GuZarish#32 ke liye apne do GhazleeN pesh karne kee sa'adat HaaSil kar raha hooN. mujhe ummeed hai keh dost apnee apnee raY se mustafeed farmaeeN ge. aor khaadim kee HaoSlah afzaee karne meN taamal nah kareeN ge.
Muzaffar Ahmad Muzaffar wrote:[align=center]Yaaraan-e-bazm-e-Urdubandhan aadaab-o-tasleemaat!
GuZarish#32 ke liye apne do GhazleeN pesh karne kee sa'adat HaaSil kar raha hooN. mujhe ummeed hai keh dost apnee apnee raY se mustafeed farmaeeN ge. aor khaadim kee HaoSlah afzaee karne meN taamal nah kareeN ge.
maiN tajdeed-e-e'hd-e-wafaa chahataa hooN
"miree saadagee dekh kiyaa chahataa hooN"
mareeZ^-e-muHabbat hooN meree maseeHaa
maiN Zakhm-e-jiGar kee dawaa chahataa hooN
nah de mujh ko pand-e-shakebaaee naaSeH
koee lamHah Sabr aaZmaa chchaataa hooN
shab-e-hijr be maot maraa geyaa hooN
ilahee maiN phir se baqaa chahataa hooN
dhuwaaN kar diyaa gardish-e-e'hed ne yooN
Zamaan-o-makaaN se uThaa chahataa hooN
muHabbat naheeN to e'dawat hee keeje!
maiN nafrat bhee had se siwaa chahataa hooN
Zamane kee naz^rooN se jo meHv kar de
maiN apne liye woh ridaa chahataa hooN
Muzaffar yeh dunyaa fareb-e-naz^ar hai
maiN koee jahaaN dusraa chahataa hooN
Wassalam
Muzaffar A Muzaffar[/align]
Assalaam o alaikum
muzaffar bhai
kaisay haiN aap?
"jo le kar chale manZilooN se bhee aaGe
maiN aesaa koee rehnumaa chahataa hooN"
yuN tau saaray ash'aar hameN pasand aaye per quote kiya hua sher hameN bahut pasand aaya.
jaisay keh hum kayee baar pehlay bhi keh chukay haiN keh aap lafzoN kay maahir haiN.yeh aik munfarid fan hai.is khudaadaad fan ka istemaal aap bakhoobi kar rahay haiN.
mahay rawaaN kay micray per aapki taraf say pesh karda dau ghazleN bahut khoob haiN.
do ghazla nazar nawaaz huwaa. paRh kar dil khush huwaa. jab bhi aap ki koi TarHi ghazal paRhtaa hooN to aap ke shaandaar ashaar daikh kar aisaa lagtaa hai jaise ye zameen bohat aasaan hai. aor jab likhne baiThtaa hooN to khaali uz zehn reh jaataa hooN aor aik sher kehna bhi mushkil ho jaataa hai.
kaamyaab insaan woh hai jo pehchaan lay ki us ki SalaaHeeteN kyaa heN aor ye khoobi aap meN nazar aati hai. aap ko apni SalaaHeetoN ka na sirf bharpoor andaaza hai balke aap un ka bharpoor istemaal bhi karte heN.
in ashaar par khaSoosi daad qubool kijiaye.
jo le kar chale manZilooN se bhee aaGe
maiN aesaa koee rehnumaa chahataa hooN
koee raond de rehro-e-i'shQ mujh ko
hoN naQsh-e-kaf-e-paa miTaa chahataa hooN
koee Zakhm-e-dil phir neyaa cahataa hooN
maiN tajdeed-e-e'hd-e-wafaa chahataa hooN
"miree saadagee dekh kiyaa chahataa hooN"
dhuwaaN kar diyaa gardish-e-e'hed ne yooN
Zamaan-o-makaaN se uThaa chahataa hooN
Muzaffar yeh dunyaa fareb-e-naz^ar hai
maiN koee jahaaN dusraa chahataa hooN
Muzaffar Ahmad Muzaffar wrote:[align=center]Yaaraan-e-bazm-e-Urdubandhan aadaab-o-tasleemaat!
GuZarish#32 ke liye apne do GhazleeN pesh karne kee sa'adat HaaSil kar raha hooN. mujhe ummeed hai keh dost apnee apnee raY se mustafeed farmaeeN ge. aor khaadim kee HaoSlah afzaee karne meN taamal nah kareeN ge.
maiN tajdeed-e-e'hd-e-wafaa chahataa hooN
"miree saadagee dekh kiyaa chahataa hooN"
mareeZ^-e-muHabbat hooN meree maseeHaa
maiN Zakhm-e-jiGar kee dawaa chahataa hooN
nah de mujh ko pand-e-shakebaaee naaSeH
koee lamHah Sabr aaZmaa chchaataa hooN
shab-e-hijr be maot maraa geyaa hooN
ilahee maiN phir se baqaa chahataa hooN
dhuwaaN kar diyaa gardish-e-e'hed ne yooN
Zamaan-o-makaaN se uThaa chahataa hooN
muHabbat naheeN to e'dawat hee keeje!
maiN nafrat bhee had se siwaa chahataa hooN
Zamane kee naz^rooN se jo meHv kar de
maiN apne liye woh ridaa chahataa hooN
Muzaffar yeh dunyaa fareb-e-naz^ar hai
maiN koee jahaaN dusraa chahataa hooN
Wassalam
Muzaffar A Muzaffar[/align]
Assalaam o alaikum
muzaffar bhai
kaisay haiN aap?
"jo le kar chale manZilooN se bhee aaGe
maiN aesaa koee rehnumaa chahataa hooN"
yuN tau saaray ash'aar hameN pasand aaye per quote kiya hua sher hameN bahut pasand aaya.
jaisay keh hum kayee baar pehlay bhi keh chukay haiN keh aap lafzoN kay maahir haiN.yeh aik munfarid fan hai.is khudaadaad fan ka istemaal aap bakhoobi kar rahay haiN.
mahay rawaaN kay micray per aapki taraf say pesh karda dau ghazleN bahut khoob haiN.
do ghazla nazar nawaaz huwaa. paRh kar dil khush huwaa. jab bhi aap ki koi TarHi ghazal paRhtaa hooN to aap ke shaandaar ashaar daikh kar aisaa lagtaa hai jaise ye zameen bohat aasaan hai. aor jab likhne baiThtaa hooN to khaali uz zehn reh jaataa hooN aor aik sher kehna bhi mushkil ho jaataa hai.
kaamyaab insaan woh hai jo pehchaan lay ki us ki SalaaHeeteN kyaa heN aor ye khoobi aap meN nazar aati hai. aap ko apni SalaaHeetoN ka na sirf bharpoor andaaza hai balke aap un ka bharpoor istemaal bhi karte heN.
in ashaar par khaSoosi daad qubool kijiaye.
jo le kar chale manZilooN se bhee aaGe
maiN aesaa koee rehnumaa chahataa hooN
koee raond de rehro-e-i'shQ mujh ko
hoN naQsh-e-kaf-e-paa miTaa chahataa hooN
koee Zakhm-e-dil phir neyaa cahataa hooN
maiN tajdeed-e-e'hd-e-wafaa chahataa hooN
"miree saadagee dekh kiyaa chahataa hooN"
dhuwaaN kar diyaa gardish-e-e'hed ne yooN
Zamaan-o-makaaN se uThaa chahataa hooN
Muzaffar yeh dunyaa fareb-e-naz^ar hai
maiN koee jahaaN dusraa chahataa hooN
Aap kaa khulooS aor andaaz-e-pazeeraee aesaa hai keh ise bhulaaya naheeN jaa saktaa. khulooS-e-niyyat se niklaa huwaa har lafz^ sone chaandee se zeyadah Qeematee hotaa hai. Qudrat ne aap ko murawwat aor khulooS ke besh qeemat khaneenooN se nawaza hai. jise aap jitnaa laoTate haiN yeh aor baRhte jate haiN. miree dua'aa hai keh Allah aap ko jazaa-e-khaer se nawaze aor aap ko sehat-o-salamatee se nawaze Aameen!
maiN aap kee himmat afzaee be laoS muHabbat aor GiraaN qadr tabSirooN ke liye u'me bhar eHsaan mand rahooN gaa.
aor apnee dua'aooN meN bhee yaad rakhooN gaa.
Masha'Allah.... Aap ke TWINS bahut haseen o dilnasheen hain. India main ek mashoor film hai SHOLAY.. us main ek dialogue hai "Gabbar Singh Tum Ek Maaroge to Hum Teeen Maarenge"........ mujhe wahi dialogue yaad aa raha hai...... jaise aap khamosh zubaan se kah rahe hain.....
Armaan Tum Ek Ghazal Maaroge To Hum Ek Saath Do Do Ghazal Maarenge !!
Bahar-haal, Aap ki Dono Ghazal..... Ek hi sikke ke do pat ki tarah.... alag alag lab-o-lehze ke hain magar..... ek hi sikke ke hain (matlab ek hi shair ki takhleeq hain) to dono main...... bahut ziyaada eksaaniyat bhi hai..... aakhir Do Bahnon main samanata to hoti hi hai.
hai na?
Aap ka apna,
Munir Armaan
Iss Dil Main ARMAAN Bahut Hain
Ek Hai Ghar Mehmaan Bahut Hain
aap ki donoN ghazlaiN dekhiN aur dil khush ho gaya.
aap lafzoN kay jaduger haiN is ka pehlay bhi andaaza tha aur yahaN bhi is ka nazzarah kernay ko mila
waisay to tamam hi ashaar apni miCal aap haiN laikin hamid bhai ki terah mujhay bhi zail ka sher sab say ziada pasand aya
"jo le kar chale manZilooN se bhee aaGe
maiN aesaa koee rehnumaa chahataa hooN"
khush rehihay
faqt
sohail malik
moHtaram Sohil Malik SaaHib aadaab!
Ghazaliyaat kee pazeeraee aor himmat afzaee ke liye aap kaa mamnoon hooN.
aap kee daad meN jo khulooS us ke liye aap kaa eHsaan mand hooN.
Allah aap ko khush rakhe!
munir-armaan-nasimi wrote:Beradaram Muzaffar Saaheb,
Masha'Allah.... Aap ke TWINS bahut haseen o dilnasheen hain. India main ek mashoor film hai SHOLAY.. us main ek dialogue hai "Gabbar Singh Tum Ek Maaroge to Hum Teeen Maarenge"........ mujhe wahi dialogue yaad aa raha hai...... jaise aap khamosh zubaan se kah rahe hain.....
Armaan Tum Ek Ghazal Maaroge To Hum Ek Saath Do Do Ghazal Maarenge !!
Bahar-haal, Aap ki Dono Ghazal..... Ek hi sikke ke do pat ki tarah.... alag alag lab-o-lehze ke hain magar..... ek hi sikke ke hain (matlab ek hi shair ki takhleeq hain) to dono main...... bahut ziyaada eksaaniyat bhi hai..... aakhir Do Bahnon main samanata to hoti hi hai.
hai na?
Aap ka apna,
Munir Armaan
moHtaram Muneer SaaHib aadaab!
Aap ne kalam ko pasand farma kar khaadim kaa baRaa haoSlah baRhayaa hai.
meree dua'aa hai keh Allah aap ko khush rakhe. maiN is i'nayat ke liye aap kaa
baRaa mamnoon hooN.
Muzaffar Ahmad Muzaffar wrote:[align=center]Yaaraan-e-bazm-e-Urdubandhan aadaab-o-tasleemaat!
GuZarish#32 ke liye apne do GhazleeN pesh karne kee sa'adat HaaSil kar raha hooN. mujhe ummeed hai keh dost apnee apnee raY se mustafeed farmaeeN ge. aor khaadim kee HaoSlah afzaee karne meN taamal nah kareeN ge.
Ghazal#1
koee dost dard aashnaa chahataa hooN..................wah! sabhi ki yehi khwahish houti hai janaab bohat khoob!
"miree sadagee dekh kiyaa chahataa hooN"
mudawaa-e-bedaad-e-Hasrat yahee hai
tujhe rubaru dekhnaa chahataa hooN.............ahaaN !
jo le kar chale manZilooN se bhee aaGe
maiN aesaa koee rehnumaa chahataa hooN.........wah wah!! mil hi jayenge zara sabr
mujhe raas aaya nah hanGaam-e-meHfil
tire aastaaN se uThaa chahataa hooN................awwwwwwwwww!!
koee raond de rehro-e-i'shQ mujh ko
hoN naQsh-e-kaf-e-paa miTaa chahataa hooN..........arey nahi bhaiiii!!!
haiN be kaef see ZindaGee kee fiZ^aeeN
tiree AaNkh meN Doobna cahahataa hooN.............wow!! bohat gehri aankh chaahiye !!
nah de mujh ko pand-e-shakebaaee naaSeH
koee lamHah Sabr aaZmaa chchaataa hooN...........bohat khoob!
shab-e-hijr be maot maraa geyaa hooN
ilahee maiN phir se baqaa chahataa hooN............... bohat khoob!
dhuwaaN kar diyaa gardish-e-e'hed ne yooN
Zamaan-o-makaaN se uThaa chahataa hooN..........hmmmmmm
muHabbat naheeN to e'dawat hee keeje!
maiN nafrat bhee had se siwaa chahataa hooN........kya unho ne sunliya?
Zamane kee naz^rooN se jo meHv kar de
maiN apne liye woh ridaa chahataa hooN..............schi!
Muzaffar yeh dunyaa fareb-e-naz^ar hai
maiN koee jahaaN dusraa chahataa hooN..........kya baat hai!!
Wassalam
Muzaffar A Muzaffar[/align]
Mohtaram Muzaffar sahib,
tasleemaat!
bhai ye aapka hi hunar hai jo aek zameen mein do ya kabhi teen ghazlein
bhi likh dete hain aur sab hi ashaar bohat khoob kehte hain.
ooper mere mazaq ka bura na maaniyega bas kabhi kabhi hi mujhe sharaarat soojhti hai
dono ghazlon ke ashaar bohat khoob hain aur mujhe tou saare ashaar hi pasand aaye
meri dili daad qubool keejiye :rose .
sara
moHtarmah Saara JabeeN SaaHibah tasleemaat!
aap ne jis khulooS aor muHabbat se mere kalam par apne taacuraat kaa iz^haar kiya hai. us ke liye maiN aap kaa eHsaan mand hooN. Allah aap ko khush rakhe. kiyaa hee achchaa ho keh aap hameshah hee isee t^arH khaadim kee HaoSlah afzaee kartee raheeN.
.
bohat khoob!