Ay Hussain merHabaa!!!

Kuhnah mashq ShoAraa kaa kalaam jo beHr meiN hounaa zaroori hei

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Ay Hussain merHabaa!!!

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Tahira aapa:

salaam arz hai:

Imam-e-Hussain ke Huzoor aap ka ye salaam pasand aaya.

rahi baat vazn ki to is per agar meHnat ki jaaye to ye nazm vazn mein laai jaa sakti hai

bahar.Haal aap ke jazbaat pasand aaye, daad qubool kijiye

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mire TooTe hue dil ke ye dard.angez naale haiN
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Tahira ji,

salaam,

aap buhat jazbaatee aur haqeeqat pasaNd tehree le kar aa'ee heiN, maiN ne deikhaa hai ke maasha'allah aap haqeeqee waardaatoN par buhat achaa likhtee heiN. aap kee yee tehree bhee dil ko choo ga'ee aur buhat pasaNd aa'ee, daad paish karti hooN.

maiN ne bhee ka'ee aik baar koshish kee ke shaayad aisaa kuch maiN bhee likh paa'ooN magar hamesha meree naa.ehlee aaRe aa ga'ee aur chaahane par bhee kuch na likh paa'ee.

khair, allah kare zor e qalam aur zeyaadah!

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wah mashaAllah Imam-e-Hussain ke Huzoor aap ka ye salaam humein bhi bahut pasand aaya...daad haazir hai!

Koi pooche humse hamaari haalat ka sabab
to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai

Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
Na Gham jaata hai na khushi aati hai
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Tahira Masood Sahiba


aap ki is nazm ko paRh kar dil aap ki soch ki gehraai ka qaail ho gaya....... bohut dil pazeer nazm likhi hai aap nay .... is ka ajr tou aap ko milay ga hi ....saath hi her wo nazar jo is nazm ko jazb kartay huay Ishq-e-Imam maiN labraiz hui hogi......us say girnay waalay har qatray ke awiz aap per rehmatoN ki baarish hui hogi.......aap nay shuroo maiN jo kaha ke wazn ka dhiyaan isliye nahiN rakha ke sirf taassuraat bayan karna maqsood tha tou Tahira Ji!!.....ye nazm paRhtay huay mujhay tou wazn aur behr ka koi ehsaas hi nahiN raha ....maine sirf isay mehsoos kiya....aur dil main utaar liya.....Allah aap ko is ki jaza day ....Ameen


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Tahira Masood Sahiba


aap ki is nazm ko paRh kar dil aap ki soch ki gehraai ka qaail ho gaya....... bohut dil pazeer nazm likhi hai aap nay .... is ka ajr tou aap ko milay ga hi ....saath hi her wo nazar jo is nazm ko jazb kartay huay Ishq-e-Imam maiN labraiz hui hogi......us say girnay waalay har qatray ke awiz aap per rehmatoN ki baarish hui hogi.......aap nay shuroo maiN jo kaha ke wazn ka dhiyaan isliye nahiN rakha ke sirf taassuraat bayan karna maqsood tha tou Tahira Ji!!.....ye nazm paRhtay huay mujhay tou wazn aur behr ka koi ehsaas hi nahiN raha ....maine sirf isay mehsoos kiya....aur dil main utaar liya.....Allah aap ko is ki jaza day ....Ameen


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nigaah wrote:Tahira Masood Sahiba


aap ki is nazm ko paRh kar dil aap ki soch ki gehraai ka qaail ho gaya....... bohut dil pazeer nazm likhi hai aap nay .... is ka ajr tou aap ko milay ga hi ....saath hi her wo nazar jo is nazm ko jazb kartay huay Ishq-e-Imam maiN labraiz hui hogi......us say girnay waalay har qatray ke awiz aap per rehmatoN ki baarish hui hogi.......aap nay shuroo maiN jo kaha ke wazn ka dhiyaan isliye nahiN rakha ke sirf taassuraat bayan karna maqsood tha tou Tahira Ji!!.....ye nazm paRhtay huay mujhay tou wazn aur behr ka koi ehsaas hi nahiN raha ....maine sirf isay mehsoos kiya....aur dil main utaar liya.....Allah aap ko is ki jaza day ....Ameen


Nigaah

moHtermah Nigaah ji

salaam

Allah ta'alah aap ko es pazeeraaii k liay ajr-e-Azeem ataa fermaaey.Ameen

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