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EK TAZA GHAZAL APKI SAMAATON MEN

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QITA
WOH SHAJAR JO TAWEEL HOTEY HAIN
UNKE SAYE BARHE NAHIN HOTE

IS LIYE TEZ DHOOP SE BACHKER
SAYE MEN HUM KHARHE NAHIN HOTEY

GHAZAL
SAHNE GULSHAN WOHI BAHAR WOHI
KION NAHIN HAI DILON MEN PIYAAR WOHI

KAB KA TOOFAAN GUZAR GAYA AAKER
PHIR BHI CHEHRON PE HAI GHUBAR WOHI

UN SE BICHRHE GUZAR GAYEEN SADIYAAN
HAI MERE DILKO INTEZAR WOHI

AB NAHIN BAAM-O- DAR WOH PAHLE SE
AB NAHIN HAIN KIRAYE DAAR WOHI

DIL KE MASOOM SE KIWARON PER
EK DASTAK HAI BAAR BAAR WOHI

JISNE HUMKO DUBO DIYA 'EHSAN
DIL KI KASHTEE PE HAI SAWAR WOHI
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Re: EK TAZA GHAZAL APKI SAMAATON MEN

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Ehsan Raza wrote:
QITA
WOH SHAJAR JO TAWEEL HOTEY HAIN
UNKE SAYE BARHE NAHIN HOTE

IS LIYE TEZ DHOOP SE BACHKER
SAYE MEN HUM KHARHE NAHIN HOTEY

GHAZAL
SAHNE GULSHAN WOHI BAHAR WOHI
KION NAHIN HAI DILON MEN PIYAAR WOHI

KAB KA TOOFAAN GUZAR GAYA AAKER
PHIR BHI CHEHRON PE HAI GHUBAR WOHI

UN SE BICHRHE GUZAR GAYEEN SADIYAAN
HAI MERE DILKO INTEZAR WOHI

AB NAHIN BAAM-O- DAR WOH PAHLE SE
AB NAHIN HAI KIRAYE DAAR WOHI

KOI DARWAZA-E- DIL KHOLTA HAI
EK DASTAK HAI BAAR BAAR WOHI

JISNE HUMKO DUBO DIYA 'EHSAN
DIL KI KASHTEE PE HAI SAWAR WOHI
muHtaramee Ehsan SaaHeb: aadaab!

aap se is meHfil meN mil kar Khushee huyee! inshaa-Allah mulaaqaat hotee rahe gee. aap kee Ghazal dekh`ee aur pasand aayee. sab hee ash,a'ar achh`e aur jadeed raNg-e-taGhazzul ke aa,eenah-daar haiN. daad qubool keejiYe.
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SAHNE GULSHAN WOHI BAHAR WOHI
KION NAHIN HAI DILON MEN PIYAAR WOHI

KAB KA TOOFAAN GUZAR GAYA AAKER
PHIR BHI CHEHRON PE HAI GHUBAR WOHI

UN SE BICHRHE GUZAR GAYEEN SADIYAAN
HAI MERE DILKO INTEZAR WOHI

AB NAHIN BAAM-O- DAR WOH PAHLE SE
AB NAHIN HAI KIRAYE DAAR WOHI
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KOI DARWAZA-E- DIL KHOLTA HAI
EK DASTAK HAI BAAR BAAR WOHI

aap se is she'r meN :typo: to naheeN ho gayaa? pehlaa miSra' naaqiS-ul-wazn hai. durust farmaa leN. jin logoN ko Roman meN kitaabat kee mahaarat naheeN hotee hai un se kabh`ee kabh`ee aisee :typo: ho jaatee hai.
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JISNE HUMKO DUBO DIYA 'EHSAN
DIL KI KASHTEE PE HAI SAWAR WOHI
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ek kaamyaab kaawish par mubaarakbaad!

Sarwar A. Raz "Sarwar"
yooN aur bohat a'ib haiN :Sarwar: meN wa-lekin
kambaKht muHabbat meN to yaktaa nazar aayaa

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MOHATRAM SARWAR RAAZ SB
TASLEEM
GHAZAL KI PAZIRAI AOR HIMMAT AFZAI KE LIYE BEHAD MASHKOOR HOON AAP KA FARMAAN BILKUL DURUST HAI WOH MISRAH HI US GHAZA KA NAHIN THA AAP JAISE ASATAZA AGAR EK MISRE PER BHI DAAD DE DEN TO WOH EK TALIBE ILM KE LIYE SAARI ZINDAGI KA SARMAYA HAI
SHUKRIYA EHSAN BADAUNI
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Bahut khoob

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MuHtarami
Ehsan Raza Badauni Saahib,

PurkhulooS tasleemaat, :-)

Aapki ghazal bahut pasand aayi jiske liye meri dili daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayiye.

TafSeeli tabSirah karne se maAzoor hooN kiyunkeh mere computer meiN kuch mushkileN heiN jinke ilaaj meiN lagaa houaa hooN. Is liye aap se
maAzirat khwaah hooN.

khush rehiye.


Aapka MukhliS,
Nazir.

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Ehsaan RaZa saaheb,

aadaab,

aap ke yeH ghazal behad pasand aaii..ek dil fareb Ghazal ke liye main aap ko daad aur mubaarak baad dena chaahuNga.. Qubool farmaayeN..

-Mayank
hoti Shiddat teri vafaaooN meiN
maaNg lete tujhe duaaooN meiN
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[ [JANAAB GHAZAL KI PAZIRAI KE LIYE BEHAD MASHKOOR HOON KHUDA KARE AAPSE ISEE TARHA MULAQAT HOTEE RAHEY
EHSAN BADAUNI/b][/quote]
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[ MOHATRAM NAZIR SB
HAUSLA AFZAI KE LIYE BEHAD MASHKOOR HOON
AAP JAISE ASATAZA KI SARPARASTEE SADA HAMARE SARON PER SEHAT YAABI KE SAATH QAYEM RAHEY
EHSAN BADAUNI
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