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moHtarmah Duniya saHibah aadaab-o-tasleemaat!
aap kee naz^m dekh~ne kee taofeeq milee. kiya kehne bohot u'mdah aor dilkash peraeY meN aap ne apne ma fiZ^ameer ko ada kar diya hai. naz^m par daqeeq nigah Dalne par ma'loom hota hai. keh kalam gaoya aek barjastah koshish hai. aor dafa'ata" pura ka pura band naz^m ho geya hai.
is kamyaab sa'ee par meree dilee dad aor mubarak baad qubool farmaeeN. aor azrah-e-karam aae,indah bh~ee arbaab-e-meHfil ko apne munfarid aor puracar kalam se mustafeed hone ka maoqa' deeN.
diye ki roshni mein jab
koii aansu bahaata hai
laraz ke urdu kehti hai
ye ban ke phool mehekti hai
jo dil pe gham ke saaye hain
chuninda mere lafzon se
shairoN mein sajaana tum
ghazal koii sunaana tum
kiya kehne, bohot u'mdah aor dilkash naz^m hai. waah Duniya SaHibah bohot khoob kaha hai aap ne!!
Wassalam
aap ka mukhliS
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moHtarmah Duniya saHibah aadaab-o-tasleemaat!
aap kee naz^m dekh~ne kee taofeeq milee. kiya kehne bohot u'mdah aor dilkash peraeY meN aap ne apne ma fiZ^ameer ko ada kar diya hai. naz^m par daqeeq nigah Dalne par ma'loom hota hai. keh kalam gaoya aek barjastah koshish hai. aor dafa'ata" pura ka pura band naz^m ho geya hai.
is kamyaab sa'ee par meree dilee dad aor mubarak baad qubool farmaeeN. aor azrah-e-karam aae,indah bh~ee arbaab-e-meHfil ko apne munfarid aor puracar kalam se mustafeed hone ka maoqa' deeN.
diye ki roshni mein jab
koii aansu bahaata hai
laraz ke urdu kehti hai
ye ban ke phool mehekti hai
jo dil pe gham ke saaye hain
chuninda mere lafzon se
shairoN mein sajaana tum
ghazal koii sunaana tum
kiya kehne, bohot u'mdah aor dilkash naz^m hai. waah Duniya SaHibah bohot khoob kaha hai aap ne!!
Wassalam
aap ka mukhliS
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Re: URDUDIYA
urdudiya wrote:Ahl-e-Bazm
Salaam 'arz hai
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UrduDiya
diye ki roshni mein jab
koii aansu bahaata hai
laraz ke urdu kehti hai
ye ban ke phool mehekti hai
jo dil pe gham ke saaye hain
chuninda mere lafzon se
shairoN mein sajaana tum
ghazal koii sunaana tum[/align]
MoHtarma Urdudiya SaaHibah
aadaab
Aapka PM nazar nawaz huuwa. Yaad aawree ke liye behud mamnoon hooN.
MaiN ne aap kee Nazm paRhee aur behud pasaNd aaii. MaiN aazaad shaairee se ziyadah waqif nahiN is liye tafSeelee tabsarey se qaaSir hooN. Ummid hai aaindah bhee aap apne kalam se hum sub ko nawaaztee raheNgee.
Khoosh raheN!
KhulooSkaar,
Jawaid Badauni
Hazrat muzaffar saheb "Duniya saHibah" main vo nahi......Muzaffar Ahmad Muzaffar wrote:[align=center]
moHtarmah Duniya saHibah aadaab-o-tasleemaat!
aap kee naz^m dekh~ne kee taofeeq milee. kiya kehne bohot u'mdah aor dilkash peraeY meN aap ne apne ma fiZ^ameer ko ada kar diya hai. naz^m par daqeeq nigah Dalne par ma'loom hota hai. keh kalam gaoya aek barjastah koshish hai. aor dafa'ata" pura ka pura band naz^m ho geya hai.
is kamyaab sa'ee par meree dilee dad aor mubarak baad qubool farmaeeN. aor azrah-e-karam aae,indah bh~ee arbaab-e-meHfil ko apne munfarid aor puracar kalam se mustafeed hone ka maoqa' deeN.
diye ki roshni mein jab
koii aansu bahaata hai
laraz ke urdu kehti hai
ye ban ke phool mehekti hai
jo dil pe gham ke saaye hain
chuninda mere lafzon se
shairoN mein sajaana tum
ghazal koii sunaana tum
kiya kehne, bohot u'mdah aor dilkash naz^m hai. waah Duniya SaHibah bohot khoob kaha hai aap ne!!
Wassalam
aap ka mukhliS
Muz^affar A Muz^affar[/align]
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Re: URDUDIYA
Huzoor-e-a'alajawaid badauni wrote:urdudiya wrote:Ahl-e-Bazm
Salaam 'arz hai
[align=center]Nazm
UrduDiya
diye ki roshni mein jab
koii aansu bahaata hai
laraz ke urdu kehti hai
ye ban ke phool mehekti hai
jo dil pe gham ke saaye hain
chuninda mere lafzon se
shairoN mein sajaana tum
ghazal koii sunaana tum[/align]
MoHtarma Urdudiya SaaHibah
aadaab
Aapka PM nazar nawaz huuwa. Yaad aawree ke liye behud mamnoon hooN.
MaiN ne aap kee Nazm paRhee aur behud pasaNd aaii. MaiN aazaad shaairee se ziyadah waqif nahiN is liye tafSeelee tabsarey se qaaSir hooN. Ummid hai aaindah bhee aap apne kalam se hum sub ko nawaaztee raheNgee.
Khoosh raheN!
KhulooSkaar,
Jawaid Badauni
nawazishoN ka shukriya........bohat jald aur kuch pesh karungi.
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