Sher ke doosre misre ke pehle/aakhri alfaaz se sher kahiye!

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titee nazar k isharoN se khel saktaa hooN
jigar-furoz sharaaroN se khel sakta hooN
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jaate huey kisi ne kahaa thaa, ye yaad hay
:najma: mileiNgay phir kabhi, jo zindagii rahii
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ham se aaya na gaya
un se bulaya na gaya

un/gaya
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ham se jaaya na gaya
un se bhagaaya na gaya
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Mahtab Qadr wrote:ham se jaaya na gaya
un se bhagaaya na gaya

un/gay

in do me se kisi lafz se shuru karna tha,aap ne =hay=seshurukiya hay.
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sher to tafreeh e taba ke taur par likh dia tha magar aap chahti haiN to isi tarah chaliye aap ki baat par amal karte haiN :)

un se bhagaya na gaya
ham se jaaya na gaya.
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ham ko manzil tou kujaa koiee nishaaN tak nah milaa,

qaafilah aaj bhii hei garm-e-safar kyaa keeje.


qaafilah / keeje


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qaflay manzil pe aaa k luT gaey
manzilon k faaslon se poochiye
manzil/ poochiye
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manzil-e-shauq kii jaanib thay ravaaN ham lekin

raahbar jis ko samajhte thay wo rehzan niklaa.



raahbar / niklaa


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rah-bar samajh liya hay tuje, gard-e-karawaaN!
chalte raheN gay ham bhi, jahaaN tak Ghubaar hay
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chalte/hay
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chalte rahenge jaanib-e-mazil hameshah saath

dushwaar raastah hei tou rehne bhii deejiye.


( /dushwaar / deejiye )


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baRe wucuuq se dunya fareb detii rahii
baRe khuloos se ham e,tibar karte rahay
shaukat wastii

baRe/ rahay
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baRe Haseen thay alfaaz us sitamgar ke

wafaa kaa naam liyaa aur be-wafaayii kii.


{wafaa / kii)


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wafa ka nam zamane meiN hogaya nayab
ye ach,cha kaam zamane meiN hogaya nayab
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ye/ nayab
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yeh zindagi bhi Ajab imtihaaN hei dunyaa meiN

qareeb jiske maiN houtaa hooN, door houtaa hei.


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