aik baar phir aik koshish ki hai oar aap logoaN ki khidmat meiN kari aazmaish ke leeaye paish kar rahaa hooN. apne har tarah ke tabsare se nawaziaye ga. Oar ghazal ko aise daikhiaye ga jaise iss par tanqeed karne ka aap ko inaam milnaa ho waise inaam mile ga to zaroor. mere shukriya ki soorat meiN.
Ghazal paish e khidmat hai
1.Wo aayeN khud hi ub iss ko manaane
Bhalaa dil kab hei meri baat maane.
2. yeh dunyaadaari rehne do miyaaN ab
nahiN heiN shehr meiN apne Thikaane
3. miri aankhaoN se dekhouge agar tum
nazar aayenge kuch manzar suhaane
Guzarish 24 ke liYe kahe gaee aap kee Ghazal bohot hee pasand aaee hai. meree t^araf se dilee dad aor mubarak baad qubool kijiYe!
bazm meN tashreef late rahiYe. aor apnee giraaN gadr takhleeqaat se lut^f andooz hone ka maoqa' de kar shukriYah mashkoor hooN.
1.Wo aayeN khud hi ub iss ko manaane
Bhalaa dil kab hei meri baat maane.
2. yeh dunyaadaari rehne do miyaaN ab
nahiN heiN shehr meiN apne Thikaane
3. miri aankhaoN se dekhouge agar tum
nazar aayenge kuch manzar suhaane
Mein aap ki daad ka shukar guzar hooN laikin agar aap ke huzoor zubaaN bandi naheeN toa kehne ki ijaazat deejiaye ke ye tabsara waisa naheeN jaisa aap ne waada kiya thaa -:)
Mein aap ki dua oar daad ke leeaye baihad shukar guzaar hooN. Allah taala aap ka martabaa oar buland kare.
Waise to aap ka itnaa keh dainaa hi mere leeaye bohat hai ke aap ko ghazal pasand aa-ee. Laikin dil aik bache ki tarah oar se oar ki khaahish kartaa hai. agar aap dobaraa aap ko kuch time milay oar aap ye vazaahat karaiN mere ashhar meiN kahaaN kahaaN behtari ki gunjaish hai to mere leeaye baa-is e fakhar ho ga.
aik baar phir aik koshish ki hai oar aap logoaN ki khidmat meiN kari aazmaish ke leeaye paish kar rahaa hooN. apne har tarah ke tabsare se nawaziaye ga. Oar ghazal ko aise daikhiaye ga jaise iss par tanqeed karne ka aap ko inaam milnaa ho waise inaam mile ga to zaroor. mere shukriya ki soorat meiN.
Ghazal paish e khidmat hai
1.Wo aayeN khud hi ub iss ko manaane
Bhalaa dil kab hei meri baat maane.
2. yeh dunyaadaari rehne do miyaaN ab
nahiN heiN shehr meiN apne Thikaane
3. miri aankhaoN se dekhouge agar tum
nazar aayenge kuch manzar suhaane
aap ki daad mere leeaye kiss tamhgay se kam naheeN hay. meiN aap ka shukar guzaar hooN. laikin wohi baat ke tishnigi reh jaati hai mairi shairi ko behtar karne kee leeaye koi aik mashawara agar aap daite rahaiN to meiN bohat shukarguzar hooN ga.
muhammad_19k wrote:Wallaikum us Salam Wa rehmatullah,
Haamid Sb.
aap ki daad mere leeaye kiss tamhgay se kam naheeN hay.
zahay naseeb.
meiN aap ka shukar guzaar hooN.
nawaazish aapki.
laikin wohi baat ke tishnigi reh jaati hai mairi shairi ko behtar karne kee leeaye koi aik mashawara agar aap daite rahaiN to meiN bohat shukarguzar hooN ga.
hum khud tiflay maktab hai.n.phir bhi kaushish kare.nge insha allah.
pehlay aap koyee ghalati tau kare.n(waisay amadan nahi.n)
regards,
Muhammad Khawar.
regards to you too
haamidbaaqri
mai.n to karta nahi.n kuch aur ebaadat ke siwa
paas mere nahi.n kuch aur mohabbat ke siwa
ho saktaa hai ke ye yahaaN ke rasm na rahi ho. Oar agar meri baat kissi tarah bhi iss baad adab ke mehfil ki humat ki leeaye toa bus ishaar kar deejiaye gaa. meiN "edit" ke sahoolat se isse khatam kar dooN ga.
Tabsarajaat par tabsaraa!!!
Mein tamaam dostoan ka shukarguzaar hooN. ke unhoaN ne waqt nikaal kar mairi ghazal paRhi oar uss par apni raa-aye ka izhaar kiya. laikin mieN samajhtaa hooN, shafqat, mohabbat, hoslaafazai oar muslehat ko bohat ziada nazar meiN rakhaa gayaa hai. agar aise ahle adab logaoN ke tabsiraa ke baad bhi mujhe pataa na chalaa ke
1. Mairi ghazal meiN kia cheez achhi hai.
2. kiss jagaa kamzori hai.
3. kia cheez buri hai.
bus sub achhchha ki aawaaz hai jo kissi taraH bhi kissi shakhs ki takhleeqat meiN koi behtari naheeN laa sakti.
Apni iss raa-aye ke leeaye meiN tamaam dostoaN se maazrat chahtaa hooN.