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Bahut khoob, waah waah
MuHtarami
RaAna SaaHib,
PurkhulooS tasleemaat,
Waah waah kyaa kehne. Aap ne isqadar mushkil zameen meiN bahut achche ashAar nikaale heiN. Kamaal hei SaaHib.
Is kaamyaab ghazal per meri dili daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayiye.
Aapka MukhliS,
Nazir.
RaAna Jamali SaaHeba:
Aadaab-o-tasleemaat,
aap kee joining date tu puranii hai lekin bazm meN aap kam kam naZar aatee heN.
aap kee ghazal dekhee aur be-intihaa pasand aayii. waqaii meN is mushkil zameen meN likhnaa bohat hee mushkil kaam hai (kam az kam mere liye tu hai )
aap ne miSraH-e-taraH ka Haq baKhoobii adaa kiyaa hai.
meree janib se ek kaamyaab taKhleeq par dilee daad aur mubarakbaad qubool keejiye.
wassalam
Zahida Raees :Raji:
Aadaab-o-tasleemaat,
aap kee joining date tu puranii hai lekin bazm meN aap kam kam naZar aatee heN.
aap kee ghazal dekhee aur be-intihaa pasand aayii. waqaii meN is mushkil zameen meN likhnaa bohat hee mushkil kaam hai (kam az kam mere liye tu hai )
aap ne miSraH-e-taraH ka Haq baKhoobii adaa kiyaa hai.
meree janib se ek kaamyaab taKhleeq par dilee daad aur mubarakbaad qubool keejiye.
wassalam
Zahida Raees :Raji:
Meree sha'iree se mujhe jaan Lo
ke yeh aa'enaa hai meri zaat ka
(Raji)
ke yeh aa'enaa hai meri zaat ka
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