zaroorat khurdare jismon ko itna dhaar kar de gi(gazal)

Kuhnah mashq ShoAraa kaa kalaam jo beHr meiN hounaa zaroori hei

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zaroorat khurdare jismon ko itna dhaar kar de gi(gazal)

Post by dilshadnazmi »

qaraeen kran

salam _o_alaekum ,,,,

eak taweel arse ke baad iss bazm mein hazir ho raha hoon ,


apni eak adna si gazal ke saath , hosla afzaayee ki darkhwast hai .
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moHtaram Naz^ami SaHib aadaab!

aap ke asha'aar dekh~e kiya kehne neya rang aor neya andaaz le kar aap dunya-e-adab meN tashreef lae haiN. maiN aap kee jadeediyat aor kalam kee infaradiyat dekh~ kar is nateejah par pohncha hooN keh yeh meHeZ^ khuda daad SalaHiyat hee ho saktee hai.

meree janib se dilee dad aor mubarak baad qubool kijiYe!

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Dilshad SaaHib, aadaab!

aap ka kalaam hamesha mujhe kuchh munfarid sa lagta hai. is baar bhi aap ki ghazal paRh kar bahut mutassir hui. Bahut Khoob mazameen aur umda andaaz-e-bayaaN!!! aik aik sher nageena hai. maiN daad pesh karti huuN.

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Dilshaad Nazmi SaaHib, aadaab !!

aap ki Ghazal nehaayat munfarid aur Khoob hai , dil-o-jaan se pasand aa'ii hai ! andaaz-e-bayaaN bahut alag saa hai
aur mazaameen bhii Khoob haiN , daad qubool kejiye ! shukriya

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