Aik ghazal

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Aik ghazal

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Azizan-e- Mahfil Aadab

Urdu Bandhan ke bazan phle murtaba hazir hoo rahe hoon aik ghazal ke saath tawajah farmiyie ga bohat shukriya
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Jee rahee hoon ke mar gaaie hoon meiN
Reza reza bikhar gaie hoon meiN

Tan-e- tanha hoon reegzarooN mein
KarwaaN se bichar gaie hoon meiN

Khuaab jab se hooie heiN dariya burd
Sahiloon se bhee dar gaie hoon meiN

Garme_a-shoouq ab naheiN baqee
mujamid hoon thithar gaie hoon meiN

malgijee hoo gaie hein sab mazar
dhudlakooN meiN ottaar gaie hoon meiN
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Re: Aik ghazal

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moHtarmah Rafat SaaHibah aadaab!

Aap kee Ghazal dilkashee aor khubSuratee meN apna jawaab aap hai. sabhee asha'aar dil ko chu gae haiN. meree jaanib se dilee daad aor mubarak baad qubool keejiye.



Jee rahee hoon ke mar gaaie hoon meiN
Reza reza bikhar gaie hoon meiN

Tan-e- tanha hoon reegzarooN mein
KarwaaN se bichar gaie hoon meiN

Khuaab jab se hooie heiN dariya burd
Sahiloon se bhee dar gaie hoon meiN

Garme_a-shoouq ab naheiN baqee
mujamid hoon thithar gaie hoon meiN

malgijee hoo gaie hein sab mazar
dhudlakooN meiN ottaar gaie hoon meiN
Azizan-e- Mahfil Aadab

Urdu Bandhan ke bazan phle murtaba hazir hoo rahe hoon aik ghazal ke saath tawajah farmiyie ga bohat shukriya
rafat

Jee rahee hoon ke mar gaaie hoon meiN
Reza reza bikhar gaie hoon meiN

Tan-e- tanha hoon reegzarooN mein
KarwaaN se bichar gaie hoon meiN

Khuaab jab se hooie heiN dariya burd
Sahiloon se bhee dar gaie hoon meiN

Garme_a-shoouq ab naheiN baqee
mujamid hoon thithar gaie hoon meiN

malgijee hoo gaie hein sab mazar
dhudlakooN meiN ottaar gaie hoon meiN


ummeed hai meHfil meN tashreef laatee raheeN gee.

Wassalam
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moHtarmah Rafat SaaHibah,
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muKhtaSar magar nihayat Gair riwayatee Ghazal se nawazah hai aap ne. behud munfarid aur dishwaar qawafee ke istaimal ne Ghazal ko aur bhi dilkuch bana diya hai. meri daad quabool farmaaiye.

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Azizan-e- Mohtaram
Aadab
Aap sab ke huslaafzie keliye behad momnoon hoon
Aap ne mere nachez kawish ko sarraha ic izzatafzaie keleiye mashkoor hoon
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Mohtaramah Rafat Saahiba
:salaam:

Khush-amdeed urdubandhan par.
Ghazal umad hai. Yeh sheir zyada pasand ayaa:

Tan-e- tanha hoon reegzarooN mein
KarwaaN se bichar gaie hoon meiN
سالم احمد باشوار
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Re: Aik ghazal

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Mohtaram sbashwar Sahib
Ghazal ke pasandeedge aur husla afzaie ke liye bohat mashkoor hoon
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