TARAHI GHAZAL - -- - (GUZ.20) by: ABDULLAH NAZIR.

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TARAHI GHAZAL - -- - (GUZ.20) by: ABDULLAH NAZIR.

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MuHtaramaat o MuHtarameen
arbaab-e-meHfil aur aHbaab-e-sjukhan,

PurkhulooS Tasleemaat, :rose

Guzarish No.20 ke miSreA per apni TaraHi ghazal pesh karne kee saAadat HaaSil karrahaa hooN. Aapki giraaNqadr aaraa kaa intezaar rahegaa.

GHAZAL roman meiN:

dekhtaa kaun hei majrooH jigar kee Soorat
teer jab chalte heiN duzdeedah nazar kee Soorat

sarguzasht-e-dil-e-majboor sunaate kis ko
dekhte reh gaye ummeed-e-saHar kee Soorat

Dar hei aawaragi chunwaaye nah tinke mujh se
Ghar se niklaa hooN tou dekhi nahiN ghar kee Soorat

Koocha-e-yaar meiN jaaN Zeeq meiN hei ab itni
Zindagi hougayi ik baar-e-digar kee Soorat

Ai khudaa faiSlah karde miri badbakhti kaa
maiN hooN patjhaR ke kisi barg-e-shajar kee Soorat

aao maiN apne hee pahloo meiN jagah dooN tum ko
yooN nah jaagaa karo bedaar qamar kee Soorat

raaste manzil-e-maqSood ke masdood houe
khaak ummeedeN houeeN gard-e-safar kee Soorat

shehr-e-ummeed bhi hei shehr-e-khamoushaN kee TaraH
laa-shuAoori hei jahaaN parda-e-dar kee Soorat

fitnah pardaazaoN ne dunyaa ko bigaaRaa :Nazir:
loag zindah thay kabhi sheer o shakar kee Soorat.
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Aapka MukhliS,
Nazir.

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Mohtarmee Abdullah Nazir SaHab,
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Aapki tarahee Ghazal nazar nawaz hoowee. MaiN bhalaa kya tabsara karooNga aapke ashAAr per. Her sher lajawab hai. Nihayat umdah zubaan istaimal ki gaii hai Ghazal meN jo aap ka hi kaam hai warna hum jaisa nah aise zubaan bol sakte hain na sheroN meN istaimal kar sakte haiN.

Meri daad tahseen.e nashanas.e sukahan se ziyadah kuch nahin phir bhi qubool farmaaiye.

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MuHtarami o Azeezi
Jawaid Badauni SaaHib,

PurkhulooS Tasleemaat,

Aap ne khaaksaar kee ghazal kee pazeerayi farmaate houe likhkhaa hei:

Aapki tarahee Ghazal nazar nawaz hoowee. MaiN bhalaa kya tabsara karooNga aapke ashAAr per. Her sher lajawab hai. Nihayat umdah zubaan istaimal ki gaii hai Ghazal meN jo aap ka hi kaam hai warna hum jaisa nah aise zubaan bol sakte hain na sheroN meN istaimal kar sakte haiN.

Meri daad tahseen.e nashanas.e sukahan se ziyadah kuch nahin phir bhi qubool farmaaiye.

Aapka MuKhliS
Jawaid


Aapke in dil kee gehraayiyaoN meiN utarjaane waale alfaaz un laAl o jawaahi kee TaraH samajhtaa hooN jo aek ghair mutavaqqiA faqeer kee jhouli meiN `Daal diye jaayeN. Is dast-e-karam ke liye tah-e-dil se shukrguzaar hooN. Yaar zindah SuHbat baaqi.


Aapka MukhliS,
Nazir.

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janab nazir saheb
aadaab
aap ki aik aur muraSSaA ghazal ko paRhne ka sharaf HaaSil hua
aap ke ashaar per kuchh kehna mere bus ki baat nahin hai apne dil ki gehraiiyoN se daad bhej raha hoon qubool farmayen

Husaini
hum husaini duAa ki deN soGHaat
laakh chahay bura karay koee

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Mohtaram Nazir Saheb
Tasleemaat
aap ki ghazal mashallah buhat khooburat hai
is mursa'a ghazal ke liye mujh nacheez ki daad qabool kijye
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ustaad-e-moHtaram, aadaab !

janaab aap ki Ghazal to phir aap ki Ghazal hai , kaise na psand aaye ! so daad Haazir hai ! shukriya

Zia Baloch
Dikhaadi shaan, phir ahl-e-chaman ko, Be-niyaazi ki

Khamoshi se jhatak kar, aaj phir, dast-e-sabaa maiN ne

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mohtaram Nazir saaHib: Aadab!

hamesha kee tarah is maah bhii aap ke kalaam ne mushaire kee raunaq do-baalaa kee, tamaam hii ash'aar nihaayat umda'h haiN.

is shaandaar kalaam par khaaksaar kee jaanib se dilee mubaarakbaad qubuul keejiYe. :rose


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dekhtaa kaun hei majrooH jigar kee Soorat
teer jab chalte heiN duzdeedah nazar kee Soorat


Dar hei aawaragi chunwaaye nah tinke mujh se
Ghar se niklaa hooN tou dekhi nahiN ghar kee Soorat


raaste manzil-e-maqSood ke masdood houe
khaak ummeedeN houeeN gard-e-safar kee Soorat

shehr-e-ummeed bhi hei shehr-e-khamoushaN kee TaraH
laa-shuAoori hei jahaaN parda-e-dar kee Soorat


muHtaram Janaab
Abdullah Nazir SaaHib !

assalamOa'laikuM

aap ki Ghazal is taraHee silsilay ke liye rahnumaa ki Heciyat raKhtee hay ,,is taGhazzul se bharpoor Haseen takhleeq peh meree daad qubool keejiye-

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MuHtarami
Khozema Hussaini SaaHib,

PurkhulooS Tasleemaat,

Guzarish 20 ke miSreA per aapko meri TaraHi ghazal pasand aayi aur aap ne mujhe daad o teHseen se navaazaa. Is izzat afzaayi ke liye maiN aapka tah-e-dil se shukrguzaar hooN. Ummeed kartaa hooN ke aayindah bhee aap khaksaar kee isi TaraH se HauSlah afzaayi farmaate rahenge.


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MuHtaramah
zarqa mufti SaaHibah,

Tasleemaat,

Guzarish 20 ke miSreA per aapko meri TaraHi ghazal pasand aayi aur aap ne mujhe daad o teHseen se navaazaa. Is izzat afzaayi ke liye maiN aapka tah-e-dil se shukrguzaar hooN. Ummeed kartaa hooN ke aayindah bhee aap khaksaar kee isi TaraH se HauSlah afzaayi farmaate rahenge.


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MuHtarami
Zia Balock SaaHib,

PurkhulooS Tasleemaat,

Guzarish 20 ke miSreA per aapko meri TaraHi ghazal pasand aayi aur aap ne mujhe daad o teHseen se navaazaa. Is izzat afzaayi ke liye maiN aapka tah-e-dil se shukrguzaar hooN. Ummeed kartaa hooN ke aayindah bhee aap khaksaar kee isi TaraH se HauSlah afzaayi farmaate rahenge.


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MuHtarami
MuHtaramah Saara SaaHibah,
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PurkhulooS Tasleemaat,

Guzarish 20 ke miSreA per aapko meri TaraHi ghazal pasand aayi aur aap ne mujhe daad o teHseen se navaazaa. Is izzat afzaayi ke liye maiN aapka tah-e-dil se shukrguzaar hooN. Ummeed kartaa hooN ke aayindah bhee aap khaksaar kee isi TaraH se HauSlah afzaayi farmaatee rahengee.


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MuHtarami
Hassan_Bashir SaaHib,

PurkhulooS Tasleemaat,

Guzarish 20 ke miSreA per aapko meri TaraHi ghazal pasand aayi aur aap ne mujhe daad o teHseen se navaazaa. Is izzat afzaayi ke liye maiN aapka tah-e-dil se shukrguzaar hooN. Ummeed kartaa hooN ke aayindah bhee aap khaksaar kee isi TaraH se HauSlah afzaayi farmaate rahenge.


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MuHtarami
Yasir Shah SaaHib,

PurkhulooS Tasleemaat,

Guzarish 20 ke miSreA per aapko meri TaraHi ghazal pasand aayi aur aap ne mujhe daad o teHseen se navaazaa. Is izzat afzaayi ke liye maiN aapka tah-e-dil se shukrguzaar hooN. Ummeed kartaa hooN ke aayindah bhee aap khaksaar kee isi TaraH se HauSlah afzaayi farmaate rahenge.


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