aik Qita'aa

[tahira Masood]

Hazireen-e-meHfil

salaam-e-khuloos

aik qat'aa aap sabki baSaratoN ki naz'r. aap ki aara kaa intezaar rehay gaa.

wassalam

iss husn-e-meh-e-kaamil peh hairaan hai kioN?
iss se hazaaroN derjah roshan hai aaftab

mumkin nahiN dekhnaa bher k nazar usay
uss k Sannaa'a* k Husn ki ho gee kehaN peh taab


*sann'aa=creator,Khaliq, maker

[muhammad_19k]

Tahira ji,

aap ne aik bohat khoobSoorat khyaal ko qitaa' meN paish kiyaa hai. daad o mubaarakbaad qubool kijiaye.

MalaHizaat

1. pehlay miSra ka wazn tawajja talab hai.
2. teesre miSra meN bhi vazn barqaar rakhne ke leeaye nazar ko nazr paRhnaa paRha rahaa hai jo kissi bhi TaraH manasib naheeN.
3. canaa baa-ma'nii khaaliq kuch ajnabi sa lagaa.

mukhliS,
Muhammad K. Siddiqui.

[tahira Masood]

Tahira ji,

aap ne aik bohat khoobSoorat khyaal ko qitaa' meN paish kiyaa hai. daad o mubaarakbaad qubool kijiaye.

MalaHizaat

1. pehlay miSra ka wazn tawajja talab hai.
2. teesre miSra meN bhi vazn barqaar rakhne ke leeaye nazar ko nazr paRhnaa paRha rahaa hai jo kissi bhi TaraH manasib naheeN.
3. canaa baa-ma'nii khaaliq kuch ajnabi sa lagaa.

mukhliS,
Muhammad K. Siddiqui.

janaab Muhammad_19k saheb

salaam

aap k mulaahIzaat paRhe . raaey kaa shukeriyah.

pehle misr'a hai

Iss Husn-e-mah-e-kaamil peh hHairaan hai tuu?

iss maiN kaya ageR baR hai mujhae tau samjh nahiN aa rehi

teesre misrae ko maine yuN lihaa thaa

nazar bher k dekhna mumkin nahiN usae

tau bhi kehaa gyaa keh iskaa wazan theek nahiN

mujhe khud bhi aHsaas thaa keh es teraH nazar ko naz'r paThnaa paRhe gaa

shaayed aap ne gahur se nahiN paRhaa

lafz hai Sannaa nah keh Canaa

Sanaa Sauaad se jaise maSnuu'aat Sanna'ee waghera

aap Canaa baa m'anee tareef k paRh rehay haiN saheyd

wassalam

[muhammad_19k]

Tahiraa ji,

Sanaa, ki vazaaHat ka shukriyaa.

Iss Husn-e-mah-e-kaamil peh hHairaan hai tuu?

is qat'a ke baaqi teenoN miSroN ka eHtetaam faailun ya faailaat ki aawaaz par hotaa hai. jab ke is miSraa ke eHtetaam faailun ya faailaat par naheeN ho rahaa. is leeaye mairay nazdeek is ka vazn qaabil e ghor hai.

ye Husn e maah e kaamil Heeran kyooN karay,
is se hazaar darja roshan hai aaftaab
mumkin naheeN nazar bhar ke daikhnaa jinheN
un ke Sanaa, ke Husn ki ho gi kahaaN pe taab.

leejiaye meN ne, mafhoom se qata' e nazar, ooper miSroN ka vazn tajveez kar diyaa hai. ab aap jaaneN, mafhoom jaanay aor qat'a jaanay .

mukhliS,
Muhammad K. Siddiqui.

[tahira Masood]

Tahiraa ji,

Sanaa, ki vazaaHat ka shukriyaa.

Iss Husn-e-mah-e-kaamil peh hHairaan hai tuu?

is qat'a ke baaqi teenoN miSroN ka eHtetaam faailun ya faailaat ki aawaaz par hotaa hai. jab ke is miSraa ke eHtetaam faailun ya faailaat par naheeN ho rahaa. is leeaye mairay nazdeek is ka vazn qaabil e ghor hai.

ye Husn e maah e kaamil Heeran kyooN karay,
is se hazaar darja roshan hai aaftaab
mumkin naheeN nazar bhar ke daikhnaa jinheN
un ke Sanaa, ke Husn ki ho gi kahaaN pe taab.

leejiaye meN ne, mafhoom se qata' e nazar, ooper miSroN ka vazn tajveez kar diyaa hai. ab aap jaaneN, mafhoom jaanay aor qat'a jaanay Smile.

mukhliS,
Muhammad K. Siddiqui.

bohat shukeriyah Siddiqui saheb

aik aurr baat kehnaa chaahoN gee keh maine bohat se mash'hoor aur mustanid sho'araa ko lafz "qataa" kehte sunaa hai iss liye andhaa dhund taqleed maiN Qataa hi likh gaee. laikin lughta dekhne per andaaza huaa hai keh asal lafz Qitaa hi hai.

chunaacheh esae badal rehi hoN


khush rehaiN

aur haaN aik baat bataa doN yeh faailaaun yaa faailatun mairee samjh maiN nahiN aate

maine Urdu meHaZ shauq maiN seekhi hai

maiN baher k muammaalik maiN hi palee barhi aur paRhi hoN

wassalam