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tarhi mushaaira #37 k liyee aik koshish hazir-e-khidmuth hai

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salam
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wah bahut khoob mujahid sahab!

Koi pooche humse hamaari haalat ka sabab
to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai

Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
Na Gham jaata hai na khushi aati hai
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Pur tarannum sa mahaul hone laga
jaise jaise hi woh yaad aane lage

wah janab aap ki Ghazal pasaNd aayee. Mundraja bala sher KhaS taur per ahccha laga.
Daad qubool farmaaiye.

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moHtaram Mujahid SaaHib tasleemaat! :-)

Mushae'rah meN aap kee shumuliyat baae'c-e-iftekhaar hai. aap kaa mamnoon hooN keh aap baaqae'dagee se in adabee maHafil meN shirkat farma kar mamnoon farmate haiN.

aap kee t^arhee Ghazal har aa'tebaar se laai'q-e-daad hai. bohot khubSurat she'er kahe haiN. sabhee she'er dilkash aor makhSooS andaaz-e-bayaaN liye huwe haiN. zeyaadah tar rujHaan taGhazzul kee jaanib hai. aor yahee Ghazal kaa rawatee Husn bhee hai. jazbah-e-eecaar bhee numayaaN aor Saaf dekhaa jaa saktaa hai.

mujheY ummeed hai keh aap she'r-o-naGhmah se apnaa rishtah ustuwaar rakhte huweY yooN hee in maHaafil meN shirkat farmate huwe apnee aa'laa nigaarishaat se ham sab ko mustafeed farmate raheeN geY.

khush raheeN
Wassalam
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Re: tarhi mushaaira #37 k liyee aik koshish hazir-e-khidmuth

Post by haamidbaaqri »

mujahid wrote:salam
wa alaikumussalaam
mohtaram mujaahid saahib

mushiray meiN aapki peshkardah ghazal hameN bahut pasand aayee

hamaari dilee daad qubool farmaayeN is khoobsoorat ghazal per

allah(sbhnwt) karay zoray qalam aur ziyaadah

mukhlis

haamidbaaqari
mai.n to karta nahi.n kuch aur ebaadat ke siwa
paas mere nahi.n kuch aur mohabbat ke siwa
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