PAHLI GHAZAL

[akhtaranjum]

Ahl-e-bazm ko adaab!

maiN pahli ghazal kay sath hazir hooN...

[Mahtab Qadr]

Janab Akhtar sahib salaam e masnoon

Ghazal nazarnawaz huvi, matla baraye matla hai. dosra sher khoob hai, khateeb e shahr wala sher bhi khoob hai, aur kabhi thi rukh pe nadamat bahut umdah hai, maqta bhi pasand aaya.
shukria
Mahtab Qadr

[munir-armaan-nasimi]

Ahl-e-bazm ko adaab!

maiN pahli ghazal kay sath hazir hooN...

Mohtaram Janab Akhtar Anjum Saaheb... Bazm-e-Urdu-Bandhan main aap ka tah-e-dil se khair maqdam karta hoon aur ummeed karta hoon keh aap esi tarah aate rahenge aur apni behtareen kavishoN se nawazte rahenge.

Aapki Ghazal behad pasand aayi....... Daad hazir hai. Khaas kar yeh sher.......

میری حیات کے کچھ روز و شب بھی ایسے ہیں
نہ مجح سے رویا گیا اور نہ مسکرایا گیا

Mujhe yaqeen hai keh na sirf aapke balki hum main se aksar logoN ka bhi yahi haal hoga.

Masha'Allah... behad pyara sher hai... Alla'h kar zor-e-qalam aur ziyadah...!!

Khair-andesh

Munir Armaan

[jawaid badauni]

Ahl-e-bazm ko adaab!

maiN pahli ghazal kay sath hazir hooN...

Masha Allah, "Sahar khud hi bata deti hai runge sham kya hoga..mire aaGaaz se poocho mira anjaam kya hoga."

aap ki ghazal bahut achchi lagee. maTley ne KhuSuusan bahut mota'Assir kiya. meri daad aur mubarakbaad qubool farmaaiye.

MuKhliS

Jawaid Badauni

[aabarqi]

Akhtar Anjum ki bahut purkaif hai" PAHLI GHAZAL"
jiske padhne se dil e muztar gaya mera BAHAL

Hain tamaam ash'aar iske mazhar e soz e Duroon
Gardish e haalaat par jo tabserah hain Barmahal

Ahmad Ali Barqi Azmi
aabarqi.blogspot.com

[Ehtesham Anwar]

Akhtar Anjum shb kia kahnay haiN

etni khobsurat ghazal ki meri janib se dherooN daad qabool fermaiN

aur haan janab Munir Armaan shb se pochna tha kay,

senior kay liay zoray qalam aur zayada hoo.... (ye dua nahi balkay tanz hojata hay)

Khaiandaesh,
Ehtesham Anwar

[akhtaranjum]

Akhtar Anjum ki bahut purkaif hai" PAHLI GHAZAL"
jiske padhne se dil e muztar gaya mera BAHAL

Hain tamaam ash'aar iske mazhar e soz e Duroon
Gardish e haalaat par jo tabserah hain Barmahal
Ahmad Ali Barqi Azmi
aabarqi.blogspot.com

janaab AA BARQI AZMI sahib adaab!
gazal aapko pasans aayi yaqinan ye aapkay husnay nazar ka kamaal hay warna ghazal itni khoobsurat kahaaN
janaab barqi sahib aapki khidmat maiN aik she'r

ik umr iztiraab-e-musalsal maiN kat gayee
baithay kaheeN na uth'kay teraiy saNge'dar say ham

khair andaish
akhtar anjum

[akhtaranjum]

jawaid badauni"][quote="akhtaranjum"]Ahl-e-bazm ko adaab!

maiN pahli ghazal kay sath hazir hooN...




janaab jawaid badauni sahib taslimaat!
aapki daad nay himmat ko aor baland kiya agar ehl-e-bazm isii tarha sarah'tay rahay tao inshaa'allah daosari ghazal bahi bohut jald aapkay saamnay hogi
aapki khidmat maiN dao ash'aar..

ham say aawara-o-badhaal zamaanay bhar maiN
kisko daitay haiN sada aapko maloom nahiN..

apnay anjaam kay baray maiN khabar hay hamko
apna anjaam hay kia aapko maloom anhiN..
wassa'laam
KKHTAR ANJUM

[sbashwar]

Mohtaram Akhtar Anjum Saheb


Sabse pehle main iss bazm mein dili isteqbal karta houn.
Kya kehne, bohat hi umda ghazal kahi aapne. har sheir alehida alehida daad ke qabil hai. khateeb-e-shehr.... bohat khoob.

Meri daad aur mubarakbaad qubool farmaye.

Khush-amdeed
Aapka muhlis
Salem Bashwar

[akhtaranjum]

muhtaram janaab saleem bashwar sahib adaab!
aapki daad nay mairi himmat bandhaayii aap jaisay she'r fehm adab daosat hazraat agar kisi ko daad dayiN tao wo ik sanad hay urdu bandhan ka ho sakta hay keh ah'qar mustaqil member bhi ho jai
mairi taraf say salaam qubool ho
aur dhairoN duaai'eiN aapkao aor ahbaab-e-bazm ko
mukhlis
Akhtar Anjum

[akhtaranjum]

muhtarmi ehttesham anwer adaab!
janaab nay ghazal paRhi tabsara farmaya shukria
ghazal ki pasan'deedgi ka bhi shukria qubool farmayie umeed hay aayinda bhi mairi ghzal par tabsara farmaayiNgay
duaa go
AKHTAR ANJUM

[akhtaranjum]

JANAAB MUNIR ARMAAN SAHIB ADAAB !
aapnay ghazal ki taa'reef maiN jo kuch kaha ACCHA KAHA hay
daad dainay ka bay'had shukria
duaa'go
AKHTAR ANJUM

[akhtaranjum]

janaab mahtaab qdr sahib slaam!
mairi ghazal aapko pasand aayi aor aapnay iska izhaar bohut mahabbat aur khuloos say kia
jazaak allah
shukria

AKHTAR ANJUM