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sooni sooni si hai gulshan ki faZ^aa tere baa'd(bugti ki yad

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Yaaran-e-meHfil , aadaab

wese to ye baat Khilaaf-e-ma'mool aur dastoor hai k aek Ghazal post karne k baa'd , fora" hee dosree paish karoN , magar kuchh tishnagee baaqee thee jo aaj kam karne ki koshish kar rahaa hoN ! aur phir is Ghazal ka ta'lluq bhi Nawab Akbar Khaan bugti se hai ! is liye abhi is ka paish karna behtar hai k baa'd maiN is ifaadiyyat kam hogee ! aap chaahe reply na deN , mera maqSad Sirf yehi hai k aap ise paRheN ! shukriya

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koi hotaa hi nahiN naGhma-saraa tere baa'd
sooni sooni si hai gulshan ki faZ^aa tere baa'd !

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pihle jis shaan se aatee thi mire gulshan maiN
youN na aayegi kabhi baad-e-Sabaa tere baa'd !

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teri be-daaGh moHabbat ki Z^iaa thi jis maiN
shab-e-bolan(balochistan) ka woh chaaNd bujhaa tere baa'd !

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zikr-e-SubHee k tire ruKh ka ujaalaa tha naSeeb
yaad-e-shabhaa k hoi jalwa-numaa tere baa'd !

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faSl-e-gul aayegi gulshan maiN chiraaGhaaN hogaa
chaar soo phelegi Khushboo-e-wafaa tere baa'd !
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raNg laayega lahoo teri wafaao'N ka Z^aroor !
Aur mehkegi gulistaaN ki faZ^aa tere baa'd !

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jitne chaaheN lab-e-u'shshaaq pe taale DaaleN
Aur goNjegi diwaanoN ki Sadaa tere baa'd !

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zindagee yaad rakhegee tira andaaz-e-junooN !
degi deewaanoN ko daaman ka pataa tere baa'd !

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to ne gulshan maiN cheheknaa jo sikhaayaa tha ise
kyoN na ho jaaye Zia , naGhma-saraa tere baa'd !
Dikhaadi shaan, phir ahl-e-chaman ko, Be-niyaazi ki

Khamoshi se jhatak kar, aaj phir, dast-e-sabaa maiN ne

Zia Baloch
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Post by Daanish »

MoHtaram Zia SaHeb
aadaab-o-tasleemaat
bohat Khoob. ek nihayat Khoobsoorat-o-pur_acar taKhleeq par dili daad-o-mubarakbaad pesh karta huN. qubool farmaayeN.
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Daanish wrote:MoHtaram Zia SaHeb
aadaab-o-tasleemaat
bohat Khoob. ek nihayat Khoobsoorat-o-pur_acar taKhleeq par dili daad-o-mubarakbaad pesh karta huN. qubool farmaayeN.
Khair andesh
Daanish
Danish SaaHib, w.salaam

janaab aap ka Husn-e-naz^ar hai ! nehaayat mamnoon hoN !

Zia Baloch
Dikhaadi shaan, phir ahl-e-chaman ko, Be-niyaazi ki

Khamoshi se jhatak kar, aaj phir, dast-e-sabaa maiN ne

Zia Baloch
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Post by Mayank »

Zia saahab,

Aadaab,

Bohat khuubsuurat ghazal kahi hai aap ne.. aur khuubsoorat Shradhanjali bhee hai yeH.. YuUN he likhte raheN.. Daad haazir hai qubool keejiye..

-Mayank
hoti Shiddat teri vafaaooN meiN
maaNg lete tujhe duaaooN meiN
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