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mohtaram Z^iYa baloch SaHibaor yaran-e-meHfil aadaab!
kaese mizaaj haiN!
aap kee tazah Ghazal "e'eed ka din hai" dekh~ne ka maoqa' mila. bohot u'mdah aor pur lut^f asha'aar kahe haiN aap ne. mujh~e aap kee Ghazal is qadar pasad aaee keh aek ek she'er paRh~ta jata aor suroor-e-she'er meN mast ho kar Ghazal par Ghazal ho gaee.
idh~ar aap kee Ghazal tamaam hoee aor udh~ar saath~ hee maiN ne bh~ee Ghazal mukammal keh dee. sao Yeh Ghazal aap ke naam kar raha hooN.
dostooN se iltamaas hai keh mulaHeZ^ah farma kar shukriyah ada karne ka meHel faraHam kareeN.
Ghazal
(moHtaramZ^iYa Baloch kee nazr)
1,
gul-e-muraad kh~ilao keh e'eed ka din hai
reYaZ^-e-deher sajao keh e'eed ka din hai.
2,
saNwaro gesu-e-hastee ko aaj jaaN de kar
koee to e'hd nibh~ao keh e'eed ka din hai.
3,
maiN jee raha hoN muHabbat meN khak-e-pa ho kar
mujh~e nah aese uRao keh e'eed ka din hai.
4,
nah ab rahee hai kaheeN z^ulmat-e-shab-e-hijraaN
charaaGh-e-rah bujh~ao keh e'eed ka din hai.
5,
rafu-e-chaak-e-gareebaaN kee fikr lazim hai
mujh~e gale se lagao keh e'eed ka din hai.
6,
t^uwaaf-e-kochah-e-janaaN kee a'zmateeN taobah!
naSeeb apna jagao keh e'eed ka din hai.
7,
nah beTh~o aaj ke din mekade meN tishnah lab!
jigar kee peYaas bujh~ao keh e'eed ka din hai.
8,
safeenah maoj-e-t^alat^um meN Dubne ko hai
ise bh~aNwar se bachao keh e'eed ka din hai.
9,
e'laaj-e-tangee-e-damaaN ko mere kafee hai
SeHn meN ph~ool kh~ilao keh e'eed ka din hai.
10,
mujh~e a'zeez haiN lamHaat-e-talkhee-e-daoraaN
nah mujh~ peh ashk bahao keh e'eed ka din hai.
11,
Ghazal suna keh Z^iYa tum ne jeet lee bazee!
yeh gur hameeN bh~ee sikh~ao keh e'eed ka din hai.
12,
maiN kh~o geYa hooN Muz^affar hajoom-e-dunYa meN
khuda ra Dh~oND ke lao keh e'eed ka din hai.
Talib-e-dua'a
Muz^affar
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Bahut khoob, waah waah
MJuHtarami
Muzaffar Ahmed Muzaffar SSaaHib,
PurkhulooS Tasleemaat,
Aap ne apni mandarja-e-zeil ghazal jou Zia Baloch kee nazr kee hei, bahut pasand aayi jiske liye meri dili daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayiye.
gul-e-muraad kh~ilao keh e'eed ka din hai
reYaZ^-e-deher sajao keh e'eed ka din hai.
2,
saNwaro gesu-e-hastee ko aaj jaaN de kar
koee to e'hd nibh~ao keh e'eed ka din hai.
3,
maiN jee raha hoN muHabbat meN khak-e-pa ho kar
mujh~e nah aese uRao keh e'eed ka din hai.
4,
nah ab rahee hai kaheeN z^ulmat-e-shab-e-hijraaN
charaaGh-e-rah bujh~ao keh e'eed ka din hai.
5,
rafu-e-chaak-e-gareebaaN kee fikr lazim hai
mujh~e gale se lagao keh e'eed ka din hai.
6,
t^uwaaf-e-kochah-e-janaaN kee a'zmateeN taobah!
naSeeb apna jagao keh e'eed ka din hai.
7,
nah beTh~o aaj ke din mekade meN tishnah lab!
jigar kee peYaas bujh~ao keh e'eed ka din hai.
8,
safeenah maoj-e-t^alat^um meN Dubne ko hai
ise bh~aNwar se bachao keh e'eed ka din hai.
9,
e'laaj-e-tangee-e-damaaN ko mere kafee hai
SeHn meN ph~ool kh~ilao keh e'eed ka din hai.
10,
mujh~e a'zeez haiN lamHaat-e-talkhee-e-daoraaN
nah mujh~ peh ashk bahao keh e'eed ka din hai.
11,
Ghazal suna keh Z^iYa tum ne jeet lee bazee!
yeh gur hameeN bh~ee sikh~ao keh e'eed ka din hai.
12,
maiN kh~o geYa hooN Muz^affar hajoom-e-dunYa meN
khuda ra Dh~oND ke lao keh e'eed ka din hai.
Aapka MukhliS,
Nazir.
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