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by poetrazi » Sat Oct 14, 2006 5:31 pm
Dukh to nahin k tanha masafat main mer gia
Acha hua main tayri muhabat main mer gia
Haakim khud apnay ehd e hakoomat main mer gia
Zinda wohi raha jo baghawat main mer gia
Kuch nafratoN ki nazr hua mayra yeh wajood
Baaqi jo bach gia tha muhabat main mer gia
Mujh ko kabhi hisaar main na lay saka koi
Main is liay bas apni hiraasat main mer gia
Ab to yeh baat tum ko bohat nagawaar hy
Laykin agar kabhi main haqeeqat main mer gia?
Us ki muhabaton ka razi zikr kia karooN
Itna sakooN mila k aziyyat main mer gia
Razi-ud-din Razi
Abdullah Nazir
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by Abdullah Nazir » Wed Nov 01, 2006 8:05 am
MuHtarami
Razi ud-dden Razi SaaHib,
PurkhulooS Tasleemaat,
Aap ne aek sakht radeef "meN mar gayaa" ke isteAmaal ke baavajoo bahut achchi ghazal likhkhi hei jiske liye meri dili daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayiye.
Aapka MukhliS,
Nazir.
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by poetrazi » Sun Nov 12, 2006 8:41 pm
WEBMASTER wrote:
MuHtarami
Razi ud-dden Razi SaaHib,
PurkhulooS Tasleemaat,
Aap ne aek sakht radeef "meN mar gayaa" ke isteAmaal ke baavajoo bahut achchi ghazal likhkhi hei jiske liye meri dili daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayiye.
Aapka MukhliS,
Nazir.
shukria janab abdullah sahab
razi
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by poetrazi » Sun Nov 12, 2006 8:43 pm
sara_j wrote: [quote="poetrazi
Dukh to nahin k tanha masafat main mer gia
Acha hua main tayri muhabat main mer gia
Haakim khud apnay ehd e hakoomat main mer gia
Zinda wohi raha jo baghawat main mer gia
Kuch nafratoN ki nazr hua mayra yeh wajood
Baaqi jo bach gia tha muhabat main mer gia
Mujh ko kabhi hisaar main na lay saka koi
Main is liay bas apni hiraasat main mer gia
Ab to yeh baat tum ko bohat nagawaar hy
Laykin agar kabhi main haqeeqat main mer gia?
Us ki muhabaton ka razi zikr kia karooN
Itna sakooN mila k aziyyat main mer gia
Razi-ud-din Razi
Razi sahib ye ghazal bhi pasand aayi balke ashaar sab dil ko chuu gaye.
daad qubool keejiye.
sara[/quote]
shukria sara ji
razi