Meree tarahee ghazal (Guzarish # 20)
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Meree tarahee ghazal (Guzarish # 20)
Dosto Salam
Ek sada see ghazal haazir.e Khidmat hai. Ummid hai apnee
aaraa se nawazeNge.
Aapka Mukhlis
Jawaid
rahee aaNkhoN meN sadaa raahguzar ki Surat
ghar se yuun nikle nah dekhi kabhi ghar ki Surat
kya ajab shaKhS hai woh, shams ki maaniNd mizaaj
aur sitam yeh keh nazar aaye qamar ki Surat
aisa kirdaar keh Hiawaan bhi sharmaa jaaye
hai bahaHaal bashar ab bhee bashar ki Surat
ho gaya pal meN hi khuwaaboN ka mahal chaknachoor
“Khak ummideN hooweeN gard-e-safar ki Surat”
Aaj tak oosne hameY dhoop meN saayaa nah diya
woh shajar waise tou lagta hai shajar ki Surat
kaash aa jaayen woh “Jawaid” yahaN dou pal ko
mera ghar bhi nazar aane lagey ghar ki Surat
Ek sada see ghazal haazir.e Khidmat hai. Ummid hai apnee
aaraa se nawazeNge.
Aapka Mukhlis
Jawaid
rahee aaNkhoN meN sadaa raahguzar ki Surat
ghar se yuun nikle nah dekhi kabhi ghar ki Surat
kya ajab shaKhS hai woh, shams ki maaniNd mizaaj
aur sitam yeh keh nazar aaye qamar ki Surat
aisa kirdaar keh Hiawaan bhi sharmaa jaaye
hai bahaHaal bashar ab bhee bashar ki Surat
ho gaya pal meN hi khuwaaboN ka mahal chaknachoor
“Khak ummideN hooweeN gard-e-safar ki Surat”
Aaj tak oosne hameY dhoop meN saayaa nah diya
woh shajar waise tou lagta hai shajar ki Surat
kaash aa jaayen woh “Jawaid” yahaN dou pal ko
mera ghar bhi nazar aane lagey ghar ki Surat
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Bahut khoob, waah waah
MuHtarami o Azeezi
Jawaid Badauni SaaHib,
PurkhulooS Tasleemaat,
Aapki TaraHi ghazal bahut pasand aayi jiske liye meri dili daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayiye.
MULAAHIZAAT:
rahee aaNkhoN meN sadaa raahguzar ki Surat
ghar se yuun nikle nah dekhi kabhi ghar ki Surat
Bahut khoob, waah waah.
kya ajab shaKhS hai woh, shams ki maaniNd mizaaj
aur sitam yeh keh nazar aaye qamar ki Surat
bahut achchaa sheAr hei, waah waah.
aisa kirdaar keh Hiawaan bhi sharmaa jaaye
hai bahaHaal bashar ab bhee bashar ki Surat
SheAr bahut achchaa hei lekin her bashar ko is mizan meiN nahiN toulaa jaasaktaa. Phir bhee samajhne waale yeh samjh sakte heiN ke shaayer kee murad her bashar se nahiN balke baAz zaalimaoN se hei.
ho gaya pal meN hi khuwaaboN ka mahal chaknachoor
“Khak ummideN hooweeN gard-e-safar ki Surat”
Bahut achchee gireh hei, waah waah.
Aaj tak oosne hameY dhoop meN saayaa nah diya
woh shajar waise tou lagta hai shajar ki Surat
Bahut khoob, waah waah.
kaash aa jaayen woh “Jawaid” yahaN dou pal ko
mera ghar bhi nazar aane lagey ghar ki Surat
Bahut achchaa maqTaA hei, waah waah.
Aapka MukhliS,
Nazir.
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Re: Meree tarahee ghazal (Guzarish # 20)
jawaid badauni wrote:rahee aaNkhoN meN sadaa raahguzar ki Surat
ghar se yuun nikle nah dekhi kabhi ghar ki Surat
Waah...
Ham se mat poochh raaste ghar ke
Ham musaafir haiN zindagi bhar ke .....(Mohsin Naqwi)
kya ajab shaKhS hai woh, shams ki maaniNd mizaaj
aur sitam yeh keh nazar aaye qamar ki Surat
Waah bohot Khoob. Waise is meiN ajab kya hai? Husn ke maathe per shikan to bohot sajtii hai.
Jawaid Sahib, aap ki ghazal achchhi lagi, daad pesh karti huuN.
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Jawaid bhai:
salaam arz hai
guzarish no. 20 ke teHt aap ne bahot umda ghazal kahi hai. zameen ka khoob Haq adaa kia. girah bhi umda lagaai hai, aur maqta bhi bahot pasand aaya.
poori ghazal per meri jaanib se bharpoor daad qubool farmaaiN
amjad
salaam arz hai
guzarish no. 20 ke teHt aap ne bahot umda ghazal kahi hai. zameen ka khoob Haq adaa kia. girah bhi umda lagaai hai, aur maqta bhi bahot pasand aaya.
poori ghazal per meri jaanib se bharpoor daad qubool farmaaiN
amjad
Mire ash'aar ae Iqbal kyuN pyaare na hoN mujhko
mire TooTe hue dil ke ye dard.angez naale haiN
mire TooTe hue dil ke ye dard.angez naale haiN
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Ibn-e-siddique wrote:Jawaid bhai:
salaam arz hai
guzarish no. 20 ke teHt aap ne bahot umda ghazal kahi hai. zameen ka khoob Haq adaa kia. girah bhi umda lagaai hai, aur maqta bhi bahot pasand aaya.
poori ghazal per meri jaanib se bharpoor daad qubool farmaaiN
amjad
Azeezi Amjad SaHab,
Aadaab
Yeh meri GhazaloN meN bohat sada see Ghazal hai phir bhi aap ko achchee lagee. Bohat bohat shukriya. Yaqeenan aap ki daad meN aap ka KhulooS shamil hai.
In tarahee mushaairoN se mashq.e suKhan barqaraar rahtee hai. Warna jin jungaloN men hum rahte haiN wahaN mangal karna zara mushkil hi hai.
Khoosh raheN!
MuKhliS
Jawaid
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Re: Meree tarahee ghazal (Guzarish # 20)
sara_j wrote:Jawaid bhai,jawaid badauni wrote:
rahee aaNkhoN meN sadaa raahguzar ki Surat
ghar se yuun nikle nah dekhi kabhi ghar ki Surat
kya ajab shaKhS hai woh, shams ki maaniNd mizaaj
aur sitam yeh keh nazar aaye qamar ki Surat
aisa kirdaar keh Hiawaan bhi sharmaa jaaye
hai bahaHaal bashar ab bhee bashar ki Surat
ho gaya pal meN hi khuwaaboN ka mahal chaknachoor
“Khak ummideN hooweeN gard-e-safar ki Surat”
Aaj tak oosne hameY dhoop meN saayaa nah diya
woh shajar waise tou lagta hai shajar ki Surat
kaash aa jaayen woh “Jawaid” yahaN dou pal ko
mera ghar bhi nazar aane lagey ghar ki Surat
adaab arz hei,
hamesha ki tarah aapki ye ghazal bhi pasand aayi.
kya kehne bohat khoob! daad qubool keejiye.
sara
Aap ko Ghazal achchee lagee Sara aur mujhe yeh achcha laga keh aap subH ki bhoolee shaam ko ghar aa gayeeN. Ekbhaaii ko aur kya chaahiye bus Bahin ki Khairiyat.
Khoosh raheN.
MuKhlis
Jawaid
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mohtaram Jawaid saaHib:aadaab!
is maah bhii mushaire meiN aap kaa kalaam khuub rahaa, tamaam hii ash'aar pasaNd aaye aur girah bhii aChhi lagaaii haii.
lihaaza khaaksaar kee jaanib se daad aur mubaarakbaad qubuul keejiYe. :rose
~ Hassan ~
is maah bhii mushaire meiN aap kaa kalaam khuub rahaa, tamaam hii ash'aar pasaNd aaye aur girah bhii aChhi lagaaii haii.
lihaaza khaaksaar kee jaanib se daad aur mubaarakbaad qubuul keejiYe. :rose
~ Hassan ~
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