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Yaran e UrduBandhan,
Adab o tasleemat!
ThoRey se waqfey key bad aj phir HaZir ho raha hooN apni aik ghazal ley kar.Apki raey mere liey mo'tbar hogi.
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wah bahut umda..bahut khoob...rawaani bhi khoob hai aur sheron mein shiddat bhi khoob hai..bahut pasand aaya aapka kalaam Akif jee..khaaaskar ye line bahut acchi lagi.."dil ka jo mehram bane woh aashnaa koi to ho" wah wah..

daad pesh hai!

Shumaila

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to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai

Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
Na Gham jaata hai na khushi aati hai
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Sara jee, salam o adab key bad apkey shukriey ka shukria ada karta hooN.Ghazal pasand ayee.Shukriya.
w.s
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akifghani wrote:Yaran e UrduBandhan,
Adab o tasleemat!
ThoRey se waqfey key bad aj phir HaZir ho raha hooN apni aik ghazal ley kar.Apki raey mere liey mo'tbar hogi.
w.s
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Shumaila jee,
Adaab!
Ghazal ki pasandeedagi par shukarguzar hooN.
w.s
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akifghani wrote:Yaran e UrduBandhan,
Adab o tasleemat!
ThoRey se waqfey key bad aj phir HaZir ho raha hooN apni aik ghazal ley kar.Apki raey mere liey mo'tbar hogi.
w.s
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MOHTARAM JANAB AKIF SAHEB,

kahiaye kaise mizaaj haiN?

aik aor khoobSoorat takhleeq par mirii taraf se bhi mubarakbaad qabool kijiaye. maqt'a sub ashaar se zyadaa mutaCir kun lagaa.

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Beradaram Akif Saheb,

Salam-o-Rehmat..!! Khubsoorat aur Dilkash Ghazal pe Daad hazir-e-khidmat hai Qobool karein. Maqta ka sher bahut hi achcha hai. Agar main usko aise padhoon to.......

"Bas Yahi Hai Ek Tawaqqa Doosron Se Bhi Hamein"
Humsa Akif Be-niyaz O Be-riya Koyi to Ho.

Aap ka kya khayaal hai???

Umeed ke mijaz shagufta honge.

aap ka bhai,

Munir Armaan
Iss Dil Main ARMAAN Bahut Hain
Ek Hai Ghar Mehmaan Bahut Hain

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Khawar Sb,
Sallam o dua!
Yeh apki mohabbat hai keh ap ney meri ghazal ko pasand kiya.Mamnoon hooN.
Khair andesh
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muhammad_19k wrote:MOHTARAM JANAB AKIF SAHEB,

kahiaye kaise mizaaj haiN?

aik aor khoobSoorat takhleeq par mirii taraf se bhi mubarakbaad qabool kijiaye. maqt'a sub ashaar se zyadaa mutaCir kun lagaa.

du'aa goa,
MUHAMMAD K SIDDIQUI.
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Munir Arman Naseemi jee,
Adab o tasleemat!
Ap ka mamnoon hooN keh apney hoSla afzayee farmayee.
Dua go
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munir-armaan-nasimi wrote:Beradaram Akif Saheb,

Salam-o-Rehmat..!! Khubsoorat aur Dilkash Ghazal pe Daad hazir-e-khidmat hai Qobool karein. Maqta ka sher bahut hi achcha hai. Agar main usko aise padhoon to.......

"Bas Yahi Hai Ek Tawaqqa Doosron Se Bhi Hamein"
Humsa Akif Be-niyaz O Be-riya Koyi to Ho.

Aap ka kya khayaal hai???

Umeed ke mijaz shagufta honge.

aap ka bhai,

Munir Armaan
Akif Ghani
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Aakif Saaheb

MashaAllah beyhad khubsurat, nihaet bamaqsad aur haqeeqat kay akas ashar kehay haiN aap nay.

Is qadr maani afreeN shaeri per meri janib say dilli mubarikbaad qabul kijiay.

Allah keray aap ka qalem issi terah macbet rukh per chalta rehay aur khub teraki keray.

wassalam

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Mohtrim Suhail Malik sb,
Assalam o allaikum!
HoSla afzayee ka shukriya,Ap issi taraH HoSla afzayee farmatey rahey tau zaroor likh paooN ga issi taraH in sha Allah.
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Sohail Malik wrote:Aakif Saaheb

MashaAllah beyhad khubsurat, nihaet bamaqsad aur haqeeqat kay akas ashar kehay haiN aap nay.

Is qadr maani afreeN shaeri per meri janib say dilli mubarikbaad qabul kijiay.

Allah keray aap ka qalem issi terah macbet rukh per chalta rehay aur khub teraki keray.

wassalam

Sohail Malik
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