17waaN terHi mushaairah

[tahira Masood]

Qar'een-e-karaam

slaame-e-khuloos

aik Haqeer si koshish aap sabkee baSaaratoN ki naz'r

raaey se zaroor nawaaziye gaa.

wassalam


tiray mareez kaa jeena wabaal hotaa hai
tiray firaaq meN her dam niDhaal hotaa hai

guzer hi jaata thaa din bhee tiray baGhair kabhi
"ab aik saaNs bhee lainaa muHaal hotaa hai"

qadam jehaN paReN tiray wahiN miree manzil
jehaaN qayaam ho mairaa ma'aal hotaa hai


shumaar kerti hoN kuch es teraH firaaq k pal
jo lamHa lamHa guzaaroN tau sal hotaa hai

tiree hi zaat se takmeel-e-zaat mairee huee
tiray hi dam se tau yeh dil nehaal hotaa hai


go meH'v rehti hoN miaN kaardaar-e-hastee meN
magar hameshah hi tairaa khayaal hotaa hai

hai josjh-o-jazbah-o-shiddat bhee Theek apni jagah
Haseen sab se magar a'Atdaal hotaa hai

jawaab DhoND'ne baiTee jo zindagi ka kabhee
hanuuz saamne phir ikk sawaal hotaa hai

kabhee Khayaal jo furqat kaa dil meN aa jaaey
tau haath meN wahee bheega rumaal hotaa hai

[zmufti]

buhat khoob
Tahira jee
aap ki ghazal buhat pasand aayii
Sabhi asha'ar ache haiN
meri jani se daad qabool kijye
khush rahiye
zmufti

[Abdullah Nazir]

MuHtaramah
Taahirah Masood SaaHibah,

PurkhulooS Tasleemaat,

Aapki TaraHi ghazal bahut pasand aayi jiske liye meri dili daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayiye.

MULAAHIZAAT:

tiray mareez kaa jeena wabaal hotaa hai
tiray firaaq meN her dam niDhaal hotaa hai

achchaa maTlaTlaA hei, waah waah.

guzer hi jaata thaa din bhee tiray baGhair kabhi
"ab aik saaNs bhee lainaa muHaal hotaa hai"

achchi gireh hei.waa.

qadam jehaN paReN tiray wahiN miree manzil
jehaaN qayaam ho mairaa ma'aal hotaa hai

achcha sheAr hei, waah waah.

shumaar kerti hoN kuch es teraH firaaq k pal
jo lamHa lamHa guzaaroN tau sal hotaa hai

achcha sheAr hei waah waah.

tiree hi zaat se takmeel-e-zaat mairee huee
tiray hi dam se tau yeh dil nehaal hotaa hai

Bahut achcha sheAr hei, waah waah.

go meH'v rehti hoN miaN kaardaar-e-hastee meN
magar hameshah hi tairaa khayaal hotaa hai

Pahle miSreA meiN "kaardaar-e-hastee" ko "kaarzaar-e-hastee" banaaleejiye jo SaHeeH hei.
Achchaa sheAr hei, waah waah.

hai josjh-o-jazbah-o-shiddat bhee Theek apni jagah
Haseen sab se magar a'Atdaal hotaa hai

Achcha sheAr hei, waah waah.

jawaab DhoND'ne baiTee jo zindagi ka kabhee
hanuuz saamne phir ikk sawaal hotaa hai

Pahle miSreA meiN lafz "jo" ki bajaaye "thee" karleejiye jo doosre miSreA meiN "hanuuz" ki munaasibat se behtar hei.

kabhee Khayaal jo furqat kaa dil meN aa jaaey
tau haath meN wahee bheega rumaal hotaa hai

Doosre miSreA meiN "wahee" ki bajaye "mire" kerleejiye.


Aapka MukhliS,
Nazir.

[tahira Masood]

buhat khoob
Tahira jee
aap ki ghazal buhat pasand aayii
Sabhi asha'ar ache haiN
meri jani se daad qabool kijye
khush rahiye
zmufti

Zraqa jee
slaam-e-khloos

es pazeeraaii kaa dil se shukeriyah, yeh aap ka Husn-e-nazar hai

sadaa khush rehiN :rose

wassalam

[tahira Masood]

moHteram Mukarram Abdullah Nazir saheb

tasleemaat

aap ne jis tafseel se es per apni qeemti raaey se nawaaza hai meN es per tah-e-dilse mamnoon hon
ummeed kerti ho keh aayndah bhee esi terha HuaSlah afzaaee fermaate raheN ge
wassalam

[tahira Masood]

Tahira ji,

adaab .

bohat din baad aapki takhleeq dekhi aur jhoom uThi,

wahi piyara sa andaaz aur khoobsurat mazameen.

sabhi ashaar bohat pasand aaye.

daad aur mubarakbaad qubool keejiye.

sara

tiray mareez kaa jeena wabaal hotaa hai
tiray firaaq meN her dam niDhaal hotaa hai

guzer hi jaata thaa din bhee tiray baGhair kabhi
"ab aik saaNs bhee lainaa muHaal hotaa hai"

qadam jehaN paReN tiray wahiN miree manzil
jehaaN qayaam ho mairaa ma'aal hotaa hai


shumaar kerti hoN kuch es teraH firaaq k pal
jo lamHa lamHa guzaaroN tau sal hotaa hai

tiree hi zaat se takmeel-e-zaat mairee huee
tiray hi dam se tau yeh dil nehaal hotaa hai


go meH'v rehti hoN miaN kaardaar-e-hastee meN
magar hameshah hi tairaa khayaal hotaa hai

hai josjh-o-jazbah-o-shiddat bhee Theek apni jagah
Haseen sab se magar a'Atdaal hotaa hai

jawaab DhoND'ne baiTee jo zindagi ka kabhee
hanuuz saamne phir ikk sawaal hotaa hai

kabhee Khayaal jo furqat kaa dil meN aa jaaey
tau haath meN wahee bheega rumaal hotaa hai

geeeeeeeee thanks

oh so nice of you
:rose

aap jaise chaahne waaloN ki karam ferma'ee hai

wernah....