Meri ek aur puraane Ghazal.....................

[jawaid badauni]

Dosto, Aadaab

Aaj phir ek puraanee Ghazal yaad aa gaii hai. Radeef dushwaar hai isee liye ashAAr bhee kuch rawish se haT kar huuwe haiN. Ummid hai pasaNd farmayeNge. Aapki mo'tabar aara ka muntzir rahooNga.

Apka muKhliS
Jawaid Badauni

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Karke jafayeN saree jafakaar so gaye
mazloom jaagta hai sitamgaar so gaye

bedaar tou unheN bhee kiya tha zameer ne
karWat badal badal ke Khataakaar so gaye

jab aql hosh meN thee qalam haath meN nah tha
ab haath meN qalam hai tou afkaar so gaye

woh waqt bhee hai yaad keh mujh per paRa tha waqt
darwazah bund kar ke mire yaar so gaye

jo subH ki Talab meN nah soye tamaam raat
waqt.e sahar woh saare talabgaar so gaye

din ki than ne shub meN dikhaaya ajab kamal
zardaar jaage mufil.o.laachaar so gaye

:Jawaid: koii ley gaya raunaq sameT kar
lagta hai jaise koocha.o.baazaar so gaye

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[Muzaffar Ahmad Muzaffar]

mohtaram Jawaid Bh~aee aadaab!

aap ne jo apnee puranee GhazleeYaat ko pesh karne ka aek dilkash silsilah shura' kar rakh~a hai. baRa pur lut^f hai. aor yeh Ghazal usee silsilah-e-zanjeer kee aek kaRee hai.

is Ghazal meN aap apne u'moomee t^arz-e-baYaan aor a'aam rawish-e-sukhan se haT gae haiN. lekin ba eeN hamah kalam meN dilkashee aor ada bandee kee mehek badastoor meHsoos kee ja saktee hai. Ghazal meN gahe gahe taraqqee pasand fikr bh~ee acarpazeer ho gaee hai. jo us waqt ke garam khoon kee numae,indah bankar jamah-e-Ghazal ko rangeen bana rahee hai.

radeef "sao gaye" ko nibh~ana aasaan naheeN th~a. lekin aap ne maheranah fikr aor ustadanah chabakdastee ko baru-e-kaar late huwe shahkaar Ghazal keh dee hai.


Karke jafayeN saree jafakaar so gaye
mazloom jaagta hai sitamgaar so gaye

bohot khoob! waah waah!! =D>

bedaar tou unheN bhee kiya tha zameer ne
karWat badal badal ke Khataakaar so gaye

kiYa kehne!! waah!!

jab aql hosh meN thee qalam haath meN nah tha
ab haath meN qalam hai tou afkaar so gaye

kiYa kehne waah!! waah!! =D>

woh waqt bhee hai yaad keh mujh per paRa tha waqt
darwazah bund kar ke mire yaar so gaye

bohot khoob!! =D>

jo subH ki Talab meN nah soye tamaam raat
waqt.e sahar woh saare talabgaar so gaye

waah waah!! lajawab hai. =D>

din ki than ne shub meN dikhaaya ajab kamal
zardaar jaage mufil.o.laachaar so gaye

waah!

:Jawaid: koii ley gaya raunaq sameT kar
lagta hai jaise koocha.o.baazaar so gaye

bohot khoob waah waah lajawaab hai. waah!! =D>

is HaseeN tareen aor dilkash Ghazal par meree dad aor mubarak baad qubool kijiYe!

Wassalam
Muz^affar

[jawaid badauni]

mohtaram Jawaid Bh~aee aadaab!

aap ne jo apnee puranee GhazleeYaat ko pesh karne ka aek dilkash silsilah shura' kar rakh~a hai. baRa pur lut^f hai. aor yeh Ghazal usee silsilah-e-zanjeer kee aek kaRee hai.

is Ghazal meN aap apne u'moomee t^arz-e-baYaan aor a'aam rawish-e-sukhan se haT gae haiN. lekin ba eeN hamah kalam meN dilkashee aor ada bandee kee mehek badastoor meHsoos kee ja saktee hai. Ghazal meN gahe gahe taraqqee pasand fikr bh~ee acarpazeer ho gaee hai. jo us waqt ke garam khoon kee numae,indah bankar jamah-e-Ghazal ko rangeen bana rahee hai.

radeef "sao geYa" ko nibh~ana aasaan naheeN th~a. lekin aap ne maheranah fikr aor ustadanah chabakdastee ko baru-e-kaar late huwe shahkaar Ghazal keh dee hai.


Karke jafayeN saree jafakaar so gaye
mazloom jaagta hai sitamgaar so gaye

bohot khoob! waah waah!! =D>

bedaar tou unheN bhee kiya tha zameer ne
karWat badal badal ke Khataakaar so gaye

kiYa kehne!! waah!!

jab aql hosh meN thee qalam haath meN nah tha
ab haath meN qalam hai tou afkaar so gaye

kiYa kehne waah!! waah!! =D>

woh waqt bhee hai yaad keh mujh per paRa tha waqt
darwazah bund kar ke mire yaar so gaye

bohot khoob!! =D>

jo subH ki Talab meN nah soye tamaam raat
waqt.e sahar woh saare talabgaar so gaye

waah waah!! lajawab hai. =D>

din ki than ne shub meN dikhaaya ajab kamal
zardaar jaage mufil.o.laachaar so gaye

waah!

:Jawaid: koii ley gaya raunaq sameT kar
lagta hai jaise koocha.o.baazaar so gaye

bohot khoob waah waah lajawaab hai. waah!! =D>

is HaseeN tareen aor dilkash Ghazal par meree dad aor mubarak baad qubool kijiYe!

Wassalam
Muz^affar

Azeezi Muzaffar SaaHab
Aadaab.o.tasleeemaat

KahaN tak shukriya adaa karooN aur woh bhee kin alfaaz meN? Aap nihayat bharpoor daad se nawaazte hain aur woh bhee tafSeel ke saath. Bohat himmat afzaaii hoti hai.

Iss Ghazal per aap ke tabsarey ke liye aap ka behud mamnoon hooN.

Khoosh raheN!
Jawaid