غزل : لوٹ آنا

Kuhnah mashq ShoAraa kaa kalaam jo beHr meiN hounaa zaroori hei

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غزل : لوٹ آنا

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Mohtaram Dr. Ahmed Ali Baarqi Saheb
:salaam:

Ghazal sunaon mein kisko humdam ke meri jan ghazal tumhein ho
dubara wo nagma-e-mohabbat jo yaad aaye to laut aanaa

Kya kehne. Aapka ghazal ka har sheir qabil-e-daad hai.
Meri daad qubool farmaye.

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moHtaram Barqi SaaHib aadaab-o-tasleemaat!

Aap kee Ghazal ne aesaa acar chooRa hai. keh kuch der ke liye maiN sarmastee aor kaef kee aesee feZ^aa meN gum ho geyaa keh waqa'ee khabar nah rahee. asha'aar kee dilkashee aor ra'naee ne Zaoq-e-mut^alea'ah ka bharpoor samaan muhayyaa kiya. sabhe asha'aar apne rawanee aor barjastagee meN apnaa caanee naheeN rakhte. us par Zameen itnee dilkash ya'nee beHer-e-mutaqarib maqbooZ^ aclam muZ^aai'f muntakhib kee gaee hai keh jee khush ho geyaa. aor aek shaandaar takhleeq manaSSah-e-shahood par aagaee. Kiya kehne!

meree jaanib se is khubSurat shahkaar par dilee daad aor mubarak baad qubool keejiye.
Wassalam
Muzaffar AHmad
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