hay chorr k jana... Aik ghazal

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hay chorr k jana... Aik ghazal

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Mohtram Ahl-e-ilmo Danish Dosto, Asslam u Alikum,
apni aik ghazal pesh kar raha hoon, jo sa mahi qirtaas mein bhi chupp chuki hai, aap kee qeemti aara kaintezaar rahay ga,
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Re: hay chorr k jana... Aik ghazal

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moHtaram A'teeq ur ReHman Safi SaaHib tasleemaat!

kise mizaaj haiN? Aap kee Ghazal firdoos-e-naz^ar huee. kiya kehne bohot khubee se aap ne radeef :mukammal: ko nibhaaya hai gaoyaa is radeef kaa mukammal Haq ada kar diya hai.

meree jaanib se is khubSurat aor munfarid Ghazal kee ishaa'at par dilee daad aor mubarak baad qubool keejiye.

Wassalam
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Re: hay chorr k jana... Aik ghazal

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Mohtram Muzaffar Ahmad Muzaffar saheb, AADAAB,
MEIN AAP KEE MOHABAT AUR HOSLA AFZAI KA TEH-E-DIL SAY SHUKAR GUZAR HOON.
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Muzaffar Ahmad Muzaffar wrote:moHtaram A'teeq ur ReHman Safi SaaHib tasleemaat!

kise mizaaj haiN? Aap kee Ghazal firdoos-e-naz^ar huee. kiya kehne bohot khubee se aap ne radeef :mukammal: ko nibhaaya hai gaoyaa is radeef kaa mukammal Haq ada kar diya hai.

meree jaanib se is khubSurat aor munfarid Ghazal kee ishaa'at par dilee daad aor mubarak baad qubool keejiye.

Wassalam
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