guzarish #35

[mujahid]

salam

[Muzaffar Ahmad Muzaffar]

Biradaram Mujahid saaHib tasleemaat!

t^arhee musha'rah mah-e-rawaN ke liye jahaaN deegar SaaHibaan-e-qalam apna jaohar-o-taaceer-e-qalam kaa muz^aahirah kar rahe haiN wahaaN aap kee yeh shaandar Ghazal bhee apne kamal meN kam naheeN. khubSurat asha'aar aor kohnah kheyaalee Ghazal ko jilaa bakhshtee hai. aor bafaZ^l-e-khuda aap ke haaN yeh donooN maHaasin-e-Ghazal maojood haiN. meree jaanib se is dilkash Ghazal par dilee daad qubool keejiye.

Ghazal kaa maqt^a' kaa dusra miSra' khaarij az beher ho geyaa hai. aek mumkinah Surat marqoom-al-zael hai.

"Woh sanG dil kabhee aajae gar manane ko"

khush raheeN
Wassalam
Muzaffar A Muzaffar

[mujahid]

nahii.n diya tha tujhe dil mera jalaane ko
ye dil diya tha tujhe sirf aazmaane ko

wah! kya kehne!!

sitam zamaana agar Dhaaye hum diwaano per
chalei.n ke hum bhi zara dekh le.n zamaane ko

bohat khoob!

abhi abhi hi qadam ishq mein jamaya tha
ke saare log jama hougaye sataane ko

acha!

mere khayaalon mein rehta tha voh khamoshi se
"na jaane kaise khabar hougayii zamaane ko"

bohat ache! girah pasand aayi.

main tishna lab hoon mujhe jaam se nahi peena
nazar uTha ke zara dekh mai pilaane ko

bohat khoob!! nazron mein tasweer bangayi is shair ko paRhte hi.

khuda kare ke :Mujahid: ki laaj rah jaaye
voh sangdil kabhii aa jaaye gar manaane ko

wah wah!

mujahid sahib,

mujhe aapki ghazal dekh ker bohat khushi hui

aur is baar ghazal ke sab hi ashaar mujhe bohat

pasand aaye. dili daad aur mubarakbaad qubool keejiye.

sara

saraa ji ghazal pasand karnay aur hosla afzaai k liyee bohot bohot shukria

[waQaar]

mujaahid SaaHeb,

saadah aur khoobSoorat kalaam per daad qubool kee jiYay!

waQaar :)

[haamidbaaqri]

salam

wa alaikumussalaam
mujahid saahib

masha allah

bahut khoob

is dilkash ghazal per hamaari dilee daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayeN

allah(sbhnwt)karay zoray qalam aur ziyaadah

mukhlis
haamidbaaqari