zanoob se
jaise koii pahaaR hou ik til ke saamne
phoolaoN meiN unko Azm ne tabdeel kardiyaa
jou khaar aaye jaada-e-manzil ke saamne
detaa hei bus vohi unheN jeene kaa HauSlah
gulshan hei jou qafas meiN Anaadil ke saamne
auraoN kii mushkilaat ka jab tajziyhah kiyhaa
kaafi baRi lageeN miri mushkil ke saamne
daur-e-munaafiqat meiN use Haq navaa kahou
izhaar-e-Haq jou karsake meHfil ke saamne
ieemaan bik hii jaayegaa :Irfan: dekhnaa
rishwat rakhi hei munSif o Aadil ke saamne
yeh bhii Khoob rahii...ba_Khuda, sochaa thaa 4-5 ash'aar nikleNge aise magar yeh maajra bhii dekhiiye k ek ek she'r kuchh aisaa bhaayaa ki kisi ek ko tarjeeH denaa mujh se na ban paRaa...bahot Khoob. subHaan Allah
faqat Khaak_nashiiN,
Hashmat
aapkii Ghazal nazar_nawaaz huii aur hamesha kii taraH ham bahot maHzooz huye. bahot 'umda Ghazal paRhne ko mili mujhe. sabhii ash'aar zabardast haiN magar zel meN darj ash'aar kuchh ziyaada hii pasand aaye.
raqSaaN ajal hei Taair-e-bismil ke saamne
"maiN sar jhukaaye baiThaa hooN qaatil ke saamne"
kaar-e-sitam-zareefiy-e-amvaaj dekhiye
kashti miri Diboyi hei saaHil ke saamne
Houtaa hei intikhaab bahut sakht us ghaRi
tarjeeH kaa sawaal hou jab dil ke saamne
hounaa thaa sarfaraaz use aur hougayaa
jhuktaa nahiN hei Haq kabhi baaTil ke saamne
MeHsoos mujhko rauZa-e-aThar pah yeh houaa
naaqiS khaRaa hei banda-e-kaamil ke saamne
raHmat bahut baRi hei hamaare zanoob se
jaise koii pahaaR hou ik til ke saamne
phoolaoN meiN unko Azm ne tabdeel kardiyaa
jou khaar aaye jaada-e-manzil ke saamne
detaa hei bus vohi unheN jeene kaa HauSlah
gulshan hei jou qafas meiN Anaadil ke saamne
auraoN kii mushkilaat ka jab tajziyhah kiyhaa
kaafi baRi lageeN miri mushkil ke saamne
daur-e-munaafiqat meiN use Haq navaa kahou
izhaar-e-Haq jou karsake meHfil ke saamne
ieemaan bik hii jaayegaa :Irfan: dekhnaa
rishwat rakhi hei munSif o Aadil ke saamne
yeh bhii Khoob rahii...ba_Khuda, sochaa thaa 4-5 ash'aar nikleNge aise magar yeh maajra bhii dekhiiye k ek ek she'r kuchh aisaa bhaayaa ki kisi ek ko tarjeeH denaa mujh se na ban paRaa...bahot Khoob. subHaan Allah
faqat Khaak_nashiiN,
Hashmat
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Re: Guzarish 11 per TaraHi ghazal: Irfan Barabankwi - Jedda
salaamun alaikumirfan barabankwi wrote:
MuHtaramaat o MuHtarameen
aHbaab-e-meHfil,
aadaab,
Guzarish 11 ke TaraHi miSreA per apni ghazal pesh karne kii saAaadat Haasil karrahaa hooN. Ummeed ke apni giraaNqadr aaraa se navaazkar mujhe shukriyah adaa karne kaa mauqaA denge.
GHAZAL
raqSaaN ajal hei Taair-e-bismil ke saamne
"maiN sar jhukaaye baiThaa hooN qaatil ke saamne"
kaar-e-sitam-zareefiy-e-amvaaj dekhiye
kashti miri Diboyi hei saaHil ke saamne
Houtaa hei intikhaab bahut sakht us ghaRi
tarjeeH kaa sawaal hou jab dil ke saamne
hounaa thaa sarfaraaz use aur hougayaa
jhuktaa nahiN hei Haq kabhi baaTil ke saamne
MeHsoos mujhko rauZa-e-aThar pah yeh houaa
naaqiS khaRaa hei banda-e-kaamil ke saamne
raHmat bahut baRi hei hamaare zanoob se
jaise koii pahaaR hou ik til ke saamne
phoolaoN meiN unko Azm ne tabdeel kardiyaa
jou khaar aaye jaada-e-manzil ke saamne
detaa hei bus vohi unheN jeene kaa HauSlah
gulshan hei jou qafas meiN Anaadil ke saamne
auraoN kii mushkilaat ka jab tajziyhah kiyhaa
kaafi baRi lageeN miri mushkil ke saamne
daur-e-munaafiqat meiN use Haq navaa kahou
izhaar-e-Haq jou karsake meHfil ke saamne
ieemaan bik hii jaayegaa :Irfan: dekhnaa
rishwat rakhi hei munSif o Aadil ke saamne
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Khair Andesh,
Irfan Barabankwi
mohtaram irfan barabankawi saahib
masha allah
bahut hee umda ghazal pesh kee hai aapne.bahut khoob
allah(sbhnwt)kare zore qalam aur ziyaada
taalibe dua
haamidbaaqri
mai.n to karta nahi.n kuch aur ebaadat ke siwa
paas mere nahi.n kuch aur mohabbat ke siwa
paas mere nahi.n kuch aur mohabbat ke siwa
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Bahut bahut shukriya
mohtaram
HASHMAT SAAHIB
salam-e-masnoon
aik muddat-e-madeed ke bad aapka nawazish namah nazar nawaz hua.
ghazal ki pazirai ka bahut bahut shukriyah. aap jaise ahl-e-ilm ki dad pakar meri ghazal moAtabar ho jati hai. himmat afzayi ka bahut bahut shukriyah.
khair andiash
irfan barbankwi
HASHMAT SAAHIB
salam-e-masnoon
aik muddat-e-madeed ke bad aapka nawazish namah nazar nawaz hua.
ghazal ki pazirai ka bahut bahut shukriyah. aap jaise ahl-e-ilm ki dad pakar meri ghazal moAtabar ho jati hai. himmat afzayi ka bahut bahut shukriyah.
khair andiash
irfan barbankwi
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Saare Aalam ki maiN taqseer kahaN tak dekhuN
Irfan Barabankwi.
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mohtaram
HAAMID BAQRI SAAHIB
salam-e-masnoon
aapka nawazish namah paRhkar bahut khushi hoi. aap jaise achhey
shOra ki dad mere lye sanad ka darja rakhti hai. ummeed hai ke ayendah bhi aap is nacheez ki hauslah afzayi farmate raheiNge.
khair andaish
irfan barabankwi
HAAMID BAQRI SAAHIB
salam-e-masnoon
aapka nawazish namah paRhkar bahut khushi hoi. aap jaise achhey
shOra ki dad mere lye sanad ka darja rakhti hai. ummeed hai ke ayendah bhi aap is nacheez ki hauslah afzayi farmate raheiNge.
khair andaish
irfan barabankwi
iHtisab apne naqaayis ka mujhe aataa hei
Saare Aalam ki maiN taqseer kahaN tak dekhuN
Irfan Barabankwi.
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FARHAN SAAHIB
salam pesh karta hoon
aapka maktoob nazar nawaz hu. ghazal ke psandeedgi ka bahut bahut shukriyah. ummed hai ke ayendah bhi apni mohabbatoN meiN yad rakheiNge.
khair andaish
irfan barbankwi
FARHAN SAAHIB
salam pesh karta hoon
aapka maktoob nazar nawaz hu. ghazal ke psandeedgi ka bahut bahut shukriyah. ummed hai ke ayendah bhi apni mohabbatoN meiN yad rakheiNge.
khair andaish
irfan barbankwi
iHtisab apne naqaayis ka mujhe aataa hei
Saare Aalam ki maiN taqseer kahaN tak dekhuN
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Bahut khoob waah waah
Janab
Irfan Barabankwi SaaHib,
PurkhulooS tasleemaat,
Aapki TaraHi ghazal beHad pasand aayi jiske liye meri daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool keejiye. Ummeed ke isi TaraH se aap shirkat karte raheNge.
Aapka MukhliS,
Nazir.