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aadaab,

aik adad ghazal ke saath haazir huee hooN. aap kee qeemati aaraa kaa intezaar rahe gaa.

shukriya
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bohat khoon naheed jee!
acha kalam dekh kar khushii hotii hay.bohat khushii huee, :) .
daad hazir hay
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Mohtarma Naheed Saahiba:Aadaab !

Buhot he khoobsurat ghazal kahi hai aap ne. Buhot pasand aaee. Meri jaanib se buhot si daad aur mubarakbaadi qabool kijiay.

Ashaar # 3 aur 6 intihaaee la.jawaab haiN, unper khasoosi aur mukarar daad qabool kijiay.

Mukhlis

Khalish
suno ! kuch dair hum se baat karloo
zaraa yeh dil behalna chahataa hai
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Khalish wrote:Mohtarma Naheed Saahiba:Aadaab !

Buhot he khoobsurat ghazal kahi hai aap ne. Buhot pasand aaee. Meri jaanib se buhot si daad aur mubarakbaadi qabool kijiay.

Ashaar # 3 aur 6 intihaaee la.jawaab haiN, unper khasoosi aur mukarar daad qabool kijiay.

Mukhlis

Khalish
Khalish ji,

pehli baar aap se baat karne kaa moqa' milaa hai aur kyaa hi khoob moqa' hai.
aap ne meree ghazal pasaNd farmaa'ee, maiN iss ke liye aap kee be.had mamnoon hooN.
ummeed hai aap se aa'indah bhee hosla afzaae hoti rahe gee.

buhat shukriya
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najma wrote:bohat khoon naheed jee!
acha kalam dekh kar khushii hotii hay.bohat khushii huee, :) .
daad hazir hay
:)
Najma ji,

buhat buhat shukriya!

aap mashaa'Allah khud buhat achaa likhti heiN aur aap se daad buhat ehmiyat rakhti hai.

buhat shukriya
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Wah naheed sis..wahhhhhhhh ghazal maine aap ki tab hi paRh li thi jab aapne post ki thi magar waqt kam tha isliye jawaab na de saki thi...aaj jab dubaara ghazal paRhne aayi to ghazal kuch badli badli lagi magar yaqeen maane pehle bhi ghazal khoob thi magar ab to ghazal bahut hi khoob ho gayi hai,,,sarwar sahab ne bahut achchi tajaveez di hai...ab ghazal behad pukhta aur kisi bahut baDi shaa'iraa ki lag rahi hai... :wink: Aap mein bahut capability ke...I'm sure woh din door nahi jab aap bahut mashoor-omaaroof shaa'iraa ban jaayengi....meri jaanib se is qadar khoobsurat ghazal pe dili daad haazir hai :D

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Koi pooche humse hamaari haalat ka sabab
to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai

Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
Na Gham jaata hai na khushi aati hai
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Shummu wrote:Wah naheed sis..wahhhhhhhh ghazal maine aap ki tab hi paRh li thi jab aapne post ki thi magar waqt kam tha isliye jawaab na de saki thi...aaj jab dubaara ghazal paRhne aayi to ghazal kuch badli badli lagi magar yaqeen maane pehle bhi ghazal khoob thi magar ab to ghazal bahut hi khoob ho gayi hai,,,sarwar sahab ne bahut achchi tajaveez di hai...ab ghazal behad pukhta aur kisi bahut baDi shaa'iraa ki lag rahi hai... :wink: Aap mein bahut capability ke...I'm sure woh din door nahi jab aap bahut mashoor-omaaroof shaa'iraa ban jaayengi....meri jaanib se is qadar khoobsurat ghazal pe dili daad haazir hai :D

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Shumaila dear,

aap itne khobsoorat aNdaaz se daad do gee tau maIn tau roz kee aik ghazal likhne beith jaa'ooN gee ;)

haaN Sarwar saahab ke mashvaraat ke ba'd ab ghazal kee shakl behtar ho ga'ee hai. isi liye kehte heiN ke "finishing touch" buhat ehmiyat rakhte heiN ;)
daad kaa shukriya!
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Naheed sahiba

Aadaab...

Mashallah bohat he khoob ghazal kahee hay aap nay , khaas taur per aakhri sher

Ab bhee mery aankhon main zakhm saans letay hain
Ab bhee bol utthta hay pichhly maat kaa aanchal

Khush rahain aur apna kalaam share karty rahain

Khair Andesh

Raheel Ahmed
Kab Say HooN , Kia BataaooN Jahan-e-Kharab Main
Shab-Haaye Hijr Ko Bhee RakhooN Gar Hisab Main
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rahmed25682 wrote:Naheed sahiba

Aadaab...

Mashallah bohat he khoob ghazal kahee hay aap nay , khaas taur per aakhri sher

Ab bhee mery aankhon main zakhm saans letay hain
Ab bhee bol utthta hay pichhly maat kaa aanchal

Khush rahain aur apna kalaam share karty rahain

Khair Andesh

Raheel Ahmed
Raheel saahab,
aadaab,

mere khayaal meiN ye meree aap se pehli baar baat ho rahi hae. aap ko iss mehfil meiN khush aamdeed aur meree kaavish paRhne aur ise saraahane kaa buhat buhat shukriya!!
aakhiri she'r ki pazeeraa'e ke liye mamnoon hooN.

mukhlis
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Buhat hi khubsurat ghazal likhi hai aap nay Mohtarma"NAHEED" nisai ehsaas ki bharpoor akkasi karti hui. Buhat daad qabool kijiyay.
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Anis Hasan wrote:Buhat hi khubsurat ghazal likhi hai aap nay Mohtarma"NAHEED" nisai ehsaas ki bharpoor akkasi karti hui. Buhat daad qabool kijiyay.
janaab Anis saahab,

Ghaalibun aap se pehli baar baat ho rahi hai. iss mehfil meiN khush.aamdeed.

ghazal pasaNd karne kaa buhat shukriya!

umeed hai aap aa'e heiN tau yahaaN aate raheN ge.

mukhlis
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