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tarhi ghazal guzaarish#11 by haamidbaaqri

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salaamun alaikum
dosto
hamaari adna see kaavish peshe khidmat hai
mulaahiza ho.n

yu.n jhukgaya hai dil mera ^aadil ke saamne
"mai.n sar jhukaaye baitha hoo.n qaatil ke saamne"

phailaata kyu.n hai haath ke'h tujh mei.n hai kaayenaat
lab per mere ye bol they saayil ke saamne

mehnat ke saath saath ho gar housla buland
khud ko khada tu paayega manzil ke saamne

taareek aik raa'h to roushan hai doosri
moujood do hai.n raaste ^aaqil ke saamne

gar chaahta hai roushni haq per hamesha chal
sar mat jhukaana tu kabhie baatil ke saamne

haamid qalam se tere hamesha ho haq bayaa.n
ghaalib ho teri ^aql sada dil ke saamne

nateejaye fikr
haamidbaaqri
alhamdulillah
mai.n to karta nahi.n kuch aur ebaadat ke siwa
paas mere nahi.n kuch aur mohabbat ke siwa
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Re: tarhi ghazal guzaarish#11 by haamidbaaqri

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haamidbaaqri wrote:salaamun alaikum
dosto
hamaari adna see kaavish peshe khidmat hai
mulaahiza ho.n


mehnat ke saath saath ho gar housla buland
khud ko khada tu paayega manzil ke saamne

taareek aik raa'h to roushan hai doosri
moujood do hai.n raaste ^aaqil ke saamne

gar chaahta hai roushni haq per hamesha chal
sar mat jhukaana tu kabhie baatil ke saamne

haamid qalam se tere hamesha ho haq bayaa.n
ghaalib ho teri ^aql sada dil ke saamne

nateejaye fikr
haamidbaaqri
alhamdulillah

wah wah wahhhhhhhhh bahut khoob..itni pyaari ghazal kahi hai aapne..quoted ash'aar to lajwaab hai!

dili daad pesh-e-khidmat hai :-)

Adaab,
Shumaila

Koi pooche humse hamaari haalat ka sabab
to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai

Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
Na Gham jaata hai na khushi aati hai
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Re: tarhi ghazal guzaarish#11 by haamidbaaqri

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Shummu wrote:
haamidbaaqri wrote:salaamun alaikum
dosto
hamaari adna see kaavish peshe khidmat hai
mulaahiza ho.n


mehnat ke saath saath ho gar housla buland
khud ko khada tu paayega manzil ke saamne

taareek aik raa'h to roushan hai doosri
moujood do hai.n raaste ^aaqil ke saamne

gar chaahta hai roushni haq per hamesha chal
sar mat jhukaana tu kabhie baatil ke saamne

haamid qalam se tere hamesha ho haq bayaa.n
ghaalib ho teri ^aql sada dil ke saamne

nateejaye fikr
haamidbaaqri
alhamdulillah

wah wah wahhhhhhhhh bahut khoob..itni pyaari ghazal kahi hai aapne..quoted ash'aar to lajwaab hai!

dili daad pesh-e-khidmat hai :-)

Adaab,
Shumaila
salaamun alaikum
mohtaram shumaila saahibah

aapki purkhuloos daad ke hum behad shukrguzaar hai.n.allah(sbhnwt)aap per apni rehmato.n ki baarish kare.aameen

mukhlis
haamidbaaqri
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paas mere nahi.n kuch aur mohabbat ke siwa
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Re: tarhi ghazal guzaarish#11 by haamidbaaqri

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sara_j wrote:
haamidbaaqri wrote:
yu.n jhukgaya hai dil mera ^aadil ke saamne
"mai.n sar jhukaaye baitha hoo.n qaatil ke saamne"

wah wah! bohat khoob girah lagaayi hai.

phailaata kyu.n hai haath ke'h tujh mei.n hai kaayenaat
lab per mere ye bol they saayil ke saamne

bohat khoob!

mehnat ke saath saath ho gar housla buland
khud ko khada tu paayega manzil ke saamne

kya kehne saaheb!

taareek aik raa'h to roushan hai doosri
moujood do hai.n raaste ^aaqil ke saamne

very nice!

gar chaahta hai roushni haq per hamesha chal
sar mat jhukaana tu kabhie baatil ke saamne

very nice!

haamid qalam se tere hamesha ho haq bayaa.n
ghaalib ho teri ^aql sada dil ke saamne

Ameen :-) bohat ache!

nateejaye fikr
haamidbaaqri
alhamdulillah
hamid sahib,

adaab arz hei

ghazal mukhtasir lekin bohat hi mainekhaiz ashaar jo muhe bohat pasand aaye . daad qubool keejiye.

sara
mohtarama sara saahebah
salaamun alaikum

aapki daad ka yeh naya andaaz hame.n bahut pasand aaya.aapko hamaare ash^aar pasand aaye yeh baat aapki purkhloos daad mei.n hame.n nazar aati hai.shukriya
salaamat rahe.n aur sadaa khush rahe.n

haamidbaaqri
mai.n to karta nahi.n kuch aur ebaadat ke siwa
paas mere nahi.n kuch aur mohabbat ke siwa
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Bahu khoob

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mohtaram

HAMID SAHIB

purkhuloos salam

aaj pehli bar aapka khoobsurat kalam nazar se guzra. wah bahut achhi ghazal aapne pesh ki hai. meri janib se dili dad qubool kareiN.

khair andaish

irfan barabankwi
iHtisab apne naqaayis ka mujhe aataa hei
Saare Aalam ki maiN taqseer kahaN tak dekhuN
Irfan Barabankwi.
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Re: Bahu khoob

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irfan barabankwi wrote:mohtaram

HAMID SAHIB

purkhuloos salam

aaj pehli bar aapka khoobsurat kalam nazar se guzra. wah bahut achhi ghazal aapne pesh ki hai. meri janib se dili dad qubool kareiN.

khair andaish

irfan barabankwi
mohtaram irfan saahib
salaamun alaikum

aapki daad bhi hamaare liye sanad hai.bahut bahut shukriya

.jazakallah

allah(sbhnwt)aapko salaamat rakkhe

aapka mukhlis
haamidbaaqri
mai.n to karta nahi.n kuch aur ebaadat ke siwa
paas mere nahi.n kuch aur mohabbat ke siwa
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Bahut khoob

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MuHtarami
Haamid Baaqri SaaHib,

Purkhuloos Tasleemaat,

Guzarish 11 ke TaraHi miSreA per aapki ghazal maiN ne bahut pahle naql karli thii jo mujhe beHad pasand aayi. MaiN is ghalaTfehmi meiN rehgayaa ke is per tabSirah karchukaa thaa. Aaj yeh inkishaaf houaa ke mujh se bhool hougaie.


yu.n jhukgaya hai dil mera ^aadil ke saamne
"mai.n sar jhukaaye baitha hoo.n qaatil ke saamne"

phailaata kyu.n hai haath ke'h tujh mei.n hai kaayenaat
lab per mere ye bol they saayil ke saamne

mehnat ke saath saath ho gar housla buland
khud ko khada tu paayega manzil ke saamne

taareek aik raa'h to roushan hai doosri
moujood do hai.n raaste ^aaqil ke saamne

gar chaahta hai roushni haq per hamesha chal
sar mat jhukaana tu kabhie baatil ke saamne

haamid qalam se tere hamesha ho haq bayaa.n
ghaalib ho teri ^aql sada dil ke saamne


Saare ke saare ashAar aap ke apne rang meiN bahut achche heiN, jin ke liye meri dili daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayiye.


Aapka Mukhlis,
Nazir.[/i]
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Salam Haamid sahab....

Aik umda ghazal share karnay ka bohat bohat shukria..

ALLAH KARAY ZOR-e-QALAM AUR ZIADA


Khush rahain

Khair Andesh

Raheel Ahmed
Kab Say HooN , Kia BataaooN Jahan-e-Kharab Main
Shab-Haaye Hijr Ko Bhee RakhooN Gar Hisab Main
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Re: Bahut khoob

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WEBMASTER wrote:
MuHtarami
Haamid Baaqri SaaHib,

Purkhuloos Tasleemaat,

Guzarish 11 ke TaraHi miSreA per aapki ghazal maiN ne bahut pahle naql karli thii jo mujhe beHad pasand aayi. MaiN is ghalaTfehmi meiN rehgayaa ke is per tabSirah karchukaa thaa. Aaj yeh inkishaaf houaa ke mujh se bhool hougaie.


yu.n jhukgaya hai dil mera ^aadil ke saamne
"mai.n sar jhukaaye baitha hoo.n qaatil ke saamne"

phailaata kyu.n hai haath ke'h tujh mei.n hai kaayenaat
lab per mere ye bol they saayil ke saamne

mehnat ke saath saath ho gar housla buland
khud ko khada tu paayega manzil ke saamne

taareek aik raa'h to roushan hai doosri
moujood do hai.n raaste ^aaqil ke saamne

gar chaahta hai roushni haq per hamesha chal
sar mat jhukaana tu kabhie baatil ke saamne

haamid qalam se tere hamesha ho haq bayaa.n
ghaalib ho teri ^aql sada dil ke saamne


Saare ke saare ashAar aap ke apne rang meiN bahut achche heiN, jin ke liye meri dili daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayiye.


Aapka Mukhlis,
Nazir.[/i]
mohtaram abdullah nazir saahib
salaamun alaikum

koyee baat nahi.n mohtaram.aapko hamaari adna see kaavish pasand aayee yeh jaankar hame.n badi khushee huee.

allah(sbhnwt)aap per apni rehmato.n ki baarish kare.aameen

aapka mukhlis
haamidbaaqri
mai.n to karta nahi.n kuch aur ebaadat ke siwa
paas mere nahi.n kuch aur mohabbat ke siwa
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shukriya

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rahmed25682 wrote:Salam Haamid sahab....

Aik umda ghazal share karnay ka bohat bohat shukria..

ALLAH KARAY ZOR-e-QALAM AUR ZIADA


Khush rahain

Khair Andesh

Raheel Ahmed
salaamun alaikum
mohtaram rahmed saahib

aapki daad aur duao.n keliye hum aapke behad mamnoono mashkoor hai.n.jazakallah

aapka mukhlis
haamidbaaqri
mai.n to karta nahi.n kuch aur ebaadat ke siwa
paas mere nahi.n kuch aur mohabbat ke siwa
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