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Post by **naheedv** » Sat Dec 18, 2004 3:59 am

Aadaab,

yahaaN par tau sab hi chehre jaane pehchaane heiN, urdustan ke tamaam saathiyoN ko yahaaN deikh kar buhat khushee huee.
isee khushee maiN lijiye apni aik taazah ghazal aap sab kee nazar :D

buhat shukriya
Naheed

Post by **Star Mind** » Sat Dec 18, 2004 4:22 am

Assalam-o-a'laikum,

zahe naseeb , zahe naseeb :D

MoHtarama Naheed SaaHiba, sab se pehley to is meHfil ko jo sharaf aakar aap ne bakhsha hai, us keleye ham aap ka tah-e-dil se mamnoon haiN :D . Aur is meHfil maiN aap ka dil ki gihraaiyoN se khair-maqdam karte haiN :D . aap na Sirf khud tashreef laayeN , balke ik Haseen tuHfa bhi apne saath laayeN. bahut khoob :D .

Aap ki yeh khoobSoorat ghazal , hameN jee jaan se pasand aai. ik ik shea'r jese bila ijaazat dil maiN utrtata chalaa jaaye .

waah ! kyaa dil-kash andaaz-e-bayaaN hai aap ka. wallah mazaa aagaya paRh kar. mazaamen bhi is qadr dil-nasheeN hai k dil apne ikhtiyaar se nikla jaaye . is khoobSoorat takhleeq par dherooooooooN daad qabool kejeye :D . aayenda bhi intezaar raheyga :D . shukriya

MokhliS : Zia Baloch

Post by **Hashmat Usmani** » Sat Dec 18, 2004 4:29 am

moHtaramah janaabah Naaheed saahiba,

salaam,

aapkaa abhi Khair maqdam kar ke jab naya safHa khola to aapkii is Gahzal par nazar paRii...aise koii kisii kii farmaaish poori kia kare!

aapkii Ghazal paRhii aur paRh kar bahot lutf aayaa. yaqeen jaaniye ik aisii suroor kii kaifiiyat taari huii ki abhi tak maiN maHv e suroor huN.

ek ek she'r umdagii kii manzil ko chhootaa nazar aataa hai. bahot Khoob. ek kaamiyaab Ghazal kahne par mubaarak_baad qubool kijiiye.

Allah kare zor-e-qalam aur ziyaada!

Hashmat

Post by **Mahtab Qadr** » Sat Dec 18, 2004 1:48 pm

Naheed sahiba
Bahut khoob bahut khoobsurat ghazal hai.
shukria
MQ

Abdullah Nazir · Post by **Abdullah Nazir** » Sat Dec 18, 2004 3:54 pm

Muhtaramah
NAHEED – V. Saahibah,

Purkhuloos Tasleemaat, :)

Aapki ghazal paRhkar bahut luTf andouz houaa. Bahut ahcchi ghazal kehne per meri daad aur mubaarakbaad haazir hei. Ummeed ke qubool farmaayengi.

Aapka Mukhlis,

Nazir. 8)

Post by **naheedv** » Sat Dec 18, 2004 7:29 pm

Star Mind wrote:Assalam-o-a'laikum,

zahe naseeb , zahe naseeb :D

MoHtarama Naheed SaaHiba, sab se pehley to is meHfil ko jo sharaf aakar aap ne bakhsha hai, us keleye ham aap ka tah-e-dil se mamnoon haiN :D . Aur is meHfil maiN aap ka dil ki gihraaiyoN se khair-maqdam karte haiN :D . aap na Sirf khud tashreef laayeN , balke ik Haseen tuHfa bhi apne saath laayeN. bahut khoob :D .

Aap ki yeh khoobSoorat ghazal , hameN jee jaan se pasand aai. ik ik shea'r jese bila ijaazat dil maiN utrtata chalaa jaaye .

waah ! kyaa dil-kash andaaz-e-bayaaN hai aap ka. wallah mazaa aagaya paRh kar. mazaamen bhi is qadr dil-nasheeN hai k dil apne ikhtiyaar se nikla jaaye . is khoobSoorat takhleeq par dherooooooooN daad qabool kejeye :D . aayenda bhi intezaar raheyga :D . shukriya

MokhliS : Zia Baloch

Zia ji,

iss qadar pur.takalluf isteqbaal kaa buhat shukriya :)

aap ne ghazal kee itnee dil khol kar ta'reef kee hai ke mujhe ghazal phir se paRhni paRii ke aayaa ye qaabil hai bhee yaa naheeN

bahar.kaif itni himmat afzaa'ee aur daad kaa buhat buhat shukriya!

mukhlis
Naheed

Post by **naheedv** » Sat Dec 18, 2004 7:31 pm

Hashmat Usmani wrote:moHtaramah janaabah Naaheed saahiba,

salaam,

aapkaa abhi Khair maqdam kar ke jab naya safHa khola to aapkii is Gahzal par nazar paRii...aise koii kisii kii farmaaish poori kia kare!

aapkii Ghazal paRhii aur paRh kar bahot lutf aayaa. yaqeen jaaniye ik aisii suroor kii kaifiiyat taari huii ki abhi tak maiN maHv e suroor huN.

ek ek she'r umdagii kii manzil ko chhootaa nazar aataa hai. bahot Khoob. ek kaamiyaab Ghazal kahne par mubaarak_baad qubool kijiiye.

Allah kare zor-e-qalam aur ziyaada!

Hashmat

janaab Hashmat saahab,

iss pazeeraa'ee ke liye maiN dil se mamnoon hooN.
aap ne ghazal kee itni ta'rif kar ke mujhe laa.jawaab kar diyaa hai... main kahooN tau kyaa kahooN........ siwaa'e shukriya ke, so qubool kijiye!

mukhlis
Naheed

Post by **naheedv** » Sat Dec 18, 2004 7:32 pm

Mahtab Qadr wrote:Naheed sahiba
Bahut khoob bahut khoobsurat ghazal hai.
shukria
MQ

janaab Mahtab Qadar saahab,

aap ne mukhtasar alfaaz mein jo daad dee hai uss ke liye buhat buhat shukriya!

mukhlis
Naheed

Post by **Ibn-e-siddique** » Sat Dec 18, 2004 10:42 pm

Naheed saHiba:

salaam arz hai:

aaj hi aap ki ye umda ghazal nazar navaaz hui :)

jaisa ke maiN hamesha kehta hooN ke aap ka apna aik makhsoos andaaz-e-bayaaN hai, jo ke qaari per gehra asar Daalta hai .

mujhe aap ki poori ghazal bahot pasand aayee hai, magar kuch baateN meHz izhaar-e-khayaal ke liye arz karna chaahooN ga.

sab se pehle matle meiN aap ne pehle misre meiN naaN likha hai aur isi vazn per baandha hai, kiya ye aaj kal bhi musta'mal hai?

she'r no do bahot khoobsurat aur umda hai, us per DheiroN daad qubool kijiye :)

she'r on 4 bhi khoob hai

she'r no. 3 aur 5 ke mazaameen bahot ache haiN, aur majmui taassur bhi bahot acha hai, magar aap ne she'r no. 3 meiN yaa ki alif giraayee hai, aur she'r no. 5 meiN lehje ki ye ko giraaya hai.

dekhiye isi lafz lehje ko isi beHr meiN Josh Maleehabadi ne kis taraH khapaaya hai:

lafzoN ko aiHtiyaat ke saaNche meiN Dhaal ker
lehje se tamkanat ko numaayaaN kiye huye

ye arabi aur farsi ke alfaaz haiN , aur in alfaaz ke Huroof-e-illat ko giraana ravaa nahin samjha gayaa. Hazrat-e-dagh dehlvi ne bhi apne hidaayat naame meiN aisa karne ko bura kahaa hai :)

bahar.Haal aaj kal ke daur meiN aisa kiya to jaata hai, magar in se parheiz hi behtar hai :)

aakhri do ash'aar bhi bahot umda haiN

maine jo aaraa deeN wo to meHz meri zaati aaraa haiN, in se qata'nazar bhi aap ki ghazal bahot umda aur qaabil-e-aafreen-o-sitaaish hai. is liye meri jaanib se dili daad bhi haazir hai :)

sadaa khush raheN

amjad

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