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moHtaram Naz^ami SaHib aadaab!
aap ke asha'aar dekh~e kiya kehne neya rang aor neya andaaz le kar aap dunya-e-adab meN tashreef lae haiN. maiN aap kee jadeediyat aor kalam kee infaradiyat dekh~ kar is nateejah par pohncha hooN keh yeh meHeZ^ khuda daad SalaHiyat hee ho saktee hai.
meree janib se dilee dad aor mubarak baad qubool kijiYe!
Wassalam
Muz^affar A Muz^affar
aap ke asha'aar dekh~e kiya kehne neya rang aor neya andaaz le kar aap dunya-e-adab meN tashreef lae haiN. maiN aap kee jadeediyat aor kalam kee infaradiyat dekh~ kar is nateejah par pohncha hooN keh yeh meHeZ^ khuda daad SalaHiyat hee ho saktee hai.
meree janib se dilee dad aor mubarak baad qubool kijiYe!
Wassalam
Muz^affar A Muz^affar
Dilshad SaaHib, aadaab!
aap ka kalaam hamesha mujhe kuchh munfarid sa lagta hai. is baar bhi aap ki ghazal paRh kar bahut mutassir hui. Bahut Khoob mazameen aur umda andaaz-e-bayaaN!!! aik aik sher nageena hai. maiN daad pesh karti huuN.
aap ka kalaam hamesha mujhe kuchh munfarid sa lagta hai. is baar bhi aap ki ghazal paRh kar bahut mutassir hui. Bahut Khoob mazameen aur umda andaaz-e-bayaaN!!! aik aik sher nageena hai. maiN daad pesh karti huuN.
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Dilshaad Nazmi SaaHib, aadaab !!
aap ki Ghazal nehaayat munfarid aur Khoob hai , dil-o-jaan se pasand aa'ii hai ! andaaz-e-bayaaN bahut alag saa hai
aur mazaameen bhii Khoob haiN , daad qubool kejiye ! shukriya
Zia Baloch
aap ki Ghazal nehaayat munfarid aur Khoob hai , dil-o-jaan se pasand aa'ii hai ! andaaz-e-bayaaN bahut alag saa hai
aur mazaameen bhii Khoob haiN , daad qubool kejiye ! shukriya
Zia Baloch
Dikhaadi shaan, phir ahl-e-chaman ko, Be-niyaazi ki
Khamoshi se jhatak kar, aaj phir, dast-e-sabaa maiN ne
Zia Baloch
Khamoshi se jhatak kar, aaj phir, dast-e-sabaa maiN ne
Zia Baloch