:: Meree pehlee Hamd ::

[Star Mind]

Yaaran-e-bazm, aadaab !!

aaj pehlee baar aek Hamd paish kar rahaa hooN ! yeh meri pehlii Hamd hai aur ise maiN ne kal hi likkhaa hai ! ummeed hai k apnii bharpoor raaye se navaazeNge ! kyooNke yeh meri pehlee Hamd hai ;) ! shukriya

:: Urdu Version ::

:: Roman Version ::

1.

yuuN zindagii se yaa raab ! dil mera aashnaa hai
jis samt dekhtaa hooN , ik tera saamnaa hai !!

2.

har aaNkh kaa nazaaraa har aaNkh se judaa hai !
phir bhii har aek manzar meiN , tuu hi aye Khudaa hai !

3.

ulfat ke aasmaaN ko chhone ka lutf kyaa hai !
us dil se koi pochhe , tuu jis ko mil gayaa hai !!

4.

jalvaa-taraaz hai tuu jis dil ke aai'ne meiN !
yeh kaai'naat saarii us dil kaa aai'naa hai !

5.

gulzaar-e-aarzoo meiN, saHraa-e-justjoo meiN
maiN dil ko DhoNRhtaa hooN, dil tujh ko DhooNRtaa hai !

6.

yuuN to chaman meiN terii laakhoN nishaaniyaaN haiN !
meer-e-a'rab (SAW) se laiken, teraa pataa milaa hai !

7.

har samt zindagii ne sau daam haiN bichhaaye !
tuu hii bachaa le mujh ko ! teraa hii aasraa hai !

8.

Thukraa diyaa hai sab ne, mujh ko agar to kyaa Gham ?
tuu to miraa Khudaa hai, teraa to dar khulaa hai !!

9.

u'mr-e-a'zeez saarii tere hi dar pe guzre !
apnaa banaa :Zia: ko, yaa rab yehi du'aa hai !!

Zia Baloch

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[yasir shah]

bhaai Zia !
assalamOa'laikum


kese heN aap ? agar jawaab denaa gawaaraa ho to meN bhi kuCh a'rZ' karooN ,,aur a'rZ karooN bhi to kyaa karooN bajuz is ke keh aap ki Hamd pyaaree hay -



har aaNkh kaa nazaaraa har aaNkh se judaa hai !
phir bhii har aek manzar meiN , tuu hi aye Khudaa hai !

ulfat ke aasmaaN ko chhone ka lutf kyaa hai !
us dil se koi pochhe , tuu jis ko mil gayaa hai !!

gulzaar-e-aarzoo meiN, saHraa-e-justjoo meiN
maiN dil ko DhoNRhtaa hooN, dil tujh ko DhooNRtaa hai !

har samt zindagii ne sau daam haiN bichhaaye !
tuu hii bachaa le mujh ko ! teraa hii aasraa hai !



yooN hi liKhtay rahye kyaa a'jab hay keh woh "lut'f " HaaSil ho -

jazaakAllaahukhairan


yasir

[muhammad_19k]

Mohtaram Janab Zia Baloch Sb,

aap ki likhi hoee shaandaar hamd nazroaN se guzri, oar pehli hi reading meiN bohat mutaaSir huwaa.

ye walaa sha'er bohat mast hai

ulfat ke aasmaaN ko chhone ka lutf kyaa hai !
us dil se koi pochhe , tuu jis ko mil gayaa hai !!

1. maTlaa bohat khoobSoorat hai. laikin qaafiaya ke chanao meiN kuch gar bar ho gayee hai. agar aap maTla meiN aashanaa, aor saamanaa ko qafiyaa laitay haiN to phir saari ghazal meiN "naa" wale qaaifiajaise ke maanana, jaana, saamnaa, thaamna waghaira hi aa-aiN gay. pata, khuda, juda, waghairaa ko qaafiyaa meiN istemaaal karne ke leeaye aap matlaa ke kissi aik qaafiaya se "na" hataanaa ho ga, wagarana iss "eetaa" (qaafiyaa ka aik aib) kahaa ja-aye ga.

2. ye bhi bohat khoobSoorat khayaal hai. maashaallah.
3. is ko to meiN pehlay hi mast sha'er likh chukaa hooN
4. Sha'er alfaaz ki bunat ki lehaaz se bohat shaandaar hai. laikin meiN kotah aqal iss ke mafhooM ko na jaan sakaa.
5. ye bhi bohat achchha sha'er hai.
6. Quran pak meiN irshaad hai,

rabbanaa innanaa sam'ena munadi yuy yunaadi lil eeman, an aaminoo berubbukum, faa aamanna,
ay hamaray rab ham ne sunaa aik manadee dainay walay ko manunday daitay huwa ke apne rab par eemaan lay aa.o, pas ham eemaan lay aa-aye.

bohat khoob kahaa hai aap ne

yuuN to chaman meiN terii laakhoN nishaaniyaaN haiN !
meer-e-a'rab (SAW) se laiken, teraa pataa milaa hai !


zara daikh kar bataiaye kia ye miSra bhi wazn meiN hay aro kaisa hai?

yuuN to chaman meiN laakhoN tairii nishaaniyaaN haiN !


7. achhchhaa sha'er hai.
8. khyaalaa achhccha hai laikin doosre miSra meiN tay ki takraar bhaleel maaloom na hoee.
9. maqtaa bhi achhchha hai.

majmoo'ee Tor par aap ki hamd bohat achchhi hai.


dua'aa gao,
Muhammad K. Siddiqui.

[Star Mind]

[quote author=.....Shah link=topic=9908.msg128984#msg128984 date=1175051104]
bhaai Zia !
assalamOa'laikum

W/salaam Yasir bha'ii !


kese heN aap ?

Allah ka karam hai , aap sunaayeN ? :)

agar jawaab denaa gawaaraa ho to meN bhi kuCh a'rZ' karooN ,,

Huzoor ! agar anjaane meiN koi Ghalti aisii ho'ii ho maSroofiyyat yaa meri susti ka vajh se ! to ma'zrat-Khaah hooN ! , varna to aisii koii baat naheeN !

aur a'rZ karooN bhi to kyaa karooN bajuz is ke keh aap ki Hamd pyaaree hay -

Allah taa'aalaa aap ko har do jahaan meiN kaamyaab farmaaye ! Aaameen ! nehaayat mamnoon hooN ! shukriya


har aaNkh kaa nazaaraa har aaNkh se judaa hai !
phir bhii har aek manzar meiN , tuu hi aye Khudaa hai !

ulfat ke aasmaaN ko chhone ka lutf kyaa hai !
us dil se koi pochhe , tuu jis ko mil gayaa hai !!

gulzaar-e-aarzoo meiN, saHraa-e-justjoo meiN
maiN dil ko DhoNRhtaa hooN, dil tujh ko DhooNRtaa hai !

har samt zindagii ne sau daam haiN bichhaaye !
tuu hii bachaa le mujh ko ! teraa hii aasraa hai !



yooN hi liKhtay rahye kyaa a'jab hay keh woh "lut'f " HaaSil ho -

jazaakAllaahukhairan


yasir

mamnoon hooN ! aap ki HauSla-afzaa'ii se himmat aur lagan meiN izaafa hotaa hai ! shukriya

Zia Baloch
[/quote]

[Star Mind]

bohat ache zia bhai....bohat khoob! aapka likha

pehla hamd bohat pasand aaya. khaas ye ashaar

Sara behnaa ! aadaab !

aaKhir bhaa'ii kis kaa hooN ? nehaayat mamnoon hooN !



yuuN zindagii se yaa raab ! dil mera aashnaa hai
jis samt dekhtaa hooN , ik tera saamnaa hai !!


har aaNkh kaa nazaaraa har aaNkh se judaa hai !
phir bhii har aek manzar meiN , tuu hi aye Khudaa hai !



ulfat ke aasmaaN ko chhone ka lutf kyaa hai !
us dil se koi pochhe , tuu jis ko mil gayaa hai !!



jalvaa-taraaz hai tuu jis dil ke aai'ne meiN !
yeh kaai'naat saarii us dil kaa aai'naa hai !



gulzaar-e-aarzoo meiN, saHraa-e-justjoo meiN
maiN dil ko DhoNRhtaa hooN, dil tujh ko DhooNRtaa hai !


yuuN to chaman meiN terii laakhoN nishaaniyaaN haiN !
meer-e-a'rab (SAW) se laiken, teraa pataa milaa hai !


khuda kare zor e qalam aur ziyada.

sara

is qadar dil-pazer adnaaz mein HauSla-afzaa'ii par aap ka tah-e-dil se mamnoon hooN ! shukriya

Zia Baloch

[haamidbaaqri]

Yaaran-e-bazm, aadaab !!

aaj pehlee baar aek Hamd paish kar rahaa hooN ! yeh meri pehlii Hamd hai aur ise maiN ne kal hi likkhaa hai ! ummeed hai k apnii bharpoor raaye se navaazeNge ! kyooNke yeh meri pehlee Hamd hai ;) ! shukriya

:: Urdu Version ::

:: Roman Version ::

1.

yuuN zindagii se yaa raab ! dil mera aashnaa hai
jis samt dekhtaa hooN , ik tera saamnaa hai !!

2.

har aaNkh kaa nazaaraa har aaNkh se judaa hai !
phir bhii har aek manzar meiN , tuu hi aye Khudaa hai !

3.

ulfat ke aasmaaN ko chhone ka lutf kyaa hai !
us dil se koi pochhe , tuu jis ko mil gayaa hai !!

4.

jalvaa-taraaz hai tuu jis dil ke aai'ne meiN !
yeh kaai'naat saarii us dil kaa aai'naa hai !

5.

gulzaar-e-aarzoo meiN, saHraa-e-justjoo meiN
maiN dil ko DhoNRhtaa hooN, dil tujh ko DhooNRtaa hai !

6.

yuuN to chaman meiN terii laakhoN nishaaniyaaN haiN !
meer-e-a'rab (SAW) se laiken, teraa pataa milaa hai !

7.

har samt zindagii ne sau daam haiN bichhaaye !
tuu hii bachaa le mujh ko ! teraa hii aasraa hai !

8.

Thukraa diyaa hai sab ne, mujh ko agar to kyaa Gham ?
tuu to miraa Khudaa hai, teraa to dar khulaa hai !!

9.

u'mr-e-a'zeez saarii tere hi dar pe guzre !
apnaa banaa :Zia: ko, yaa rab yehi du'aa hai !!

Zia Baloch

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Assalaam o alaikum
zia bhai

aapki zindagee kee pehli hamd per hum aapko dilee mubarakbaad pesh kartay haiN.

bahut khoobsoorat hamd hai zia bhai.....hameN bahut pasand aayee.

hamaari dilee daad qubool farmaayeN.

allah(sbhnwt)karay zoray qalam aur ziyaadah

mukhlis
haamidbaaqri

[sbashwar]

Zia saheb,
Bohat umda hamd aapne kahi hai.

:: Roman Version ::

1.

yuuN zindagii se yaa raab ! dil mera aashnaa hai
jis samt dekhtaa hooN , ik tera saamnaa hai !!

2.

har aaNkh kaa nazaaraa har aaNkh se judaa hai !
phir bhii har aek manzar meiN , tuu hi aye Khudaa hai !


3.

ulfat ke aasmaaN ko chhone ka lutf kyaa hai !
us dil se koi pochhe , tuu jis ko mil gayaa hai !!
boaht achcha sheir hai.
4.

jalvaa-taraaz hai tuu jis dil ke aai'ne meiN !
yeh kaai'naat saarii us dil kaa aai'naa hai !

5.

gulzaar-e-aarzoo meiN, saHraa-e-justjoo meiN
maiN dil ko DhoNRhtaa hooN, dil tujh ko DhooNRtaa hai !
Bohat khoob
6.

yuuN to chaman meiN terii laakhoN nishaaniyaaN haiN !
meer-e-a'rab (SAW) se laiken, teraa pataa milaa hai !
Yeh sheir zyada pasand ayaa
7.

har samt zindagii ne sau daam haiN bichhaaye !
tuu hii bachaa le mujh ko ! teraa hii aasraa hai !
Allah, qubool farmaye.
8.

Thukraa diyaa hai sab ne, mujh ko agar to kyaa Gham ?
tuu to miraa Khudaa hai, teraa to dar khulaa hai !!

9.

u'mr-e-a'zeez saarii tere hi dar pe guzre !
apnaa banaa :Zia: ko, yaa rab yehi du'aa hai !!

:ameen

Meri daad aur mubarakbaad qubool kijiye.
Shukria

[sbashwar]

Zia saheb,
Bohat umda hamd aapne kahi hai.

:: Roman Version ::

1.

yuuN zindagii se yaa raab ! dil mera aashnaa hai
jis samt dekhtaa hooN , ik tera saamnaa hai !!

2.

har aaNkh kaa nazaaraa har aaNkh se judaa hai !
phir bhii har aek manzar meiN , tuu hi aye Khudaa hai !


3.

ulfat ke aasmaaN ko chhone ka lutf kyaa hai !
us dil se koi pochhe , tuu jis ko mil gayaa hai !!
boaht achcha sheir hai.
4.

jalvaa-taraaz hai tuu jis dil ke aai'ne meiN !
yeh kaai'naat saarii us dil kaa aai'naa hai !

5.

gulzaar-e-aarzoo meiN, saHraa-e-justjoo meiN
maiN dil ko DhoNRhtaa hooN, dil tujh ko DhooNRtaa hai !
Bohat khoob
6.

yuuN to chaman meiN terii laakhoN nishaaniyaaN haiN !
meer-e-a'rab (SAW) se laiken, teraa pataa milaa hai !
Yeh sheir zyada pasand ayaa
7.

har samt zindagii ne sau daam haiN bichhaaye !
tuu hii bachaa le mujh ko ! teraa hii aasraa hai !
Allah, qubool farmaye.
8.

Thukraa diyaa hai sab ne, mujh ko agar to kyaa Gham ?
tuu to miraa Khudaa hai, teraa to dar khulaa hai !!

9.

u'mr-e-a'zeez saarii tere hi dar pe guzre !
apnaa banaa :Zia: ko, yaa rab yehi du'aa hai !!



Meri daad aur mubarakbaad qubool kijiye.
Shukria