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Ibn-e-siddique
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by Ibn-e-siddique »
vaah, shummu aap ne mera pasandeeda she'r pesh kiya hai
arz kiya hai:
nahin nahin ye khabar dushmanoN ne di hogi
wo aaye aa ke chale bhi gaye mile bhi nahin
wo / nahin
Mire ash'aar ae Iqbal kyuN pyaare na hoN mujhko
mire TooTe hue dil ke ye dard.angez naale haiN
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Shummu
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by Shummu »
wah sara je..!
khud ko sunte hein iss turhaaN jaise
waqt ki aakhri sadaa hein hum
waqt/hum
Koi pooche humse hamaari haalat ka sabab
to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai
Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
Na Gham jaata hai na khushi aati hai
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fatimah
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aslaam_u_alikam
main apney khawaab aankhon main liye phirtaa hun tariq
meraa chehraa bohat utraa hua hey kuch dinon sey
meraa/ sey
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Shummu
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by Shummu »
Laakh gham rahe mohabbat mein uthaane honge
Dard ke rishte baher haal nibhaane honge
--Riasat Ali Taj
dard/honge
Koi pooche humse hamaari haalat ka sabab
to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai
Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
Na Gham jaata hai na khushi aati hai
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Hashmat Usmani
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by Hashmat Usmani »
dard
dard minnat kash-e-davaa na huaa
maiN na achchhaa huaa, buraa na huaa?
Ghaalib
lafze-e-"maiN" ya lafz-e-"huaa" se agla she'r marHamat farmaaiye, shukria.
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Hashmat Usmani
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by Hashmat Usmani »
Saara ji, dusre misr'e ka pahla lafz "sar" hai na ki uskii murakkab soorat...aisa "Khel Ka Qaanoon" hai na, maiN kia karuuN! sorry!
hai
hai bas_ki har ik unke ishaare meN nishaaN aur
karte haiN moHabbat to guzartaa hai gumaaN aur?
Ghaalib
lafze-e-"karte" ya lafz-e-"aur" se agla she'r marHamat farmaaiye, shukria.
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Shummu
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by Shummu »
Aur sone ke pinjre mai jinhaiN gizaa mil jaaye chaaNdi kee..
Umr bhar phir unhaiN aazaadiyaaN achchee nahee lagti.
-ahmad faraz
umr/lagti
Koi pooche humse hamaari haalat ka sabab
to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai
Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
Na Gham jaata hai na khushi aati hai
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Hashmat Usmani
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by Hashmat Usmani »
nahiiN
nahiiN ma'loom kis kis kaa lahoo paanii huaa hogaa
qayaamat hai sarishk_aalooda honaa terii miZgaaN kaa?
Ghaalib
lafze-e-"qayaamat" ya lafz-e-"kaa" se agla she'r marHamat farmaaiye, shukria.
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fatimah
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by fatimah »
sara_j wrote:qiyaamat hei balaa hei baam per aate hii chup jaanaa
kahaN DhoondooN tujhe aakhir maiN ab kis se patah poochooN
kahan / poochun
aslaam_u_alikam
kahan aa ker rukney the rastey kahan mor tha ussey bhool jaa
wo jo mil gayaa ussey yaad rakh jo nahin mila ussey bhool ja
wo/ja
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Shummu
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by Shummu »
Kabhi Guncha, Kabhi Shola ,Kabhi Shabnam Kee tarah,
Log Milte Hain Badalte Huye Mausam Kee tarah
LOG/tarah
Koi pooche humse hamaari haalat ka sabab
to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai
Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
Na Gham jaata hai na khushi aati hai
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Hashmat Usmani
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by Hashmat Usmani »
tum
tum se be_jaa hai, mujhe apnii tabaahii kaa gila
is meN kuchh shaaiba-e-Khuubii-e-taqdeer bhii thaa?
Ghaalib
lafze-e-"is" ya lafz-e-"thaa" se agla she'r marHamat farmaaiye, shukria.
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Shummu
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by Shummu »
is saadigee pe kaun na mar jaaye ae khudaa
laRte haiN aur haath meiN talvaar bhi nahiN
laRte/nahiN
Koi pooche humse hamaari haalat ka sabab
to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai
Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
Na Gham jaata hai na khushi aati hai
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Hashmat Usmani
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by Hashmat Usmani »
merii
merii qismat meN Gham gar itnaa thaa
dil bhii, yaa Rabb! kaii diye hote?
Ghaalib
lafze-e-"dil" ya lafz-e-"hote" se agla she'r marHamat farmaaiye, shukria.
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Ibn-e-siddique
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by Ibn-e-siddique »
kyuN gardish-e-mudaam se ghabraa na jaaye dil
insaan hooN pyaala-o-saaghar nahiN hooN maiN
insaan / maiN
Mire ash'aar ae Iqbal kyuN pyaare na hoN mujhko
mire TooTe hue dil ke ye dard.angez naale haiN
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Shummu
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by Shummu »
insaan aur dekhe ba_Ghai'r us ko maan le
ik Khauf kaa bashar ne Khudaa naam rakh diyaa
ik/diyaa
Koi pooche humse hamaari haalat ka sabab
to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai
Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
Na Gham jaata hai na khushi aati hai