kese mizaaj haiN? ummeed hai kheriyat se hooN gee. meHfil meN tashreef aawaree ke liye teh-e-dil se mamnoon hooN.
aap kee Ghazal chand dinooN pehle dekh lee thee. sochaa keh deegar dost iz^haar-e-kheyaal farmaa leeN. to maiN kuch a'rZ^ karooN. mashAllah bohot khubSurat aor dilkash Ghazal hai. aap ne baRee saadagee se apne maa fee Z^ameer ko asha'aar kaa roop diya hai. mujheY sabhee asha'aar dil-o-jaan se pasand aae haiN. so meree jaanib se dilee daad aor mubarak baad qubool keejiye.
mujheY ummed hai keh aap yooN hee meHfil meN tashreef laa kar hamaree HaoSliah afzaee farmatee raheeN gee. is meN shubah naheeN hai keh yeh meHfil aap aesee abad nawaaz shakhSiyaat se aabaad hai.
behud mukammal aur murassah ghazal kahee hai aap ne. beHud meHnat ki hai
yaqeenan daad ki Haqdaar haiN aap. meri janib se daad qubool farmaaiyega.
Mundarjah zel sher ke Hawale se kuch Arz karna chaahta hooN:
nahiN dhaRkan kabhi rooktii kabhi tou sun too ai Zalim
SadayeN tum ko dil deta raha hao koo ba koo barsoN
mundarjah bala sher meN aap ne pahle misre meN apne mehboob
ko "tou" kah kar muKhatib kiya hai ab doosrey miSrey meN "Tum ko deta raha"
hai nahiN kah saktee haiN. Is aib ko suKhan men shutar Gurbah ka naam diya
gaya hai. aap ko doosrey misrey meN bhi "SadayeN TUJH ko dil deta raha hai"
hi kahna hoga. mujhe Hairat hai mujh se qabl tabsarah karne walon ki nazar is
per kyuuNker nah gaii! baharHal mera e'traz baraye tAAmeer hai baraye e'traaz nahiN.
ummid hai aaindah bhi apne kalam se in mushairoN ki zeenat meN izafah farmayeNgee.