dosto! salam qubool kijiye
aaj phir Jahuhar Sahab ke chund ashAAr yaad aaye haiN magar
is baar mukammal ghazal nahiN bhej sakta jis ke lie maAzrat
Khuwaah hooN. ummid hai in ashAAr ko pasaNd farmayeNge
aur apni aara se nawazeNge.
aapka apna,
Jawaid Badauni
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Jawaid sahab aadaab
in ash'aar ke liye bhii be-shaakhtaa muNh se wa..h hii nikaltii hai....kyaa khoob ash'aar kahe haiN ''Jauhar'' sahab ne....ab to inkaa aour bhii kalaam paRh ne kii tamanna baRhtii jaatii hai...ummiid hai aap jald hii inke maziid kalam se bhii roo-b-roo karvaayeiNge....
bahut-bahut shukriyaah janaab
nachiiz
balvinder
in ash'aar ke liye bhii be-shaakhtaa muNh se wa..h hii nikaltii hai....kyaa khoob ash'aar kahe haiN ''Jauhar'' sahab ne....ab to inkaa aour bhii kalaam paRh ne kii tamanna baRhtii jaatii hai...ummiid hai aap jald hii inke maziid kalam se bhii roo-b-roo karvaayeiNge....
bahut-bahut shukriyaah janaab
nachiiz
balvinder
mazhab koii lauTaale, aour uskii jagah de de
tahziib saliike kii, insaan qariine ke
tahziib saliike kii, insaan qariine ke
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Dear Balvinder Ji,balvinder wrote:Jawaid sahab aadaab
in ash'aar ke liye bhii be-shaakhtaa muNh se wa..h hii nikaltii hai....kyaa khoob ash'aar kahe haiN ''Jauhar'' sahab ne....ab to inkaa aour bhii kalaam paRh ne kii tamanna baRhtii jaatii hai...ummiid hai aap jald hii inke maziid kalam se bhii roo-b-roo karvaayeiNge....
bahut-bahut shukriyaah janaab
nachiiz
balvinder
Kahte haiN heere ki qadr sirf jauhree hi jaanta hai. aap ne in ashAAr per apni aara bheji mujhe bohat achcha laga warnah aaj tak yeh yahaN "un-noticed" hi paRe thEy. Bohat bohat shukriya. aap ki Khidmat meN :Jauhar: SaHab ka mazeed kalam jald hi irsaal karooNga.
Khoosh raheN!
apka apna
Jawaid