Meri booooooohat puranee Gazal..............

Post by **jawaid badauni** » Sat Dec 16, 2006 11:05 am

Buzurgaan.e moHtaram wa
azeezaan.e giraamee
Aadaab

Aaaj baiThe baiThe ek bohat hi purani Gazal yaad aa gaii hai. Yeh un dinoN ki baat hai jub maiN Badaun meN tha aur mujhe choTee zameen meN Gazal kahne ka bohat shauq tha. Ustaad.e moHtaram Payam Kakraalwee Sahab un dinoN hayat thEy. MaiN ne unse ya Raunaq Badauni SaHab marHoom se baqaaidah islaah tou nahiN lee thee magar chund alfaz ke inteKhaab meN Pyaam SaHab se mashwarah zaroor kiya tha.

Iss Gazal ne bohat see purani yadeN taza kar dee haiN. Tamam ashAAr tou yaad nahiN aaye kyuuNkeh Hafiza bhi ab kamzoor ho chala hai phir bhee jo chund ashAAr yaad aa gaye aapki nazr kar raha hooN.

MuKhliS
Jawaid Badauni
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jitnee baar gaye gulshan tak
kaanTe hi aaye daaman tak

kaise kaise moR aate haiN
Khuwaahish.e fun se manzil.e fun tak

Zikr chalaa tha ashk.e Gam ka
Baat gaii unke daaman tak

Josh.e junooN. hi saath raha hai
naara.e huq se daar.o.rasan tak

dard ki lai kuch dheemee rakhiye
ghar ki baat rahe aaNgan tak

subH.e chaman tou hogee lekin
kaun jiyega subH.e chaman tak

:Jawaid: ab tou hosh meN aao
Sholay aa pahooNchey daaman tak

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dunya dehlawi · Post by **dunya dehlawi** » Sun Dec 17, 2006 1:42 am

HaZrat Jawaid Badauni Saaheb,

Aadab o taslimat,

Apki ghazal parhkar bahut lutf aayaa, Meri dili dad qubool keeje.

jitnee baar gaye gulshan tak
kaanTe hi aaye daaman tak

kaise kaise moR aate haiN
Khuwaahish.e fun se manzil.e fun tak

Zikr chalaa tha ashk.e Gam ka
Baat gaii unke daaman tak

Josh.e junooN. hi saath raha hai
naara.e huq se daar.o.rasan tak

dard ki lai kuch dheemee rakhiye
ghar ki baat rahe aaNgan tak

subH.e chaman tou hogee lekin
kaun jiyega subH.e chaman tak

:Jawaid: ab tou hosh meN aao
Sholay aa pahooNchey daaman tak

Is ghazal kee radeef meN lafz "tak" ko nibhaanaa apka kamal hei. Matle meN "tak" se baat yuN samajh meN ati hei ke aap chaman meN dakhil nahiN houve raste meN hee daaman "tak" kanTe hee aye.

Sare ashar bahut pasand aye khas taor per doosre sher se akhir tak.

Khairandesh,
Dunya

abdulhadiruswa · Post by **abdulhadiruswa** » Sun Dec 17, 2006 1:56 am

HaZrat Jawaid Badauni Saaheb,

Aadab,,

Apki ghazal ke saare ashAar bahut pasand aay jinke liye khaksar kee dili daad aur mubarakbad qubool farmayiye.

jitnee baar gaye gulshan tak
kaanTe hi aaye daaman tak

kaise kaise moR aate haiN
Khuwaahish.e fun se manzil.e fun tak

Zikr chalaa tha ashk.e Gam ka
Baat gaii unke daaman tak

Josh.e junooN. hi saath raha hai
naara.e huq se daar.o.rasan tak

dard ki lai kuch dheemee rakhiye
ghar ki baat rahe aaNgan tak

subH.e chaman tou hogee lekin
kaun jiyega subH.e chaman tak

:Jawaid: ab tou hosh meN aao
Sholay aa pahooNchey daaman tak

khaksar,
Abdul Hadi ruswa,

Post by **jawaid badauni** » Sun Dec 17, 2006 3:33 pm

dunya dehlawi wrote:
HaZrat Jawaid Badauni Saaheb,

Aadab o taslimat,

Apki ghazal parhkar bahut lutf aayaa, Meri dili dad qubool keeje.

jitnee baar gaye gulshan tak
kaanTe hi aaye daaman tak

kaise kaise moR aate haiN
Khuwaahish.e fun se manzil.e fun tak

Zikr chalaa tha ashk.e Gam ka
Baat gaii unke daaman tak

Josh.e junooN. hi saath raha hai
naara.e huq se daar.o.rasan tak

dard ki lai kuch dheemee rakhiye
ghar ki baat rahe aaNgan tak

subH.e chaman tou hogee lekin
kaun jiyega subH.e chaman tak

:Jawaid: ab tou hosh meN aao
Sholay aa pahooNchey daaman tak

Is ghazal kee radeef meN lafz "tak" ko nibhaanaa apka kamal hei. Matle meN "tak" se baat yuN samajh meN ati hei ke aap chaman meN dakhil nahiN houve raste meN hee daaman "tak" kanTe hee aye.

Sare ashar bahut pasand aye khas taor per doosre sher se akhir tak.

Khairandesh,
Dunya

MoHtarma Dunya SaaHibah
Aadaaq qubool farmaaiye

Ek arSaa.e Taweel ke bAAd aap ka Khat dekh kar bohat Khooshee huwee. Gazal ki pazeeraayee ke liye behud mamnoon hooN. Ummid hai aaindah bhee himmat afzaaii farmatee raheNgee,

Matley meN "tak" lafz ka istaimal zaroorat.e she'ree ke pesh.e nazar hai. Aapko deegar ashAAr bohat pasaNd aaye mujhe iskee Khooshee hai.

Ek baar phir shukriya.

KhooSkaar,
Jawaid Badauni

Post by **jawaid badauni** » Sun Dec 17, 2006 3:36 pm

abdulhadiruswa wrote:
HaZrat Jawaid Badauni Saaheb,

Aadab,,

Apki ghazal ke saare ashAar bahut pasand aay jinke liye khaksar kee dili daad aur mubarakbad qubool farmayiye.

jitnee baar gaye gulshan tak
kaanTe hi aaye daaman tak

kaise kaise moR aate haiN
Khuwaahish.e fun se manzil.e fun tak

Zikr chalaa tha ashk.e Gam ka
Baat gaii unke daaman tak

Josh.e junooN. hi saath raha hai
naara.e huq se daar.o.rasan tak

dard ki lai kuch dheemee rakhiye
ghar ki baat rahe aaNgan tak

subH.e chaman tou hogee lekin
kaun jiyega subH.e chaman tak

:Jawaid: ab tou hosh meN aao
Sholay aa pahooNchey daaman tak

khaksar,
Abdul Hadi ruswa,

MoHtarmee wa mukarramee
Abdul Hadi Ruswa SaaHab

Aadaab.o.tasleemaat

Gazal ki purKhulooS pazeeraayee ke liye aapka marhoone minnathooN. Ummid in mahafil meN aap se mulaaqaat hoti rahegee.

MuKhliS
Jawaid Badauni

Post by **sbashwar** » Sat Dec 23, 2006 12:15 pm

Mohtaram jawaid Badauni sahib

Umda ghazal kahi aapne. Aapki ghazal ka matl'a aur zail ka share khaas-taur par bohat pasand ayaa.

dard ki lai kuch dheemee rakhiye
ghar ki baat rahe aaNgan tak

Daad aur mubarakbaad qubool kijiye.
Shukria
Salem Bashwar

Post by **jawaid badauni** » Sat Dec 23, 2006 7:51 pm

sara_j wrote:
jawaid badauni wrote:Buzurgaan.e moHtaram wa
azeezaan.e giraamee
Aadaab

Aaaj baiThe baiThe ek bohat hi purani Gazal yaad aa gaii hai. Yeh un dinoN ki baat hai jub maiN Badaun meN tha aur mujhe choTee zameen meN Gazal kahne ka bohat shauq tha. Ustaad.e moHtaram Payam Kakraalwee Sahab un dinoN hayat thEy. MaiN ne unse ya Raunaq Badauni SaHab marHoom se baqaaidah islaah tou nahiN lee thee magar chund alfaz ke inteKhaab meN Pyaam SaHab se mashwarah zaroor kiya tha.

Iss Gazal ne bohat see purani yadeN taza kar dee haiN. Tamam ashAAr tou yaad nahiN aaye kyuuNkeh Hafiza bhi ab kamzoor ho chala hai phir bhee jo chund ashAAr yaad aa gaye aapki nazr kar raha hooN.

MuKhliS
Jawaid Badauni
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jitnee baar gaye gulshan tak
kaanTe hi aaye daaman tak

kaise kaise moR aate haiN
Khuwaahish.e fun se manzil.e fun tak

Zikr chalaa tha ashk.e Gam ka
Baat gaii unke daaman tak

Josh.e junooN. hi saath raha hai
naara.e huq se daar.o.rasan tak

dard ki lai kuch dheemee rakhiye
ghar ki baat rahe aaNgan tak

subH.e chaman tou hogee lekin
kaun jiyega subH.e chaman tak

:Jawaid: ab tou hosh meN aao
Sholay aa pahooNchey daaman tak

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jawaid bhai salaam,

ghazal ne aapki purani yaadein taza kardein aur ye ghazal

paRhker humein aapke us zamaane ki aur ghazlein paRhne

ka shauq horaha hai.

chouTi behr mein bohat hi mutarannum aur umda ghazal hai.

daad qubool keejiye.

sara

Sara SaaHibah
A A A S

Aapki purKhuloos daad ke liye behud mamnoon hooN.

Khoosh raheN!

Jawaid

Post by **jawaid badauni** » Sat Dec 23, 2006 7:53 pm

sbashwar wrote:Mohtaram jawaid Badauni sahib

Umda ghazal kahi aapne. Aapki ghazal ka matl'a aur zail ka share khaas-taur par bohat pasand ayaa.

dard ki lai kuch dheemee rakhiye
ghar ki baat rahe aaNgan tak

Daad aur mubarakbaad qubool kijiye.
Shukria
Salem Bashwar

MoHtarmee Salem Bashwar Saahab
Aadaab

Gazal ki pazeeraayee ke liye aap ka behud mamnoon hooN.

Ummi dhai aaindah bhee aap se is bazm meN mulaaqaat rahegee.

Aapka MukhliS
jawaid Badauni

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