manzil agar nahin hay koi raasta to ho
apnay bhataktay rehnay ka ik silsila to ho
mayri talaash main karay khud ko koi talaash
mayri tara say khud ko koi dhoondta to ho
us ka wisaal mojzay sy kum sahi magar
is mojzay sy barh k koi mojza to ho
main ik charaagh aur too khushboo bhari hawa
phir bhi main chaahta hoon tera saamna to ho
jo mil chuka hy kho k usay phir karain talaash
jeewan guzaarnay ka koi mashghala to ho
hum bhi zaroor laut k ghar jaain shaam ko
laykin hamari raah koi daykhta to ho
raasta to ho
Moderator: Muzaffar Ahmad Muzaffar
raasta to ho
sukhanwar forum
http://sukhanwar.proboards100.com/index.cgi?
http://sukhanwar.proboards100.com/index.cgi?
-
- -
- Posts: 1258
- Joined: Sun Feb 12, 2006 1:40 pm
- Location: London, England
- Contact:
Re: raasta to ho
moHtaram Poetrazi SaaHib tasleemaat!
kese mizaaj haiN. meHfil meN ek khubSurat Ghazal ke saath tashreef aawaree ke liye mamnoon hooN.
nihayat dilkash kalam hai. sabhee asha'aar meN nudrat-e-bayaaN kee aesee khubSurat mucaaleeN haiN keh dil khush ho geyaa. Z^aroorat hai keh aesee takhleeqee kawishooN kee daaGh bel Daalee jae.
manzil agar nahin hay koi raasta to ho
apnay bhataktay rehnay ka ik silsila to ho
Waah Waah!
mayri talaash main karay khud ko koi talaash
mayri tara say khud ko koi dhoondta to ho
Kiya kehne! Waah!
us ka wisaal mojzay sy kum sahi magar
is mojzay sy barh k koi mojza to ho
Waah!
main ik charaagh aur too khushboo bhari hawa
phir bhi main chaahta hoon tera saamna to ho
Kiya kehne Waah Wah!
jo mil chuka hy kho k usay phir karain talaash
jeewan guzaarnay ka koi mashghala to ho
Waah Waah!
hum bhi zaroor laut k ghar jaain shaam ko
laykin hamari raah koi daykhta to ho
Bohot khoob! Waah!
meree jaanib se dilee daad aor mubarak baad qubool keejiye.
Wassalam
Muzaffar A Muzaffar
kese mizaaj haiN. meHfil meN ek khubSurat Ghazal ke saath tashreef aawaree ke liye mamnoon hooN.
nihayat dilkash kalam hai. sabhee asha'aar meN nudrat-e-bayaaN kee aesee khubSurat mucaaleeN haiN keh dil khush ho geyaa. Z^aroorat hai keh aesee takhleeqee kawishooN kee daaGh bel Daalee jae.
manzil agar nahin hay koi raasta to ho
apnay bhataktay rehnay ka ik silsila to ho
Waah Waah!
mayri talaash main karay khud ko koi talaash
mayri tara say khud ko koi dhoondta to ho
Kiya kehne! Waah!
us ka wisaal mojzay sy kum sahi magar
is mojzay sy barh k koi mojza to ho
Waah!
main ik charaagh aur too khushboo bhari hawa
phir bhi main chaahta hoon tera saamna to ho
Kiya kehne Waah Wah!
jo mil chuka hy kho k usay phir karain talaash
jeewan guzaarnay ka koi mashghala to ho
Waah Waah!
hum bhi zaroor laut k ghar jaain shaam ko
laykin hamari raah koi daykhta to ho
Bohot khoob! Waah!
meree jaanib se dilee daad aor mubarak baad qubool keejiye.
Wassalam
Muzaffar A Muzaffar
Re: raasta to ho
Aadaab, Razi SaaHib!
aap ki ghazal bahut pasand aayi, daad qubool kijiye!
Anmol
aap ki ghazal bahut pasand aayi, daad qubool kijiye!
Anmol
My Poetry Website>> http://www.tanhaa.net/anmol
A site for Raj Kumar Sahib>> http://rk-qais.bravehost.com
A site for Raj Kumar Sahib>> http://rk-qais.bravehost.com
-
- -
- Posts: 96
- Joined: Thu Mar 20, 2008 8:23 am
Re: raasta to ho
muHtaram Jb. Razi Sb
salaam o raHmah
ek achhee or dilkash Ghazal par daad qabool farmaayeN
wassalaam
Khurshidul Hasan Naiyer
salaam o raHmah
ek achhee or dilkash Ghazal par daad qabool farmaayeN
wassalaam
Khurshidul Hasan Naiyer