she'r
kartaa naheeN meN garcheh koi da'waa-e-ManSoor
seenay meN dabee baat ko raKhtaa naheeN mastoor
ho shaai'r-e-gumnaam keh ho shaai'r-e-mash,hoor
hay she'r wahee fikr peh kartaa hay jo majboor
jo dil se nikaltaa hay pahunchtaa hay diloN tak
jo bujhtee huwee sham'oN ko kar detaa hay pur.noor
jo so.ay huwe dard jagaataa hay yakaayak
maayoos naheeN kartaa agar kartaa hay ranjoor
saame' peh giraaN guzray nah jo talkhee ke baa.'ic
qaaree ho mukhaalif bhi to qaaree ko ho manzoor
Iqbal kaa ik bait hay tamceel ke shaayaaN
mabnee.ba.Haqeeqat hay takhayyul se hay bharpoor
andaaz-e-bayaaN aag ki maanind hay pur.josh
paanee ki taraH Saaf hay pairaaya-o-mazkoor
parwaaz hay donoN ki usee aik faZaa meN
shaaheeN kaa jahaaN aur hay kargas kaa jahaaN aur
Haif ! ab keh sukhan maail-e-be.raahrawee hay
afsos keh mastoN ko karay aur bhi makhmoor
mojoodah zamaanay meN woh har shakhS sukhanwar
lay jaataa ho jo meHwar-o-markaz se bahut door
ash.'aar heN maykhaanay ki bahkee huwee baateN
sonay peh suhaagah yeh keh shaa.'ir huwaa maGhroor
bay par ki uRaanaa hay naheeN shaai'ree hargiz
woh she'r hi kyaa she'r jo paiGhaam se mahjoor
takhleeq bhi kya woh jo hay barbaadee ke darpay
ta'meer bhi kyaa woh jo hay takhreeb peh maamoor
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Bahut khoob, waah waah
MuHtarami
YaSir Shaah SaaHib,
PurkhulooS tasleemaat,
Aek Taweel AarSe ke baAd aapki bahut hee achchi nazm ba'unwaan-e-sheAr paRhne ko mili. Is kamyaab ilmi nazm ke liye meri dili daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayiye.
Aapka MukhliS,
Nazir.
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Re: Bahut khoob, waah waah
muHtaram janaabWEBMASTER wrote:
MuHtarami
YaSir Shaah SaaHib,
PurkhulooS tasleemaat,
Aek Taweel AarSe ke baAd aapki bahut hee achchi nazm ba'unwaan-e-sheAr paRhne ko mili. Is kamyaab ilmi nazm ke liye meri dili daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayiye.
Aapka MukhliS,
Nazir.
Abdullah Nazir SaaHib !
aap ki tasleemaat par sar-e-tasleem.kham
aur
assalamOalaikuM
hamaishah ki taraH aap ki faraakhdilee, dil baaGh baaGh kar ga.ee phir bhee aap ki ta'meeree tanqeed aur tajaaweez baraa-e-iSlaaH nah paa kar tishnagee see baaqee hay -
ummeed hay rabt qaaim raKheN gay-
khush rahye
du'aago
yasir
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Salam Yasir sb,
iss bazm meiN nayaa hooN. aap ki do takhleeqat nazar se guzr chuki haiN donoaN hi bohat pasand aa-aaeN. daad qabool keejiaye.
Talib e ilm,
Muhammad Khawar.
iss bazm meiN nayaa hooN. aap ki do takhleeqat nazar se guzr chuki haiN donoaN hi bohat pasand aa-aaeN. daad qabool keejiaye.
Talib e ilm,
Muhammad Khawar.
Muhammad K. Siddiqui.
+92 321 4435273
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Pakistan.
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+92 321 4435273
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Pakistan.
+92 42 111516516
muhammad_19k@hotmail.com
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muhammad_19k wrote:Salam Yasir sb,
iss bazm meiN nayaa hooN. aap ki do takhleeqat nazar se guzr chuki haiN donoaN hi bohat pasand aa-aaeN. daad qabool keejiaye.
Talib e ilm,
Muhammad Khawar.
Muhammad Khawar saaHib!
assalamoa'laikuM
aap ko bazm meN khushaamdeed kahtaa hooN - aap ki daad mere liye baa.i'c-e-masarrat hay ,,ummeed hay ab mulaaqaatoN kaa silsilah chal niklay gaa-
khush rahye
du'aago
yasir