tarhi ghazal guzarish # 26

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tarhi ghazal guzarish # 26

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Assalaam o alaikum
muzaffar bhai

mohtaram abdullah nazir saahib kay micray per hamaari m'aamooli see kaushish peshay khidmmat hai.

gar qubool uftad zahay......

arz kiya hai.......


but kay aagay gidgidaana chor day
apni 'azmat ko ghataana chor day

aatishay dauzakh say bachna hai agar
haq yateemo.n ka too khaana chor day

saath hauta hai ghareebo.n kay khuda
dil ghareebo.n ka dukhaana chor day

'aql kay but taudna aasaa.n nahi.n
'aql mei.n unko basaana chor day

kehti hai taqdeer kuch tadbeer kar
raat din aansoo bahaana chor day

daulatay duniya kisee kee kab huee
isko too apna banaana chor day

aakhirat kee nemate.n anmol hai.n
"koyee kaisay dil lagaana chor day"

khudgharaz insaa.n hai.n haamid bhediye
aiso.n say rishta nibhaana chor day

nateejaye fikr
haamidbaaqri
al hamdulillah
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mukarram-o-moHtaram Hamid Baqri bh~aee :salaam2:

moa'tabar shae,ir Abdullah Nazir saHib ke miSra' aap ke asha'ar dekh~ne kee taofeeq milee. maashAlah bohot pur acar aor ieeman afrooz she'er keh kar aap ne apnee qadir-ul-kalamee aor pukhtah mashq-e-sukhan ka cuboot diya hai. :clap01:

meree dua'a hai keh khuda-e-buzurg-o-bartar aap SeHat-o-salamtee se rakh~e. aor aap ka babarakat wujood hamare darmiyaan salamat rahe. :ameen:

but kay aagay gidgidaana chor day
khud ki 'azmat ko ghataana chor day
mashallah

aatishay dauzakh say bachna hai agar
haq yateemo.n ka too khaana chor day
mashallah

saath hauta hai ghareebo.n kay khuda
dil ghareebo.n ka dukhaana chor day
mashallah

'aql kay but taudna aasaa.n nahi.n
'aql mei.n unko basaana chor day
mashallah

kehti hai taqdeer kuch tadbeer kar
raat din aansoo bahaana chor day
mashallah

daulatay duniya kisee kee nah huee
isko too apna banaana chor day
mashallah

aakhirat kee nemate.n anmol hai.n
"koyee kaisay dil lagaana chor day"
mashallah

khudgharaz insaa.n hai.n haamid bhediye
aiso.n say rishta nibhaana chor day
mashallah

is khubSurat kalam par meree janib se dilee mubaral baad aor Dh~erooN dad qubool farma kar shukriyah ada karne ka maoqa' deeN.

Wassalam
Muz^affar A Muz^affar
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muHtaram Hamid SaaHib !
assalamoa'laikum


aap ki Ghazal paRhee ,, mashaaAllah khoob hay ,, sachchay khayaalaat ko saadgee se naZ'm kartay heN ,, 'aam rawish se haT kar yeh aap ki sukhan.t'araazee cuboot hay keh aap ko taHseen ki khaaS parwaa naheeN -Allaah aap ko istiqaamat a't'aa farmaa.ay-

aur kyaa kahooN ,, yahaaN aa kar muNh baNd kartaa hooN keh

ud.'oo ilaa sabeeli rabbika bil.Hikmati wal.maui'Z'at.il.Hasanati,,,,


mukhliS
yasir

haamidbaaqri wrote:


but kay aagay gidgidaana chor day
khud ki 'azmat ko ghataana chor day

aatishay dauzakh say bachna hai agar
haq yateemo.n ka too khaana chor day

saath hauta hai ghareebo.n kay khuda
dil ghareebo.n ka dukhaana chor day

'aql kay but taudna aasaa.n nahi.n
'aql mei.n unko basaana chor day

kehti hai taqdeer kuch tadbeer kar
raat din aansoo bahaana chor day

daulatay duniya kisee kee nah huee
isko too apna banaana chor day

aakhirat kee nemate.n anmol hai.n
"koyee kaisay dil lagaana chor day"

khudgharaz insaa.n hai.n haamid bhediye
aiso.n say rishta nibhaana chor day

nateejaye fikr
haamidbaaqri
al hamdulillah
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Mohtaram Janab Hamid Sb,
Assalam o Alaikum,

aap ki ghazal ke tamaam hi ashhar bohat achhay oar dil fareb haiN. aap ke ashaar paRh kar hameshaa khushi hoti hai ke maqSad bohat wazeH aor soch bohat mazboot nazar aatee hai. darj zail shaer, ma'ani o bayaan ke leHaz se behtareen lagaa.

kehti hai taqdeer kuch tadbeer kar
raat din aansoo bahaana chor day


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Muzaffar Ahmad Muzaffar wrote:mukarram-o-moHtaram Hamid Baqri bh~aee :salaam2:
:walikum:
mohtaram muzaffar bhai


moa'tabar shae,ir Abdullah Nazir saHib ke miSra' aap ke asha'ar dekh~ne kee taofeeq milee.

zahay naseeb......

maashAlah bohot pur acar aor ieeman afrooz she'er keh kar aap ne apnee qadir-ul-kalamee aor pukhtah mashq-e-sukhan ka cuboot diya hai. :clap01:

bahut bahut shukriya aapki hausalah afzaayee ka.

meree dua'a hai keh khuda-e-buzurg-o-bartar aap SeHat-o-salamtee se rakh~e. aor aap ka babarakat wujood hamare darmiyaan salamat rahe. :ameen:

muzaffar bhai ....aap bahut mukhlis hai.n.jazakallah

but kay aagay gidgidaana chor day
khud ki 'azmat ko ghataana chor day
mashallah

bahut bahut shukriya

aatishay dauzakh say bachna hai agar
haq yateemo.n ka too khaana chor day
mashallah

bahut bahut shukriya


saath hauta hai ghareebo.n kay khuda
dil ghareebo.n ka dukhaana chor day
mashallah

bahut bahut shukriya

'aql kay but taudna aasaa.n nahi.n
'aql mei.n unko basaana chor day
mashallah

bahut bahut shukriya

kehti hai taqdeer kuch tadbeer kar
raat din aansoo bahaana chor day
mashallah

daulatay duniya kisee kee nah huee
isko too apna banaana chor day
mashallah

bahut bahut shukriya

aakhirat kee nemate.n anmol hai.n
"koyee kaisay dil lagaana chor day"
mashallah

bahut bahut shukriya

khudgharaz insaa.n hai.n haamid bhediye
aiso.n say rishta nibhaana chor day
mashallah

bahut bahut shukriya

is khubSurat kalam par meree janib se dilee mubaral baad aor Dh~erooN dad qubool farma kar shukriyah ada karne ka maoqa' deeN.

Wassalam
Muz^affar A Muz^affar
aapki mukhlisaanah daad kay liye hum aapkay behad mamnono mashkoor hai.n.

mukhlis
haamidbaaqri
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yasir shah wrote:muHtaram Hamid SaaHib !
assalamoa'laikum
:walikum:
mohtaram yasir shah saahib


aap ki Ghazal paRhee ,, mashaaAllah khoob hay ,,

bahut bahut shukriya janaab aapka.

sachchay khayaalaat ko saadgee se naZ'm kartay heN ,,

al hamdulillah....


'aam rawish se haT kar yeh aap ki sukhan.t'araazee cuboot hay keh aap ko taHseen ki khaaS parwaa naheeN -Allaah aap ko istiqaamat a't'aa farmaa.ay-

aameen ya rabbal 'aalameen



aur kyaa kahooN ,, yahaaN aa kar muNh baNd kartaa hooN keh

ud.'oo ilaa sabeeli rabbika bil.Hikmati wal.maui'Z'at.il.Hasanati,,,,


mukhliS
yasir




:bismillah:
wa mnyyatuqallaaha yaj'aluhui makhrjah
wa yarzuquhu min haico laa yahtacib
wa manyyatawakkal 'ala allaahay fahua hasbuhu
innallaha baaligho amray hi
qad ja'allahu lay kullay shayyin qadra.
holy quran

haamidbaaqri wrote:
salaamat rahe.n.
mukhlis
haamidbaaqri




but kay aagay gidgidaana chor day
khud ki 'azmat ko ghataana chor day

aatishay dauzakh say bachna hai agar
haq yateemo.n ka too khaana chor day

saath hauta hai ghareebo.n kay khuda
dil ghareebo.n ka dukhaana chor day

'aql kay but taudna aasaa.n nahi.n
'aql mei.n unko basaana chor day

kehti hai taqdeer kuch tadbeer kar
raat din aansoo bahaana chor day

daulatay duniya kisee kee nah huee
isko too apna banaana chor day

aakhirat kee nemate.n anmol hai.n
"koyee kaisay dil lagaana chor day"

khudgharaz insaa.n hai.n haamid bhediye
aiso.n say rishta nibhaana chor day

nateejaye fikr
haamidbaaqri
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Re: tarhi ghazal guzarish # 26

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sara_j wrote:
haamidbaaqri wrote: but kay aagay gidgidaana chor day
khud ki 'azmat ko ghataana chor day

aatishay dauzakh say bachna hai agar
haq yateemo.n ka too khaana chor day

saath hauta hai ghareebo.n kay khuda
dil ghareebo.n ka dukhaana chor day

'aql kay but taudna aasaa.n nahi.n
'aql mei.n unko basaana chor day

kehti hai taqdeer kuch tadbeer kar
raat din aansoo bahaana chor day

daulatay duniya kisee kee nah huee
isko too apna banaana chor day

aakhirat kee nemate.n anmol hai.n
"koyee kaisay dil lagaana chor day"

khudgharaz insaa.n hai.n haamid bhediye
aiso.n say rishta nibhaana chor day

hamid bhai,

salaam.
:walikum:
azeezah sara sahebah

bohat khoob! dhair saari daad qubool keejiye is
khoobsurat kawish per.

sara
aapki mukhlisaanah daad kay liye hum aapkay behad amnono mashkoor hai.n.
jazakallah
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muhammad_19k wrote:Mohtaram Janab Hamid Sb,
Assalam o Alaikum,

:walikum:
mohtaram mohammed khawar siddiqui saahib

aap ki ghazal ke tamaam hi ashhar bohat achhay oar dil fareb haiN.

bahut bahut shukriya aapka


aap ke ashaar paRh kar hameshaa khushi hoti hai ke maqSad bohat wazeH aor soch bohat mazboot nazar aatee hai.

taufeeqay ilaahi hai mohtaram.

darj zail shaer, ma'ani o bayaan ke leHaz se behtareen lagaa.

kehti hai taqdeer kuch tadbeer kar
raat din aansoo bahaana chor day


Allah kare zore qalam aor ziayaada,

Muhammad K. Siddiqui.
is purkhuloos du kayliye hum aapkay behad mamnoono mashkoor hai.n.

jazakallah
mukhlis
haamidbaaqri
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