Muntakhab shayari-Baitbaazi-Lafz par Ashaar
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najma
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by najma »
titee nazar k isharoN se khel saktaa hooN
jigar-furoz sharaaroN se khel sakta hooN
saGhar
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najma
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jaate huey kisi ne kahaa thaa, ye yaad hay
:najma: mileiNgay phir kabhi, jo zindagii rahii
najma
najma/rahii
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najma
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by najma »
ham se aaya na gaya
un se bulaya na gaya
un/gaya
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Mahtab Qadr
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ham se jaaya na gaya
un se bhagaaya na gaya
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najma
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by najma »
Mahtab Qadr wrote:ham se jaaya na gaya
un se bhagaaya na gaya
un/gay
in do me se kisi lafz se shuru karna tha,aap ne =hay=seshurukiya hay.
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Mahtab Qadr
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by Mahtab Qadr »
sher to tafreeh e taba ke taur par likh dia tha magar aap chahti haiN to isi tarah chaliye aap ki baat par amal karte haiN :)
un se bhagaya na gaya
ham se jaaya na gaya.
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Abdullah Nazir
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by Abdullah Nazir »
ham ko manzil tou kujaa koiee nishaaN tak nah milaa,
qaafilah aaj bhii hei garm-e-safar kyaa keeje.
qaafilah / keeje
Nazir.
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najma
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by najma »
qaflay manzil pe aaa k luT gaey
manzilon k faaslon se poochiye
manzil/ poochiye
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Abdullah Nazir
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by Abdullah Nazir »
manzil-e-shauq kii jaanib thay ravaaN ham lekin
raahbar jis ko samajhte thay wo rehzan niklaa.
raahbar / niklaa
Nazir.
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najma
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by najma »
rah-bar samajh liya hay tuje, gard-e-karawaaN!
chalte raheN gay ham bhi, jahaaN tak Ghubaar hay
najma
chalte/hay
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Abdullah Nazir
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by Abdullah Nazir »
chalte rahenge jaanib-e-mazil hameshah saath
dushwaar raastah hei tou rehne bhii deejiye.
( /dushwaar / deejiye )
Nazir.
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najma
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by najma »
baRe wucuuq se dunya fareb detii rahii
baRe khuloos se ham e,tibar karte rahay
shaukat wastii
baRe/ rahay
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Abdullah Nazir
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by Abdullah Nazir »
baRe Haseen thay alfaaz us sitamgar ke
wafaa kaa naam liyaa aur be-wafaayii kii.
{wafaa / kii)
Nazir.
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najma
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by najma »
wafa ka nam zamane meiN hogaya nayab
ye ach,cha kaam zamane meiN hogaya nayab
najma
ye/ nayab
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Abdullah Nazir
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by Abdullah Nazir »
yeh zindagi bhi Ajab imtihaaN hei dunyaa meiN
qareeb jiske maiN houtaa hooN, door houtaa hei.
"ye"
Nazir.