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Asslam u Alikum, aik nazm lay kar haazir hoon
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moHtaram janab-e-Atiq-ur-rehman Saffy SaaHeb:
purKhulooS tasleemaat,

sab se pahle tu is meHfil meN aap ko Khush-aamdeed kehtee hoN is umeed ke saath keh aap is meHfil ko apna hee samjheNge aur yahaN par nah-Sirf apnii taKhleeqaat ham se share kareNge balkeh deegar eHbaab kee taKhleeqaat par apnii giraNqadr aaraa ka iZhaar bhi kareNge. :-)

aap kee nazm bohat hee dil kash hai.

sadaa lafzooN meN aap ne ek bohat hee gehree baat kayii hai.

meree jaanib se ek KhoobSoorat kawish pesh karne par dilee daad aur mubarakbaad qubool keejiye.

muKhliS

Zahida Raees :Raji:
Meree sha'iree se mujhe jaan Lo
ke yeh aa'enaa hai meri zaat ka
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MuHtarami
Atiq-ur-ReHman Saffi SaaHib,

PurkhulooS Tasleem,aat,

Aapki mukhtaSar si nazm bahut pasand aayi, jiske liye meri dili daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayiye.

Andaaz-e-bayaan bahut hi dilkash hei aur shaayeri per aapki maqdirat ki nishaandehi kartaa hei.


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Mohtarma Zahida Raees rajhi sahiba, Assalam u Alikum,
aap kay itnay purhaloos welcome ka teh-e-dil say shukar guzar hoon aur nazm pasan karnay ka bohot bohot shukriya, insha Allah ye silsila jari rahay ga.
Dua Goo,
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Mohtarma Saara jabeen Sahiba, Assalam u Alikum,
aap kay haloos aur qadar afzai kay aagay, khud ko main nay hamesha baybas hee paya hai, jitna ehtraam aur izzat aap deti hain iss ka shukriya ada karnay kay liye meray pass alfaz naheen hain, Allah tala aap ko sada khush rakahin aur zindagi mein dheroon kaamyaabyaan aata farmain , Ameen. aap ka bohot bohot shukriya.
ye bhi wada hai k ainda baqaidi say haazir hota rahoon ga.
aap ka bohot bohot shukriya,
naik taman,naon kay saath,
Duaa Goo,
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Qabl-e-sad ehtram Nazir sahib, Assalam u Alikum,
aap kee hosla afzai ka aur nazm pasan karnay ka bohot bohot shukriya,

naik taman.naoon kay saaath,
Duaa goo,
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