TARAHI GHAZAL - -- - (GUZ.18) by: ABDULLAH NAZIR.
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TARAHI GHAZAL - -- - (GUZ.18) by: ABDULLAH NAZIR.
MuHtaramaat o MuHtarameen
Arbaab-e-MeHfil aur aHbaab-e-sukhan,
PurkhulooS Tasleemaat,
Guzarish 18 ke TaraHi miSreA per apni ghazal pesh karte houe khushi meHsoos karrahaa hooN aur ummeed kartaa hooN ke aap apni giraaNqadr aaraa se navaazkar mujhe shukriyah adaa karne kaa mauqaA denge.
GHAZAL roman meiN:
raah-e-ulfat meiN gilah kiyuN dooriy-e-manzil kaa hei
her qadam per saath jab tak ishtiyaaq-e-dil kaa hei
MaiN agar deewaanah hooN, tum koii Lailaa to nahiN
Kaam aise meiN bhalaa kyaa parda-e-meHmil kaa hei
Khinch gayieeN abroo-e-jaanaaN mujhko tanhaa dekhkar
"kyaa qiyaamat-khez manzar koocha-e-qaatil kaa hei"
dast-e-amvaaj-e-balaa baRhne lagaa hei door tak
ab kahaaN pahlaa saa nazm-e-muAtabar saaHil kaa hei
Husn-e-taAmeer-e-adab ke naam per takhreeb kiyuN
Haaye kyaa anjaam-e-veHshatnaak is meHfil kaa hei
Tere banne yaa bigaRne ki mujhe kiyuN fikr hou
Hei agar kuch gham to apni saAy-e-laaHaaSil kaa hei
Zindagi ki gutthiyaaN houN yaa tiri zulfaoN ke kham
Kyaa kahooN uqdah-kushaayi kaam kis mushkil kaa hei
Is kamaal-e-fun kaa dunyaa meiN nahiN miltaa javaab
Pairahan khaaki her ik taSveer-e-aab o gil kaa hei
Zarrah zarrah shaahid-e-takhleeq-e-Nazir hei yahaaN
Ham se hee qaayim bharam insaaN ke mustaqbil kaa hei.
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Aapka MukhliS,
Nazir.
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Moharmee wa mokarramee Nazir SaHib
Aadaab
Aapkee taraheee Ghazal dekhi aur der tak har sher ko baar baar paRhta raha. Kya kahna SaHib. Har sher se aap ki kohna mashqee zahir hoti hai. Zubaan bhi bohat achchee istaimal ki gaii hai halaNkeh kum Urdu jan ne waloNke liye kuch saqeel Saabit ho saktee hai.
Meri daad aur mubarakbaad qubool farmaiiye.
Nacheez,
Jawaid Badauni
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BeHad shukriyah
MuHtarami o Azeezi
Jawaid Badauni SaaHib,
PurkhulooS Tasleemaat,
Aap aek Hassaas shaayer heiN aur ashAar kii nabZ per haath rakh kar unki narm o garm kaifiyyaat se waaqif houjaate heiN.
Aise meiN to maiN Meer Taqi Meer kaa yeh sheAr paRhne ke bhi qaabil nahiN rahaa:
"Rahi n'guftah mire lab peh daastaaN meri
nah is diyaar meiN samjhaa koii zubaaN meri"
Ghazal ki pazeeraayi ke liye maiN aapka tah-e-dil se shukriyah adaa kartaa hooN aur ummeed kartaa hooN ke aapki duAayeN saath raheeN to mizaaj-e-ghazal maAmool per aajaayegaa.
Aapka MukhliS,
Nazir.
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janaab Ustaad-e-mohtaram: Aadab!
hamesha kii tarah yeh kalaam bhii khuub rahaa hazraat, tamaam hii ash'aar aap kii kohna mashqii ka subuut de rahe heiN.
is umdah kalaam par nachiiz kii jaanib se dilii daad-o-mubaarak baad qubuul farmaaiiYe. :rose
Dua'aoN meiN yaad rakhiYe ga!
~ Hassan ~
hamesha kii tarah yeh kalaam bhii khuub rahaa hazraat, tamaam hii ash'aar aap kii kohna mashqii ka subuut de rahe heiN.
is umdah kalaam par nachiiz kii jaanib se dilii daad-o-mubaarak baad qubuul farmaaiiYe. :rose
Dua'aoN meiN yaad rakhiYe ga!
~ Hassan ~
Urdu hai jis ka naam hamiiN jaante haiN :Daagh:
saare jahaaN maiN dhum humaari zubaaN ki hai
saare jahaaN maiN dhum humaari zubaaN ki hai
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Re: TARAHI GHAZAL - -- - (GUZ.18) by: ABDULLAH NAZIR.
mohtaram abdullah nazir saahibWEBMASTER wrote:
MuHtaramaat o MuHtarameen
Arbaab-e-MeHfil aur aHbaab-e-sukhan,
PurkhulooS Tasleemaat,
Guzarish 18 ke TaraHi miSreA per apni ghazal pesh karte houe khushi meHsoos karrahaa hooN aur ummeed kartaa hooN ke aap apni giraaNqadr aaraa se navaazkar mujhe shukriyah adaa karne kaa mauqaA denge.
GHAZAL roman meiN:
raah-e-ulfat meiN gilah kiyuN dooriy-e-manzil kaa hei
her qadam per saath jab tak ishtiyaaq-e-dil kaa hei
MaiN agar deewaanah hooN, tum koii Lailaa to nahiN
Kaam aise meiN bhalaa kyaa parda-e-meHmil kaa hei
Khinch gayieeN abroo-e-jaanaaN mujhko tanhaa dekhkar
"kyaa qiyaamat-khez manzar koocha-e-qaatil kaa hei"
dast-e-amvaaj-e-balaa baRhne lagaa hei door tak
ab kahaaN pahlaa saa nazm-e-muAtabar saaHil kaa hei
Husn-e-taAmeer-e-adab ke naam per takhreeb kiyuN
Haaye kyaa anjaam-e-veHshatnaak is meHfil kaa hei
Tere banne yaa bigaRne ki mujhe kiyuN fikr hou
Hei agar kuch gham to apni saAy-e-laaHaaSil kaa hei
Zindagi ki gutthiyaaN houN yaa tiri zulfaoN ke kham
Kyaa kahooN uqdah-kushaayi kaam kis mushkil kaa hei
Is kamaal-e-fun kaa dunyaa meiN nahiN miltaa javaab
Pairahan khaaki her ik taSveer-e-aab o gil kaa hei
Zarrah zarrah shaahid-e-takhleeq-e-Nazir hei yahaaN
Ham se hee qaayim bharam insaaN ke mustaqbil kaa hei.
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Aapka MukhliS,
Nazir.
salaamun alaikum
bahut umdah ghazal hai aapki mohtaram ...kya kehne......
lafzo.n ka chunaao tau koyee aap se seekhe.
bahut khoob masha allah
bahutkuch seekhna hai hame.n aap se.
allah(sbhnwt)kare zore qalam aur ziyaadah
aapka mukhlis
haamidbaaqri
mai.n to karta nahi.n kuch aur ebaadat ke siwa
paas mere nahi.n kuch aur mohabbat ke siwa
paas mere nahi.n kuch aur mohabbat ke siwa
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Bahut bahut shukriyah
MuHtaramah
Zmufti SaaHibah,
PurkhulooS Tasleemaat,
Aap ne meri TaraHi ghazal ki pazeerayi farmaayi jiske liye maiN aapkaa beHad shukrguzaar hooN.
Ummeed keh isi TaraH se aapki HauSlah afzaayi jaari rahegi meri mashq-e-sukhan ke liye.
Aapka MukhliS,
Nazir.
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