Sher ke doosre misre ke pehle/aakhri alfaaz se sher kahiye!

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ik mohabbat ke ivaz arz-o-samaaN de dooN ga
tujh se kaafir ko to maiN apna khudaa de dooN ga

tujh / ga
Mire ash'aar ae Iqbal kyuN pyaare na hoN mujhko
mire TooTe hue dil ke ye dard.angez naale haiN
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wah kya sher hai@AMJAD JEE!!

tujh se kis tarah mai.n izhaar-e-tamannaa karataa
lafz suujhaa to maanii ne baGaavat kar dii


lafz/dii

Koi pooche humse hamaari haalat ka sabab
to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai

Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
Na Gham jaata hai na khushi aati hai
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Saara, Ghaalib ka poora deevaan chhaan maaraa ek bhii she'r lafz e "hone" se na milaa...majbooran Khud saaKhta she'r [tuk-bandii] pesh kar rahaa huuN, gar qubool ho!

hone

hone se kia hua hai zamaana e Kharaab meN
do gaz zamiiN na mil skii us Khaana e Kharaab meNhuaa?

Hashmat Usmani

lafze-e-"do" ya lafz-e-"meN" se agla she'r marHamat farmaaiye, shukria.
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do sitaaron ka zameeN par hai milan aaj ki raat
saari dunyaa nazar aati hai dulhan aaj ki raat


saari/raat

Koi pooche humse hamaari haalat ka sabab
to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai

Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
Na Gham jaata hai na khushi aati hai
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Chaand se maand sitaroN ne kaha aakhir-e-shab,
Kaun kerta hai vafa, ehd-e-vada, aakhir-e-shab

kaun/shab

Koi pooche humse hamaari haalat ka sabab
to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai

Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
Na Gham jaata hai na khushi aati hai
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aslaam_u_alikam

kon jaaney kab yeh saans saath denaa choor dein
is qadar anbuwa key sang bhaagnaa achaa nahin


is/ nahin
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nahin nahin ye khabar dushmanon ne di ho gi
vo aaye, aa ker chale bhi gaye, mile bhi nahin

vo / nahin
Mire ash'aar ae Iqbal kyuN pyaare na hoN mujhko
mire TooTe hue dil ke ye dard.angez naale haiN
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vo /panah

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Vo zakhm de ke bhii kehte heiN mujh se uff nah karuN
Ajeeb Tarz-e-muhabbat hei yeh khudaa kii panaah


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wah kya sher hai!! :shock:


Ajeeb khauf hai andar ki Khamoshi ka Mujhe
Ke Raaston sey guzarti hoon Gungunaate hue


Ke/hue

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to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai

Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
Na Gham jaata hai na khushi aati hai
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hei

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keh ham se bhool nah houjaye raah-e-ulfat meiN
hameshah naam usi kaa zubaN pah rehtaa hei

'hei"

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Hamesha Dar Ke Raho Waqt Ke Haathon "Sabir"
Bhikar Gaye To Savarane Ki Baat Mat Karna

Bhikar/karna

Koi pooche humse hamaari haalat ka sabab
to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai

Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
Na Gham jaata hai na khushi aati hai
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bikharne

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bikhar gayaa miraa sheeraaza-e-hayaat magar

woh apne banne saNwarne kii baat karte heiN


Nazir.
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hou /se

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[cikir=blue]

hougaieeN saarii umeedeN nazr-e-chashm-e-kam nazar

kyaa milaa Musaa ko Nazir jalvahgaah-e-Toor se

"kyaa/ se"
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kia jaaniye her aan badalti hui dunya
kab dil se koi naqsh miTaane chali aaye

kab / aaye
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heiN / loag

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HeiN kaise anjaane loag

Meri baat nah maane loag


meri / loag

Nazir.
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