Haazreen e meHfil
aadaab.
aik kaavish aapki khidmat maiN paish kar raha hoN. aaraa se navazye gaa.
safar maiN dhoop nah rastoN maiN saaybaan abhi
toh hum ney Theek se dekha nahi jahaan abhi
nigaah e naaz e takallum maiN koi baat nahiN
ye baat jaan gaya hai ye badgumaan abhi
abhi maiN kya? keh abhi aik Tifle maktab hoN
suKhan ka shoaq hai puKhtah kahaN bayaan abhi
tamaam raat sitaray thay aur nah chaand koi
so meri subha ka suraj hai badgumaan abhi
maiN apne aap se nikla nahiN kabhi baahir
HadeiN Uboor toh karta hai par gumaan abhi
falak ko ChoR diya tha kabhi zameeN keh liye
so mujh ko dekhta rehta hai aasmaan abhi
sitam toh ye hai keh jo aaiNah dikhata tha
yeh kya huwa ke wo karta hai badgumaan abhi
HuSool e naan o namak maiN hon isqadar maSroof
keh apne aap pe daita nahi maiN dhyaan abhi
Ajab nahiN woh kabhi HaaSil e suKhan tha SAMEER
woh jis ka naam bhi laiti nahi zubaan abhi
Taalib e duaa
M.Naeem SAMEER
Aik Ghazal
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[align=center]moHtaram M,N, sameer SaaHib aadaab!
Aap kee Ghazal dekhee. har miSra'h-o-she'er rooH parwar aor jaandaar hai. takhaiyuul baland hai. Zaor-e-kalam bhee khoob hai. asha'aar ko dekh kar aap kee khud aa'temadee kaa pataa miltaa hai. Allah kare Zaor-e-qalam aor zeyadah!
safar maiN dhoop nah rastoN maiN saaybaan abhi
toh hum ney Theek se dekha nahi jahaan abhi
Bohot khoob! Waah!
nigaah e naaz e takallum maiN koi baat nahiN
ye baat jaan gaya hai ye badgumaan abhi
Kiyaa kehne!
abhi maiN kya? keh abhi aik Tifle maktab hoN
suKhan ka shoaq hai puKhtah kahaN bayaan abhi
Bohot khoob! Waah!
tamaam raat sitaray thay aur nah chaand koi
so meri subha ka suraj hai badgumaan abhi
Waah Waah!
maiN apne aap se nikla nahiN kabhi baahir
HadeiN Uboor toh karta hai par gumaan abhi
Waah Waah!
falak ko ChoR diya tha kabhi zameeN keh liye
so mujh ko dekhta rehta hai aasmaan abhi
Waah waah!
sitam toh ye hai keh jo aaiNah dikhata tha
yeh kya huwa ke wo karta hai badgumaan abhi
Waah! Waah Waah!
HuSool e naan o namak maiN hon isqadar maSroof
keh apne aap pe daita nahi maiN dhyaan abhi
Kiyaa kehne!
Ajab nahiN woh kabhi HaaSil e suKhan tha SAMEER
woh jis ka naam bhi laiti nahi zubaan abhi
Kiyaa kehne waah!
meree dilee daad aor mubarak baad qubool keejiye!
Wassalam
Muzaffar A Muzaffar
bazm meN Aap kee maojudagee dil khush kun hai. tashreef late rahiye aor apne khubSurat kalam se mustafeed hone kaa maoqa'h faraham karte raheeN.
khush raheeN
Wassalam
Muzaffar A Muzaffar
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Aap kee Ghazal dekhee. har miSra'h-o-she'er rooH parwar aor jaandaar hai. takhaiyuul baland hai. Zaor-e-kalam bhee khoob hai. asha'aar ko dekh kar aap kee khud aa'temadee kaa pataa miltaa hai. Allah kare Zaor-e-qalam aor zeyadah!
safar maiN dhoop nah rastoN maiN saaybaan abhi
toh hum ney Theek se dekha nahi jahaan abhi
Bohot khoob! Waah!
nigaah e naaz e takallum maiN koi baat nahiN
ye baat jaan gaya hai ye badgumaan abhi
Kiyaa kehne!
abhi maiN kya? keh abhi aik Tifle maktab hoN
suKhan ka shoaq hai puKhtah kahaN bayaan abhi
Bohot khoob! Waah!
tamaam raat sitaray thay aur nah chaand koi
so meri subha ka suraj hai badgumaan abhi
Waah Waah!
maiN apne aap se nikla nahiN kabhi baahir
HadeiN Uboor toh karta hai par gumaan abhi
Waah Waah!
falak ko ChoR diya tha kabhi zameeN keh liye
so mujh ko dekhta rehta hai aasmaan abhi
Waah waah!
sitam toh ye hai keh jo aaiNah dikhata tha
yeh kya huwa ke wo karta hai badgumaan abhi
Waah! Waah Waah!
HuSool e naan o namak maiN hon isqadar maSroof
keh apne aap pe daita nahi maiN dhyaan abhi
Kiyaa kehne!
Ajab nahiN woh kabhi HaaSil e suKhan tha SAMEER
woh jis ka naam bhi laiti nahi zubaan abhi
Kiyaa kehne waah!
meree dilee daad aor mubarak baad qubool keejiye!
Wassalam
Muzaffar A Muzaffar
bazm meN Aap kee maojudagee dil khush kun hai. tashreef late rahiye aor apne khubSurat kalam se mustafeed hone kaa maoqa'h faraham karte raheeN.
khush raheeN
Wassalam
Muzaffar A Muzaffar
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Re: Aik Ghazal
================================================m.naeem.sameer wrote:Haazreen e meHfil
aadaab.
aik kaavish aapki khidmat maiN paish kar raha hoN. aaraa se navazye gaa.
safar maiN dhoop nah rastoN maiN saaybaan abhi
toh hum ney Theek se dekha nahi jahaan abhi
nigaah e naaz e takallum maiN koi baat nahiN
ye baat jaan gaya hai ye badgumaan abhi
abhi maiN kya? keh abhi aik Tifle maktab hoN
suKhan ka shoaq hai puKhtah kahaN bayaan abhi
tamaam raat sitaray thay aur nah chaand koi
so meri subha ka suraj hai badgumaan abhi
maiN apne aap se nikla nahiN kabhi baahir
HadeiN Uboor toh karta hai par gumaan abhi
falak ko ChoR diya tha kabhi zameeN keh liye
so mujh ko dekhta rehta hai aasmaan abhi
sitam toh ye hai keh jo aaiNah dikhata tha
yeh kya huwa ke wo karta hai badgumaan abhi
HuSool e naan o namak maiN hon isqadar maSroof
keh apne aap pe daita nahi maiN dhyaan abhi
Ajab nahiN woh kabhi HaaSil e suKhan tha SAMEER
woh jis ka naam bhi laiti nahi zubaan abhi
Taalib e duaa
M.Naeem SAMEER
moHtaram muZaffer Ahmed muZaffer SaaHib,
aadaab.
naa cheez ki Ghazal ko sarahnay ka bohat bohat shukriah! taQreeban 10 din say maiN aur meri Ghazal is bazm ka hiSSa hain lekin koi bhi reply nah aaney per bayHad mayuusii thi so aap nay woh kaCar puuri kar di, is keh liye banda bayHad mamnoon hail.
Tifl e maktab
M.Naeem Sameer
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=========================================================sonu wrote:MNS SAHEB
aap ki ghazal bahut pasand aai
Ajab nahiN woh kabhi HaaSil e suKhan tha SAMEER
woh jis ka naam bhi laiti nahi zubaan abhi
daad hazir hai sirf soun
Janab Sonu SaaHib.
aadaab.
Ghazal ki pazeeraaii keh liye bayHad mamnoon hoN. shukriyah.
mamnoon
Sameer
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