Ahl-e-Bazm
Aadaab
apni aik adna si kaawish aap ki khidmat maiN pesh kar rahi hoN aap sab ki aaraa ka intizaar rahey ga
regards
zmufti
1. Tirri hi chah maiN dil be qarar apna hai
tire liye hi sanam yeh singhar apna hai
2. nahiN hoN qaid yahaN yeh madar apna hai
qafas nahiN hai faqat yeh hisar apna hai
3. inaayatoN pe tirri inhesaar apna hai
wafa shuaaroN maiN teray shumaar apna haii
4. ana atal hai tirri dil kathor hai tera
hamieN bhee jaan se barh kar waqar apna hai
5. tumharey izn ki muhtaaj meri har khawahish
Tumhari khoo pe kahaN ikhtiaar apna hai
6. yeh rishta-e-dil-o-jaaN barqrar hai kaise
jigar laho hai to dil bhee figaar apna hai
7. hamarey shahr maiN raunaq tire hi dam se thee
tire hi jaane se ujda dayar apna hai
8. mirri udaas nighahieN tikki haiN chokhat pe
Wabaal-e-jaan bana intezaar apna hai
9. tujhe batayieN ge jo dil maiN ham ne thaani hai
falak pe chaand bhee to raazdaar apna hai
ghazal
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salaam e masnoon
neeche ke donoN sher aik mashriqi aurat ke jazbaat ki sahi akkasi haiN.
dosra sher khas taur par islami nizam e hijaab ki bharpoor wikalat kar raha hai.
Tirri hi chah maiN dil be qarar apna hai
tire liye hi sanam yeh singhar apna hai
nahiN hoN qaid yahaN yeh madar apna hai
qafas nahiN hai faqat yeh hisar apna hai
aur ye ashaar bhi pasand aaye.
inaayatoN pe tirri inhesaar apna hai
wafa shuaaroN maiN teray shumaar apna haii
ana atal hai tirri dil kathor hai tera
hamieN bhee jaan se barh kar waqar apna hai
wah kia khuddari hai
tumharey izn ki muhtaaj meri har khawahish
Tumhari khoo pe kahaN ikhtiaar apna hai
bahut acha sher hai
yeh rishta-e-dil-o-jaaN barqrar hai kaise
jigar laho hai to dil bhee figaar apna hai
hamarey shahr maiN raunaq tire hi dam se thee
tire hi jaane se ujda dayar apna hai
bahut khooob
shukria
MQ
salaam e masnoon
neeche ke donoN sher aik mashriqi aurat ke jazbaat ki sahi akkasi haiN.
dosra sher khas taur par islami nizam e hijaab ki bharpoor wikalat kar raha hai.
Tirri hi chah maiN dil be qarar apna hai
tire liye hi sanam yeh singhar apna hai
nahiN hoN qaid yahaN yeh madar apna hai
qafas nahiN hai faqat yeh hisar apna hai
aur ye ashaar bhi pasand aaye.
inaayatoN pe tirri inhesaar apna hai
wafa shuaaroN maiN teray shumaar apna haii
ana atal hai tirri dil kathor hai tera
hamieN bhee jaan se barh kar waqar apna hai
wah kia khuddari hai
tumharey izn ki muhtaaj meri har khawahish
Tumhari khoo pe kahaN ikhtiaar apna hai
bahut acha sher hai
yeh rishta-e-dil-o-jaaN barqrar hai kaise
jigar laho hai to dil bhee figaar apna hai
hamarey shahr maiN raunaq tire hi dam se thee
tire hi jaane se ujda dayar apna hai
bahut khooob
shukria
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aap kee Ghazal.
moHtarmah Zmufti SaHebah
aadaab!
Aap kee tazah Ghazal dekhee.bohot pasand aaee. dilkash maZ^ameen pur kashish andaz^ aor bala kee sanjeedgee hee aap kee pehchaan bantee ja rahee hai. yeh bat baRee khush aa'end hai. meree
janib se dad qubool kijiye.
aor yooN hee likhtee raheeN.
khuda Hafiz^
muz^affar
aadaab!
Aap kee tazah Ghazal dekhee.bohot pasand aaee. dilkash maZ^ameen pur kashish andaz^ aor bala kee sanjeedgee hee aap kee pehchaan bantee ja rahee hai. yeh bat baRee khush aa'end hai. meree
janib se dad qubool kijiye.
aor yooN hee likhtee raheeN.
khuda Hafiz^
muz^affar