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'alaiHidagee'..........................(Nazm)

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a'laihidagee
kisee bhi shakhS ke itnaa qareeb mat jaa dost !
keh phir a'laiHidagee naaguzeer ho jaa.ay
ik aik yaar meN pinhaaN a'doo nazar aa.ay
har aik rishtah-o-bandhan Haqeer ho jaa.ay

agarcheh rishtah-o-paiwand aTooT heN akcar
zaraa see dair meN lekin yeh TooT jaatay heN
firaaq chaahiye in ki nash-o-numaa ke liye
keh roz milne se bhi dost rooTh jaatay heN
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Bahut khoob, waah waah

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MuHtarami
Yasir Shah SaaHib,

PurkhulooS Tasleemaat,

Aapki nazm AlaaHidagi bahut pasand aayi, jis ke liye meri dilli daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayiye. Ummeed, aapkaa mazeed kalaam paRhne ko milegaa.


Aapka MukhliS,
Nazir.
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Re: Bahut khoob, waah waah

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WEBMASTER wrote:
MuHtarami
Yasir Shah SaaHib,

PurkhulooS Tasleemaat,

Aapki nazm AlaaHidagi bahut pasand aayi, jis ke liye meri dilli daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayiye. Ummeed, aapkaa mazeed kalaam paRhne ko milegaa.


Aapka MukhliS,
Nazir.

muHtaramee Abdullah Nazir SaaHib!

assalamOalaikuM

aap kee HoSlah.afzaa.ee kaa beHad shukriyah-aap hameshah meree Haqeer see koshishoN ko saraahte heN,, is se dil baRaa ho jaataa hay


ma'loom yeh karnaa thaa keh lafz "nashw-o-numaa" ki jagah "nash-o-numaa" kaa isti'maal kesaa hay ??

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sara_j wrote:Yasir bhai,

adaab.

mukhtasir aur haqeeqat se bharpoor aapki nazm

bohat pasand aayi. daad qubool keejiye.

sara



yasir shah wrote:
a'laihidagee
kisee bhi shakhS ke itnaa qareeb mat jaa dost !
keh phir a'laiHidagee naaguzeer ho jaa.ay
ik aik yaar meN pinhaaN a'doo nazar aa.ay
har aik rishtah-o-bandhan Haqeer ho jaa.ay

agarcheh rishtah-o-paiwand aTooT heN akcar
zaraa see dair meN lekin yeh TooT jaatay heN
firaaq chaahiye in ki nash-o-numaa ke liye
keh roz milne se bhi dost rooTh jaatay heN
behn Sara J !
aap ki bhi mukhtaSar aur Haqeeqat se bharpoor daad bahut pasand aa.ee- :-)


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Yasir Bhai aadaab,

bohat dinooN ba'ad aap kee koyii taKhleeq naZar navaaz hai.

Hasb-e-mamool is nazm meN bhi aap apne dost ko samjhane ka kaam kar rahe heN :-)

bohat naik naSeeHateN kee heN aap ne.. mere janib se ek achii taKhleeq par daad qubool keejiye.

wassalam
Zahida Raees :Raji:
Meree sha'iree se mujhe jaan Lo
ke yeh aa'enaa hai meri zaat ka
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Raji wrote:Yasir Bhai aadaab,

bohat dinooN ba'ad aap kee koyii taKhleeq naZar navaaz hai.

Hasb-e-mamool is nazm meN bhi aap apne dost ko samjhane ka kaam kar rahe heN :-)

bohat naik naSeeHateN kee heN aap ne.. mere janib se ek achii taKhleeq par daad qubool keejiye.

wassalam
Zahida Raees :Raji:


asssalmaOalikuM!

behn Raji!
aap kaa be.Had mamnoon hooN keh aap ne mere is naaSiHaanah andaaz ko saraaHaa aur meree HoSlah.afazaa.ee farmaaee-

dostoN ke kaam bhi Hasb-e-ma'mool chal rahay heN to meraa kaam bhi - :grin:


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