aik urdu haiku aapki nazr kar rahay haiN

[haamidbaaqri]

dosto

hum aik urdu haiku aapki bacaaratoN ki nazr kar rahay haiN

gar qubool uftad zahay...........

arz kiya hai.......


"paani saa sansaar
behta chal aur badhta jaa
jeevan kay din chaar"

nateejaye fikr
haamidbaaqri
al hamdulillah

[haamidbaaqri]

dosto

hum aik urdu haiku aapki bacaaratoN ki nazr kar rahay haiN

gar qubool uftad zahay...........

arz kiya hai.......


"paani saa sansaar
behta chal aur badhta jaa
jeevan kay din chaar"

nateejaye fikr
haamidbaaqri
al hamdulillah

wow! ......."paani saa sansaar
behta chal aur badhta jaa
jeevan kay din chaar"


intehayii khoobsurat aur mukammal.....dhair saari
daad qubool keejiye.

haiku kya hota ye mujhe nahi maloom kya ye mahiya jaise hai ??

Assalaam o alaikum
azeezah sara saahebah

hausalah afzaayee aur aapki daad ka bahut bahut shukriya.

sara yeh japanese form of poetry hai.

teen lines (5,7,5)meiN aapko sabkuch kehna padhta hai.sirf symbols aur images meiN apni baat rakhni hauti hai yahi iskee khoobi hai.

shukriya
aapka bhai
haamidbaaqri

[yasir shah]

Haamid SaaHib !
assalamoa'laikum

khoob haaiku kahee hay - t'aba'.aazmaaee jaaree raKhiye gaa


yasir

[haamidbaaqri]

Haamid SaaHib !
assalamoa'laikum

khoob haaiku kahee hay - t'aba'.aazmaaee jaaree raKhiye gaa


yasir

wa alaikumussalaam
yasir saahib

hauslah afzaayee kayliye hum aapkay behad mamnoon haiN.

jazakallah
mukhlis
haamidbaaqri

[munir-armaan-nasimi]

Beradaram Haamid Saaheb,

Bahut Khoob... Behad sunder "Haiku" hai...!! Alla'h kare zor-e-qalam aur jiyada...

[haamidbaaqri]

Beradaram Haamid Saaheb,

Bahut Khoob... Behad sunder "Haiku" hai...!! Alla'h kare zor-e-qalam aur jiyada...

Assalaam o alaikum
mohtaram munir saahib

aapki mukhlisaanah daad aur dua kayliye hum aapkay behad mamnoono mashkoor hain.

jazakallah
mukhlis
haamidbaaqri