Lab Sey Bian Bhi Na Ho

Post by **sumanshah** » Mon Jul 09, 2007 5:45 am

Shot at 2007-07-08

Post by **muhammad_19k** » Mon Jul 09, 2007 7:00 am

Salam Suman,

ashaar meN wazn ke kuch masaail lag raheN haiN. umeed hai ke koi maahir in ki bilkul theek theek nishaandahi kar de ga.is ke allawaa

1. pehlaa sher khud meN mukamal naheeN lagaa haaN doosre sher ke saath mil kar qitaa ki shakl me achchay ma'eni day rahaa hai.
2. achhchhaa khyaal hai.
3. bohat achchaa khyaal hai.
4. ahh haa
5. bohat khoob

Regards,
Muhammad K. Siddiqui.