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aap ko konsaa she'r ziyaadah pasand aayaa ?

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Haazireen-e-maHfil !
assalaamOa'laikum


aaj aik "dilchasp intikhaab" ke saath Haazir-e-khidmat hooN -mandarajah zail ash.'aar meN se aik "Meer taqee Meer " kaa hay aur aik "Mirzaa Saudaa " kaa yaa yooN kahye keh aik "Mirzaa Saudaa " kaa hay aur aik "Meer taqee Meer " kaa :-) baHr, zameen , aur khayaal aik hi heN agar judaa heN to sirf alfaaZ' , yeh dilchasp Soorat-e-Haal nah jaanay sarqah hay keh tawaarud ,,mulaaHiZ'ah farmaaiye-



1-chaman meN gul ne jo kal da'waa-e-jamaal kiyaa
jamaal-e-yaar ne muNh us kaa khoob laal kiyaa



2-baraabaree kaa tire gul ne jab khayaal kiyaa
Sabaa ne maar thapaiRaa muNh us kaa laal kiyaa





chunaao (POLL) meN HiSSah lay kar apnee pasandeedagee kaa iZ'haar kareN - inshaaAllah aakhir meN bataa dooN gaa keh konsaa she'r kis kaa hay 8)
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Mokarami Yasir Saheb,
:salaam:
Mujeh pehla sheir bohat pasand ayaa.
سالم احمد باشوار
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aap kaa bahut shukriyah Saaraa bahan aur Sabshwar SaaHib !
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Janab Yasir SaHeb,

kiyaa ashaar par comments daine ki bhi ijaazat hai?
Muhammad K. Siddiqui.
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Khaawar SaaHib !

tabSirah keejiye .. Zaroor keejiye


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Shukriyaa Yasir Sb,

Darasal meiN ne doosre sha'er pasand kiyaa thaa. aor meiN chahtaa thaa ke meiN us ki wajaa bhi bayaan kar dooN.

Jub meiN ne pehli baar donoaN sha'er paRhay to pehlay hamlay meiN mujhe pehlaa sha'er bohat pasand aayaa. phir meiN ne ghor kiyaa toa pataa chalaa ke soora sha'er bohat buland hai oar pehlaa sha'er us ka kissi bhi taraH muqabilaa naheeN kartaa (maire nazdeek oar is se kissi ka ittefaaq karnaa bil kul bhi zaroori naheeN.). doosra misRa Haqeeqat ke zyaadaa qareeb hai.

daikhiaye pehlaa msiraa, par ghor karte haiN

1-chaman meN gul ne jo kal da'waa-e-jamaal kiyaa
jamaal-e-yaar ne muNh us kaa khoob laal kiyaa


agar gul daawaa e jamaal kartaa hai kia buraa hai? kya us ke jamaal se inkaar hai? haaN agar jamaal yaar ki barabari ki baat ho to phir aitraaz barHaq hai jaisa ke doosre sha'er meiN bayaan kiyaa gyaa hai. daikhiaye.


2-baraabaree kaa tire gul ne jab khayaal kiyaa
Sabaa ne maar thapaiRaa muNh us kaa laal kiyaa


iss taraH ab doosre miSra par aa-i-aye,

1-chaman meN gul ne jo kal da'waa-e-jamaal kiyaa
jamaal-e-yaar ne muNh us kaa khoob laal kiyaa

jamaal e yaar ne muNh laal kiyaa aik khoobSoorat khyaal hai laikin ghuloo hai. doosri taraf daikhiaye khyaal ki khoobSoorti ko haqeetan rang meiN barqaraar rakhaa gayaa hai.

2-baraabaree kaa tire gul ne jab khayaal kiyaa
Sabaa ne maar thapaiRaa muNh us kaa laal kiyaa


iss tarz par sochte huway mujhe doosraa sha'er zydaa pasand aayaa.


dua'aa goa,
Muhamamd K. Siddiqui.
Muhammad K. Siddiqui.
+92 321 4435273

938-C-Faisal Town, Lahore.
Pakistan.
+92 42 111516516
muhammad_19k@hotmail.com
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muhammad_19k wrote:Shukriyaa Yasir Sb,

Darasal meiN ne doosre sha'er pasand kiyaa thaa. aor meiN chahtaa thaa ke meiN us ki wajaa bhi bayaan kar dooN.

Jub meiN ne pehli baar donoaN sha'er paRhay to pehlay hamlay meiN mujhe pehlaa sha'er bohat pasand aayaa. phir meiN ne ghor kiyaa toa pataa chalaa ke soora sha'er bohat buland hai oar pehlaa sha'er us ka kissi bhi taraH muqabilaa naheeN kartaa (maire nazdeek oar is se kissi ka ittefaaq karnaa bil kul bhi zaroori naheeN.). doosra misRa Haqeeqat ke zyaadaa qareeb hai.

daikhiaye pehlaa msiraa, par ghor karte haiN

1-chaman meN gul ne jo kal da'waa-e-jamaal kiyaa
jamaal-e-yaar ne muNh us kaa khoob laal kiyaa


agar gul daawaa e jamaal kartaa hai kia buraa hai? kya us ke jamaal se inkaar hai? haaN agar jamaal yaar ki barabari ki baat ho to phir aitraaz barHaq hai jaisa ke doosre sha'er meiN bayaan kiyaa gyaa hai. daikhiaye.


2-baraabaree kaa tire gul ne jab khayaal kiyaa
Sabaa ne maar thapaiRaa muNh us kaa laal kiyaa


iss taraH ab doosre miSra par aa-i-aye,

1-chaman meN gul ne jo kal da'waa-e-jamaal kiyaa
jamaal-e-yaar ne muNh us kaa khoob laal kiyaa

jamaal e yaar ne muNh laal kiyaa aik khoobSoorat khyaal hai laikin ghuloo hai. doosri taraf daikhiaye khyaal ki khoobSoorti ko haqeetan rang meiN barqaraar rakhaa gayaa hai.

2-baraabaree kaa tire gul ne jab khayaal kiyaa
Sabaa ne maar thapaiRaa muNh us kaa laal kiyaa


iss tarz par sochte huway mujhe doosraa sha'er zydaa pasand aayaa.


dua'aa goa,
Muhamamd K. Siddiqui.


muHtaram Khaawar SaaHib !

aap kaa zaawiyah-e-nigaah bulaNd hay kyooNkeh aazaad hay ,, albattah isay mazeed wusa't dee jaa saktee hay -

aap kaa taqaabalee jaaizah doosray she'r ki infiraadiyat ki Had tak mujhay pasand aayaa-

daiKhiye ,, auroN ki kyaa raa.ay hay is baaray meN -



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hamne bhi vote dediya ahai aur jaan ker hushe ehuee keh ham ne theek faiSla kiyaa :grin: :rose
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