Lafz par Ashaar#13--"TAMANNA / ARMAAN "
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PK Swami wrote:yaraane mehfil
aadaab.
lafz tamanaa/aarzoo par jo sher mujhe yaad aa rahe haiN, pesh kar rahaa hooN. agar ek se jiyaadaa sher likhnaa munaasib naheeN to maazratkhwaaH hooN.
aapkaa izhaar.e pasandgee mere liye hausalaa afzaaie hogee!
tamanna thee agar apnee to ye thee aakhiree apnee
k tum saahil pe hote aur kishtee dooBtee apnee
tamannaaoN meiN uljhayaa gayaa hooN
khilaune de ke baHlayaa gayaa hooN
kambakht mujhe jee se guzarne nahee detee
jeene kee tamanna mujhe marne nahee detee
koi dil aisaa nazar na aayaa na jisme khwabedaa ho tamanna
ilaaHee tera jahaan kyaa hai, nigaarkhanaa hai aarzoo kaa
jaltaa hee rahaa dil meiN tamannaaoN kaa suraj
aaNkhooN se mere barf pighaltee hee raHee hai
dekh kar dilkashee zamaane kee
aarzoo hai fareb khaane kee
hai husool.e aarzoo kaa naam tark.e aarzoo
maine duniyaa choR dee to mil gayee duniyaa mujhe
jalaa sako to jalaao tum aarzoo ke chirragh
saHar kee raaH na dekho saHar mile na mile
aarzoo teri barqaraar rahe
dil ka kyaa rahaa, rahaa na rahaa
vo teergee hai rah.e butaaN meiN, chiraagh.e rukh hai na shamm.e vadaa
kiran koi aarzoo kee laao, k sab dar.o.baam bujh gaye haiN
Regards to everyone.
PK Swami
Tamam ashaar bohat he khoob thay
mashallah baree achee selection hai aap ki
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tamanna / armaan
"tamanna'aoN meiN uljhaayaa gayaa hooN
khiloune de ke behlaayaa gayaa hooN"
Shaad Azeemaabaadi
Nazir.
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"tamanna"
Arz-e-tamanna karte karte rusvaayii tak aa pahonchaa
phir bhii us ne baat na maani, apni zid per qaayim hei.
Nazir.
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"tamannaa"
kabhi manzil ki tamanna meiN qadam baRhte heiN
rouk lete heiN kabhi paaNooN ke chaale mujhko.
Shaayer: Abdullah Nazir.
Nazir,
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PK Swami wrote:yaraane mehfil
aadaab.
lafz tamanaa/aarzoo par jo sher mujhe yaad aa rahe haiN, pesh kar rahaa hooN. agar ek se jiyaadaa sher likhnaa munaasib naheeN to maazratkhwaaH hooN.
aapkaa izhaar.e pasandgee mere liye hausalaa afzaaie hogee!
tamanna thee agar apnee to ye thee aakhiree apnee
k tum saahil pe hote aur kishtee dooBtee apnee
tamannaaoN meiN uljhayaa gayaa hooN
khilaune de ke baHlayaa gayaa hooN
kambakht mujhe jee se guzarne nahee detee
jeene kee tamanna mujhe marne nahee detee
koi dil aisaa nazar na aayaa na jisme khwabedaa ho tamanna
ilaaHee tera jahaan kyaa hai, nigaarkhanaa hai aarzoo kaa
jaltaa hee rahaa dil meiN tamannaaoN kaa suraj
aaNkhooN se mere barf pighaltee hee raHee hai
dekh kar dilkashee zamaane kee
aarzoo hai fareb khaane kee
hai husool.e aarzoo kaa naam tark.e aarzoo
maine duniyaa choR dee to mil gayee duniyaa mujhe
jalaa sako to jalaao tum aarzoo ke chirragh
saHar kee raaH na dekho saHar mile na mile
aarzoo teri barqaraar rahe
dil ka kyaa rahaa, rahaa na rahaa
vo teergee hai rah.e butaaN meiN, chiraagh.e rukh hai na shamm.e vadaa
kiran koi aarzoo kee laao, k sab dar.o.baam bujh gaye haiN
Regards to everyone.
PK Swami
PK saaHib, aadab!
eik muddat k baad aap se mulaaqaat ho rahii hai, ummid hai k khair-o-aafiyat se hoN ge?!
is unvaan par aap k zehn nasheeN tamaam ash'aar behad pasaNd aaye, khaas kar yeh she'r:
jaltaa hee rahaa dil meiN tamannaaoN kaa suraj,
aaNkhooN se mere barf pighaltee hee raHee hai!
aapnii is khubsoorat ataa par merii jaanib se shukriyah qubool keejiYe, aur hamesha isii tarah hameN achhe ash'aar se navaazte rahiYe!
Hassan
Urdu hai jis ka naam hamiiN jaante haiN :Daagh:
saare jahaaN maiN dhum humaari zubaaN ki hai
saare jahaaN maiN dhum humaari zubaaN ki hai
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Re: Lafz par Ashaar#13--"TAMANNA / ARMAAN "
kaaT kar phaiNk do is nakhl-e-tamanna ko :Ameer:
phul kambakht pe aaya na kabhii phal aaaayaaaa!!
phul kambakht pe aaya na kabhii phal aaaayaaaa!!
Urdu hai jis ka naam hamiiN jaante haiN :Daagh:
saare jahaaN maiN dhum humaari zubaaN ki hai
saare jahaaN maiN dhum humaari zubaaN ki hai