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moHtaram Mujahid SaaHib aadaab!
aap kee Ghazal dekhee kheyalaat achche haiN. aor aap bohot kuch kehne kaa jazbah bhee rakhte haiN. lekin jaesaa keh kalam ko dekh kar pataa chal raha hai keh aap ko shaae'ree ke qaae'de aor buniyaadee uSulooN se abhee aashnaee naheeN. meraa mashwarah yahee hai keh aap pehle in buniyaadee batooN ko bakhubee samajh leeN aor phir achchee t^arH taiyyaar ho kar maedaan-e-shaae'ree meN utreeN.
khush raheeN
Muzaffar A Muzaffar
aap kee Ghazal dekhee kheyalaat achche haiN. aor aap bohot kuch kehne kaa jazbah bhee rakhte haiN. lekin jaesaa keh kalam ko dekh kar pataa chal raha hai keh aap ko shaae'ree ke qaae'de aor buniyaadee uSulooN se abhee aashnaee naheeN. meraa mashwarah yahee hai keh aap pehle in buniyaadee batooN ko bakhubee samajh leeN aor phir achchee t^arH taiyyaar ho kar maedaan-e-shaae'ree meN utreeN.
khush raheeN
Muzaffar A Muzaffar