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Post by **sumanshah** » Wed May 30, 2007 6:26 am

Adaaaab

PEHLI BAR IS KHUBSOORAT BAZAM MEIN SHIRKAT
KAR RAHI HOON IS GHAZAL KAY SATH.
UMEED HAY AP TAMAM AIHL_E_ZOQ DOSTO
KO PASSAND AIYY GI.

ehsaas · Post by **ehsaas** » Wed May 30, 2007 5:24 pm

buhut umdah buhut khubsoorat ghazal

shukria keh aap ne inti khubsoorat shairi ham se share kee

mazeed shairi ka intezar rehay ga

Post by **muhammad_19k** » Wed May 30, 2007 7:00 pm

Bohat khoob Suman Ji,

ye ghazal to aap ki kitaab meN si hi aik intekhaab lagtaa hai.

bohat sar phir si hawaa-aiN haiN har soo
diyaa hoSalay ka jalaa-aiN kahaN tak -------------------bohat khoob.

aap ki mazeed ghazloaN ka intezaar rahay ga.

HINT: agar aap chaahteeN hoN ke log aap ke tamaam ash'aar par fardan fardan tabSira karaiN to ghazal ROMAN meN zaroor likhaa karaiN.

khairandesh,
Muhammad K. Siddiqui

Post by **sumanshah** » Thu May 31, 2007 6:28 am

Adaaaaaaaaaab ahsas

hosla afzaiyi kay liyee mumnoon hoon.

Post by **sumanshah** » Thu May 31, 2007 6:29 am

Adaaaaaab khawar sahab

passandeedgi ka shukriyaaaaaa aap nay baja farmayaaa lakin kia karoon
roman mein likhna bhool jati hoon .waissay yad dehani ka shukriya.

Post by **Sohail Malik** » Fri Jun 01, 2007 4:12 pm

Suman Saaheba Aaadab!

aap ki ghazal pasand ayi! daad qabul kijiay!

wassalam

Sohail Malik